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Immense Condenesd

I M M E N S E C O N D E N S E D I Instructed by a plot, broken into paltry portion M Mauled into small, mammoth to screaming speck M Mountain range cramped, meandering cancelled E Elements of concept squashed into essence N No word left unchecked, numerous adaptations S Scrutinised, all adjacent scoured thoroughly E Erraditacate unnecessary words, edit again C Captivate from word one, add an anomaly O Owe the audience pleasure, build their trust N Never accept the standard, leave cliche alone D Dive into the character's psyche, dig their dirt E Employing research makes validity emerge N Nullify nonsense inclusions, nudge away distractions S Set up captured fast in short form, stir in surprise E Every line moves story forward, each essential D Diagnose end point, not long form done and dusted

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Date: 9/13/2020 5:44:00 PM
mmm nice acrostic but it sounds all so clinically cliche? the usual suspects of steps so to speak...it's what always works per the publishers, right? Like the digging dirt part...so many engrossed in it even when it is a made up story, they feel they cannot deviate from that. Sad commentary on human nature or have we been brainwashed to think this way? I love your eradicate line :)) Nice to meet you Sigrid and thanks for your lovely comment on the moon write which leaves alot of the A grade out!
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