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A HUMAN OR A BLESSING?

I was like a paper and you were the writer, 
You wrote my life the way no one could ever.
I was like an old magazine lying on a shelf,
You made me realise my worth which I would have never done myself.
I was just like a glass of water,
You were the one to tell me how much to you I matter.
I was just like an ordinary star in the whole sky,
You were the only one with the immense love in your eye. 
I was just like a poem unread,
You read my each word like no one could ever have.
I was like a wish unsaid,
You were the one to fulfill that.
I was just a person who never knew how beautiful life could be,
You were the one to bring everything so gracefully out of me.
I might thank god for gifting me this life,
But I would be forever grateful to him for the blessing as you in my life.

Immense love for family

There is immense love for family, 
But sometimes it is difficult to express,
Within you know, how much you feel blessed.
It is tough for you to confess,
How much you are attached.


You may live miles away from them,
But you know your roots well.
There will always be a special place for them,
As within, an ocean of love dwells.
Form: Rhyme


Black Hole Eyes

O blackish-blue-eyed girl
with eyes lined with ember,
who dreams of clouds
and endless skies,

Let me gaze into your eyes,
once more,
as they bloom like a flower,
pulling me into their depths.
O girl with captivating eyes,
grant me the chance
to love you once again.

A violent storm arose,
dust swirled, veiling the earth,
and in the sky,
I saw your mesmerizing eyes,
drawing me into you,
like a black hole.

My soul left its home,
and merged with you,
the black hole faded
into the abyss of space.

ka~rum

Premium Member immense love from above- CR

We are indefinitely favored and receive immense love from above Hallelujah  

8/6/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr.2024©

Premium Member Blowing Blissfully In Immense Wheat Fields of Fertile Minds

Blowing Blissfully In Immense Wheat Fields Of Fertile Minds

Upon the soft winds and the unenduring pallid breeze
with its ragged, hot breath a flaming torch of frozen tease
she that keeps her knives ready to cut in so very deep
and poisons the pleasurable hours that tender heart sleeps
her beauty its mirage displays a glitterings of gold
and her spoken words cried by spirit far too damn bold
she that has the magnificent beauty of a siren's face
stole ravenous beating heart, without any to replace
as I drown in deep waters polluted by her foul breath
I feel the lying whisper of a very painful death
as pale sky and bold seas both cast their powers far adrift
and in glory oft Heaven sent, dear blessings that uplift.

Blowing blissfully in immense wheat fields of fertile minds.
Are visions from word magicians, immeasurably stone blind!

Robert J. Lindley, dark sonnet
March 25th, 1973
Form: Sonnet


Immense Intense Love

My love for you,
      it's so immense
     it's so much larger
     than the sea...
     It's so, so intense
    that I can't explain
    or express
    with words
    or gestures... !

Premium Member Something Shines - Immense

When imagination soars, 
and fills our hearts with wonder,
we follow, high  over a star filled universe
We fall into that  half forgotten, chamber where 
leaf-entwined our memory speaks to us
in a small voice that only we can hear.

It whispers of all these shining things, 
a mermaid’s flashing tail, her rainbow fins, 
a fairies wings, stitched  by gossamer to autumn winds.

We sense the mystery of why they’re laid away
Even the most ordinary  is welcomed
against  a poet’s biggest fear -
to search this darkened place-
and find- nothing here.

Souvenir of An Immense Love

For an immense
            lived love,
            there is no distance
            to erase the
             souvenir...
             That sleeps in
              every smell,
              in every color,
              in every random song...
                Souvenir
               is the memory of
              unforgettable
               longing... !



     Suggested song LOCOS DE AMOR
     sung BY JUAN EDUARDO IN spanish

       https://youtu.be/F81Mhy3bBn4

Flying In the Immense Blue

From airplane window
  i sight azure solitude
   the sky illusion
Form: Haiku

Oh This Immense Unforgettable Love

Ah! love...
A immense, unforgettable,
the biggest...
...symbol...?
A square bench...
...feel and color...?
love forever...
...Song...?
heart sang  joyfully...
... Morning... ?
from our meeting
of love...
movie tour
of raptures,
kisses on the train...
... Remember...?
always, always divine
romantic moments,
happiest day...
I miss you but I love
the memory... for it
I will live with the certainty of having you
in the future...
True love is equal to that,
does not die and does not
have a finale...!

