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Immense

Immense To watch in awe The forest floor, The saplings rise With love in your eyes. And when we kiss Amongst all this The creatures that crawl Seem so small. A beetle, tiny On nettles, spiny, Ne'er a sting For such a little thing. An ant or two For a hungry shrew, Wouldst be a feast For a miniscule beast. But seeds asleep In forests deep May never be A mighty tree, To love and part With a broken heart Is so intense It seems immense. ©RJVHorton2016

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Date: 2/7/2016 4:04:00 AM
This is what I call a really good free verse poem, they rhyme gave it an awesome flow
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:09:00 AM
Deep woods are my favorite place. You very nicely captured the wonder of so much in all the silence. My sympathies for your loss.
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