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Egungun Festival Togo, Africa

Long have me feet walked..bare upon de earth of mother Afreeca. Days, passing in a flow’r chain round de brow of de morn. De sacred drum calls wid de heart beattin of de Hougan’s soul Afreeca’s soul ... Long, long, de walkin from village mounta’n citie to the hounfour ... de temple of de people. We walk joy’us, and penit’nt and pleadin‘. Mama carries de food gift fer Ogou Balanjo on her head, corn meal she ‘as ground fine. "Ah, de poor sick child" De glass beads aroun‘ Mama’s neck shine like her tears in de sun an de sweat on her skin. We ‘ear de rattlin‘ and de drummin. Dust of de many feet rises. 'undreds and thousands of worshipers pack de square in front of de temple and dance red, gold, orange swirl honorin‘ our parents and der parents. Long, long, we dance, we dance, and de Loa arrive ... Mama falls possessed by Ogou Balanjo ... De white robes of de pure at heart, and does wid de white faces dance de prayers, de priests returns from de sacred grove white rock, egg white of wealth and happiness de year will be good ... de sick child will heal ... Long, long, the world has spun in a daisy chain Around de sun............

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Date: 8/26/2014 10:37:00 PM
The lingo and culture of Afreeca reflects in the write, Deb. Congrats. Light and Love
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Date: 8/26/2014 6:01:00 PM
Debbie, this was a nice, free flowing Ebonics and I enjoyed your linking it to cultural context of Africa. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 8/26/2014 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved top placement in this contest! Enjoyed reading this fun piece! Pandita
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Date: 8/26/2014 12:41:00 PM
Well done for the contest Debbie... Congratulations on such high marks... Verlena
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Date: 3/14/2011 8:12:00 PM
wow, this is amazing, Deb, and the way you incorporated the dialect! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:05:00 AM
Such a beautiful tradition highlighted Debbie. Loved it. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:55:00 PM
You sure got talent Debbie, and writing this in dialect too- I enjoyed reading this and can only imagine how hard it was to write this one- so creative of you- Congrats on your win :D!! hugs!
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:25:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on another great win in Chris's contest luv.. awesome as always .. luv to be around de sun right now.. we took the day off for lovey dovey stuff .. now at the midnight hour to soup...
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:12:00 PM
Oh brilliant dialect, wonderful poem, really enjoyed this. congrats. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:40:00 PM
I like the way you wrote this in dialect, Deb. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:38:00 PM
great imagery, love it, congrats on your win in the contest Debbie
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Date: 3/8/2011 2:18:00 PM
ahhh so cool when I first wrote it one of our fine african men was calling me sista and sure I was his little bird..it's called research, imagination & trying to walk a mile in someone elses shoes! LOL
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 9:19:00 AM
of course you know i love this one.. congrats big time.. RAWRRHRR! soup mail..:)
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:27:00 AM
You are so amazing with dialect....and of course you already know how I revere your poetry....the combo is stunning! Congrats once more!!!!
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Date: 7/1/2010 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in Adeleke Adeite's contest "Africans Attutude" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2010 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Deborah..Well-deserved! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 6/30/2010 3:49:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Adeleke's contest on Africa with this awesome write and wonderful win too.. enjoyed reading and learning so much .. great job my TEACH .. humble pupil says aloha.. can u hear the music? can u see my hands waving in aloha? can u see my new bikini? that Ron INSISTED we buy? what a story .. that one is..haha.. enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:00:00 PM
Darn creative !!enjoyed very much!!!and thank you for your kind words(smile)all apologizes, sometimes we just have "one of those days."love and light to you~thanks again~Rick
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Date: 6/27/2010 10:48:00 PM
YOu do that accent well, It reminded me of this detective show I got hooked on about an African detective woman in south africa. What was that show's name? something like Women Detective Agency. anyway, It was very good and then it just disappeared from cable. You ended this poem delightfully too, Deb. Great job with the contest. LUv, Andrea
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