Giving- Gives Immense Pleasure

"Giving gives immense pleasure..."

The easiest way to make someone happy is giving,
But people consider it like a subtraction in living...
Why do they think like this,
Must be something while nurtured they miss...
Giving is not just about money,
It can be anything even words like dear & honey...
Who has something, only he can give,
Be it respect, love, care or rights...
Those who don't have anything,
They just try to snatch & fight...
Forgive someone, trust someone, give support to the needy,
Nothing is permanent in this world,
So don't be a greedy...
Give your helping hand even in routine chores,
Your giving attitude will make a strong bond...
Give positivity, give motivation, giving gives immense pleasure,
Giving satisfies your soul, people feel like a feather...
You can pull people up instead of showing them down,
No one is the king only the God has the crown...
Feel pain of people, then you will realize,
People are not fond to have tears in eye...
Give food, give water, give education or a job;
Try to be someone's shoulder of bad times,
They will make you their heartthrob everytime...

Written by ~ *Rashmi Kaushik*
Insta Id- *@rashmikaushik210*
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Immense Condenesd

I M M E N S E       C O N D E N S E D


I     Instructed by a plot, broken into paltry portion
M   Mauled into small, mammoth to screaming speck
M   Mountain range cramped, meandering cancelled
E    Elements of concept squashed into essence
N   No word left unchecked, numerous adaptations
S   Scrutinised, all adjacent scoured thoroughly 
E   Erraditacate unnecessary words, edit again 


C   Captivate from word one, add an anomaly 
O   Owe the audience pleasure, build their trust
N   Never accept the standard, leave cliche alone 
D   Dive into the character's psyche, dig their dirt
E    Employing research makes validity emerge
N   Nullify nonsense inclusions, nudge away distractions
S    Set up captured fast in short form, stir in surprise
E    Every line moves story forward, each essential 
D    Diagnose end point, not long form done and dusted
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member Twixt Immense Powers of Love and Dark Hates

Twixt Immense Powers Of Love And Dark Hates

Twixt' immense powers of Love and dark Hates
rests blackest void that in sad sorrow awaits

For love bringeth deepest joys of moonlit dreams
emerging Light, epic truth it always brings
Shining dawns that wrap souls into warm fires
rose-red colors, graced by hope that so inspires

Yet seeds of dark hate cleaveth to such high cliffs
oft seen images Egyptian hieroglyphs
Dark webs wickedly woven to lost souls trap
birthing false paths upon each deceiving map

Twixt' immense powers of Love and dark Hates
rests blackest void that in sad sorrow awaits

Colossal powers battle to control gain
one storm's wrecking wrath, other Spring's giving rain
Betwixt that eternal realm, Darkness and Light
man but mere pawn in that never ending fight

Should thee seeketh with truth and warm open hearts
Light gifteth joy and as wisdom it imparts
Saileth thy vessel, blue waters of calm seas
without direst fears, need of sad prayer pleas

Twixt' immense powers of Love and dark Hates
rests blackest void that in sad sorrow awaits

Robert J. Lindley, 3-22-2017
Form-Classicism

Immense

Immense 

To watch in awe 
The forest floor, 
The saplings rise
With love in your eyes. 
And when we kiss 
Amongst all this 
The creatures that crawl 
Seem so small. 
A beetle, tiny 
On nettles, spiny, 
Ne'er a sting
For such a little thing. 
An ant or two 
For a hungry shrew, 
Wouldst be a feast 
For a miniscule beast. 
But seeds asleep 
In forests deep 
May never be 
A mighty tree, 
To love and part 
With a broken heart 
Is so intense 
It seems immense. 

©RJVHorton2016
Form: Rhyme

Charmed By An Immense, Awesome Universe

Gazing into the twinkling sky as a dreamer 
charmed by an awesome, immense universe,
Adriana sits  as a muse to inspire some verse:
many surreal thoughts to seize another star!

 
" Fantasy cannot find truth if reality is ignored, "
seems a desperate attempt to appease her mind;
and small as she is, her soul dominates as queen,
nothing is discharged as vain in her eyes so keen!


Adriana, speak your command with a convincing, firm tone
and all the distant stars will be drawn to you to posses;
it's dreams that make us restore true belief in ourselves:
look beyond and realize that God didn't accomplish it alone!
Form: Quatrain

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