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*Neighboring Mauna Kea has been sleeping for centuries, but notice the red flows popping and flowing in the gray areas below Mauna Loa's actual summit. Those are rift zones that pave through gray areas untouched, then pop out further downhill wiping out whole communities. BEWARE OF RIFT ZONE--which has been ongoing now. Mauna Loa created Kilauea Iki, Pu'u O'o, Halemaumau, and Loihi Seamount (the underwater volcano).
*Image of The Big Island Rift Zones by UHH A Rift Zone Our fatigued town of Hilo by the bay, woke late Sunday and watched black turn to gold. Midnight's oil peters ere dawn the next day, seen three lava streamed, some people unsold. Volcanologists call it, a rift zone, where red skies mock as magma glows on top while forcing lava tubes neath, treks unknown. O'er a hundred quakes daily, stresses swap. Slams of earth's crust formed Everest's complete, Mauna Loa was churned out from the ground up. Twenty-nine faced thirty-three thousand feet, shows this volcano's peaks, win the gold cup. Confidence of sight, conscious bets clearly, ignorants deal with escape plans dearly. 2022 December 01

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Date: 12/7/2022 7:16:00 AM
Oh, the power of Nature! This is a fascinating read William, and in fine form. Please stay safe! Linda
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Date: 12/7/2022 8:40:00 AM
Mahalo, Linda, the outreach center for those of special needs, had given me the local Civil Defense alert system updates, tho’ I’ve had it since the hurricane was coming some years ago. Thanks again my friend, Aloha William
Date: 12/1/2022 11:27:00 PM
Nice sonnet, William:)
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Date: 12/2/2022 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, appreciated my friend, Aloha William
Date: 12/1/2022 12:45:00 PM
Amazing William. All the terrifying force of Pele on the march in full view! Wonderfully written! Best wishes for the contest. In my prayers. Sending you blessings of safety my friend!
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Date: 12/1/2022 1:13:00 PM
Mahalo, Sam. The front of my house faces Hilo Bay--the lanai, living and dining rooms, and the study are on the side--and Mauna Loa sits in the back. I added some tidbits for a reread, my friend. I appreciate it, Aloha William

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