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Premium Member Blowing Blissfully In Immense Wheat Fields of Fertile Minds

Blowing Blissfully In Immense Wheat Fields Of Fertile Minds

Upon the soft winds and the unenduring pallid breeze
with its ragged, hot breath a flaming torch of frozen tease
she that keeps her knives ready to cut in so very deep
and poisons the pleasurable hours that tender heart sleeps
her beauty its mirage displays a glitterings of gold
and her spoken words cried by spirit far too damn bold
she that has the magnificent beauty of a siren's face
stole ravenous beating heart, without any to replace
as I drown in deep waters polluted by her foul breath
I feel the lying whisper of a very painful death
as pale sky and bold seas both cast their powers far adrift
and in glory oft Heaven sent, dear blessings that uplift.

Blowing blissfully in immense wheat fields of fertile minds.
Are visions from word magicians, immeasurably stone blind!

Robert J. Lindley, dark sonnet
March 25th, 1973
Form: Sonnet

The Immense Beauty Of Nature

Good Evening and Good Day to all my PS friends
This Poem is based on one of my recently made Painting presenting the true beauty of Nature. 

The Immense Beauty of Nature.

Was spread out in front of me,
The immense beauty of nature,
On the slopes of high mountains,
Deodar and trees with yellow leaves trees were standing,
The image of the breathtaking color of those trees,
Was touching the sky with its unique beauty,
It was not only alluring the earth was pulling the heaven towards it,
I became emotional and wanted to get carried away in those moments,
Where among the blue stone rocks,
Those standing trees were talking to the sky,
That sweet singing and music dear to the ear of the river,
Was telling everyone,
The immortal song of that beauty. 01

The river was flowing slowly in the valley floor in front of me,
The stream of that river too has its own music of yesterday,
Got into tune with the lonely trees,
Was engrossed in composing a heavenly music. 02

But I was thinking,
Amidst this immense beauty,
I being  a sailor from Ganges,
How will I be able to sail my boat?
Amidst these flowing small and big rocks,
The boat on which I make people sit to cross  the river Ganges,
I make them cross the river singing my songs,
How will she be able to move here? 3

Ravindra K K 
Kanpur India 18th Feb. 2024

Immense Meaning

Time  Evolves

Mind  Changes

Thoughts  Perform

Problems  Divide

People  Manifest

Destiny  Accomplishes

Wisdom  Dominates

Unity  Succeeds

Love  Enhances

Hate  Discourages

Water  Flows

Nerves  Penetrate

Energy  Stimulate

Teacher  Manipulates

Materialism  Depreciates

Opportunity  Fluctuates

Power  Influences

Creativity  Discovers

Emotions  Transitions

Strengths  Prolific

Time  Travels

Books  Motivate

Give  Thanks
Form: Verse


Charmed By An Immense, Awesome Universe

Gazing into the twinkling sky as a dreamer 
charmed by an awesome, immense universe,
Adriana sits  as a muse to inspire some verse:
many surreal thoughts to seize another star!

 
" Fantasy cannot find truth if reality is ignored, "
seems a desperate attempt to appease her mind;
and small as she is, her soul dominates as queen,
nothing is discharged as vain in her eyes so keen!


Adriana, speak your command with a convincing, firm tone
and all the distant stars will be drawn to you to posses;
it's dreams that make us restore true belief in ourselves:
look beyond and realize that God didn't accomplish it alone!
Form: Quatrain

Immense Pain

Immense pain.
A heart, heavy.
Strips of fabric cover the traces.
Purple and red,colors of note.
Flowers’ scent, oh so heavenly.

Immense pain.
A face, ever so pretty.
Legs standing tall.
Long neck, head ever so high.
Lips sealed,always smiling.’


Immense pain.
Long withstanding will.
Envy, people did most.
Clothes, trendiest.
Shoes, on point.

Immense pain.
Never withholding.
Always calm and serene.
Sunglasses on, no matter the weather.
Rain, wind, sun, cold.

Immense pain.
Rope, close by.
A big yard, no one could see.
A tree so tall, so inviting.
Stripped naked, no more hiding.

Immense pain.
She felt one last time.
Letter, she did not leave.
Naked body, will bear testimony.
The story behind it all will surface.

© Herzel Poshiwa

Premium Member Something Shines - Immense

When imagination soars, 
and fills our hearts with wonder,
we follow, high  over a star filled universe
We fall into that  half forgotten, chamber where 
leaf-entwined our memory speaks to us
in a small voice that only we can hear.

It whispers of all these shining things, 
a mermaid’s flashing tail, her rainbow fins, 
a fairies wings, stitched  by gossamer to autumn winds.

We sense the mystery of why they’re laid away
Even the most ordinary  is welcomed
against  a poet’s biggest fear -
to search this darkened place-
and find- nothing here.


Immense

Immense 

To watch in awe 
The forest floor, 
The saplings rise
With love in your eyes. 
And when we kiss 
Amongst all this 
The creatures that crawl 
Seem so small. 
A beetle, tiny 
On nettles, spiny, 
Ne'er a sting
For such a little thing. 
An ant or two 
For a hungry shrew, 
Wouldst be a feast 
For a miniscule beast. 
But seeds asleep 
In forests deep 
May never be 
A mighty tree, 
To love and part 
With a broken heart 
Is so intense 
It seems immense. 

©RJVHorton2016
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Twixt Immense Powers of Love and Dark Hates

Twixt Immense Powers Of Love And Dark Hates

Twixt' immense powers of Love and dark Hates
rests blackest void that in sad sorrow awaits

For love bringeth deepest joys of moonlit dreams
emerging Light, epic truth it always brings
Shining dawns that wrap souls into warm fires
rose-red colors, graced by hope that so inspires

Yet seeds of dark hate cleaveth to such high cliffs
oft seen images Egyptian hieroglyphs
Dark webs wickedly woven to lost souls trap
birthing false paths upon each deceiving map

Twixt' immense powers of Love and dark Hates
rests blackest void that in sad sorrow awaits

Colossal powers battle to control gain
one storm's wrecking wrath, other Spring's giving rain
Betwixt that eternal realm, Darkness and Light
man but mere pawn in that never ending fight

Should thee seeketh with truth and warm open hearts
Light gifteth joy and as wisdom it imparts
Saileth thy vessel, blue waters of calm seas
without direst fears, need of sad prayer pleas

Twixt' immense powers of Love and dark Hates
rests blackest void that in sad sorrow awaits

Robert J. Lindley, 3-22-2017
Form-Classicism

Immense

I was so strongly beaten by my fate,
one girl i loved so much,but i was late.
i loved her from the depth of my heart,
like birds who cant remain apart,
if i don't get her i would die,
like 3.14 equals to pie.

In this world,
its so hard to remain single,
but i don't have any problem,
if she agrees to mingle.
if she is angry with me,
i apologize for all my deeds,
like those irritating weeds who destroy the seeds.

Its so irritating to stand in a queue,
especially for a girl,
with whom you want to start your life as fresh and new.

I could see her in my dreams,
I could feel her in my thought,
but the problem was that ,
I just can't forgot.


From the day i saw her,
Her love burnt me with such intense fire,
but let me tell you,
i am a consummate liar.


My first meeting with her was so strange,
like aeroplanes from the cloud sprang,
i wish,if i could get her,
i would fulfill all her needs,
like sweet fruits grow from their seeds.

After the first it was my last,
I was little bit confused,why was it so fast.
expressions of the eyes,
vibration of the soul,
bad beginning for me from rest of the all.


You fall in love ,
like bubbles of water hug,
you try your best to talk,
like something written with blood instead of chalk.



But all your hopes are crushed in juices,
when someone comes in between and fuses.
but how can my heart forget her
which is dancing in her sweet memories,
like swaying leaves of some lovely trees
Form:

Giving- Gives Immense Pleasure

"Giving gives immense pleasure..."

The easiest way to make someone happy is giving,
But people consider it like a subtraction in living...
Why do they think like this,
Must be something while nurtured they miss...
Giving is not just about money,
It can be anything even words like dear & honey...
Who has something, only he can give,
Be it respect, love, care or rights...
Those who don't have anything,
They just try to snatch & fight...
Forgive someone, trust someone, give support to the needy,
Nothing is permanent in this world,
So don't be a greedy...
Give your helping hand even in routine chores,
Your giving attitude will make a strong bond...
Give positivity, give motivation, giving gives immense pleasure,
Giving satisfies your soul, people feel like a feather...
You can pull people up instead of showing them down,
No one is the king only the God has the crown...
Feel pain of people, then you will realize,
People are not fond to have tears in eye...
Give food, give water, give education or a job;
Try to be someone's shoulder of bad times,
They will make you their heartthrob everytime...

Written by ~ *Rashmi Kaushik*
Insta Id- *@rashmikaushik210*
Form: Rhyme

In a State of Immense Boredom

A deep hunger rests over my soul 
as I look to the bridge I see a towering troll
falling, falling, into this crack
deep darkness, happiness I lack

Longing for a breif scene of play
wantingto lounge in that hay
forever wanting whats out of reach
rather be drinking bleach

Oh, my heart, my soul
my life, my role
Gone! It slips away
all the people shout horray

They all want to destroy me 
break me down, I forget to be
Existance transcends all time and space
As if im competing in a race

Forget and forgive, thats what they say
fight and destroy, thats how they play
Hypocrites, pessimests, no longer missed
I run away, blindly, into the mist

No, yes, indecision, its a jest
forever with life being a test
I can't take this mess
I don't want to feel less

But I must they make me
Destroy the tree!
they shout at thee
No longer to be.

GONE! Dissappear
Into my head, I reappear
Forever to stay
locked in this way.....
Form:

Souvenir of An Immense Love

For an immense
            lived love,
            there is no distance
            to erase the
             souvenir...
             That sleeps in
              every smell,
              in every color,
              in every random song...
                Souvenir
               is the memory of
              unforgettable
               longing... !



     Suggested song LOCOS DE AMOR
     sung BY JUAN EDUARDO IN spanish

       https://youtu.be/F81Mhy3bBn4

Premium Member Immense Dormant Tree

Above ripe pumpkins
Sits an immense dormant tree
Waving at the stars

Russell Sivey
Form: Senryu

Premium Member Immense Condenesd

I M M E N S E       C O N D E N S E D


I     Instructed by a plot, broken into paltry portion
M   Mauled into small, mammoth to screaming speck
M   Mountain range cramped, meandering cancelled
E    Elements of concept squashed into essence
N   No word left unchecked, numerous adaptations
S   Scrutinised, all adjacent scoured thoroughly 
E   Erraditacate unnecessary words, edit again 


C   Captivate from word one, add an anomaly 
O   Owe the audience pleasure, build their trust
N   Never accept the standard, leave cliche alone 
D   Dive into the character's psyche, dig their dirt
E    Employing research makes validity emerge
N   Nullify nonsense inclusions, nudge away distractions
S    Set up captured fast in short form, stir in surprise
E    Every line moves story forward, each essential 
D    Diagnose end point, not long form done and dusted
Form: Acrostic

Flying In the Immense Blue

From airplane window
  i sight azure solitude
   the sky illusion
Form: Haiku

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