Immediatly Poems


Premium MemberAfter a harvest of queensland cane

I was awed by the noise..As breath indrawn.? Of mighty
Giants in unseen form..' immediatly after grew the
Vivid lemon walls..towering ramparts a firestorm! fissures
Of red, glints of blue..With a marching noise a crecendo
That grew..Then the road before us began to move as
All types of creatures; as if in a torrent flew.' Snakes and goannas rats and mice, wallabys you name it? All in a trice! no
Animal lingered! or fought with another' they were escaping
From the powerfull flames that smotherd..The octane roar drowned
Your senses alright..!! Sugar cane fields ablaze at night.!!
I'll always remember the workers nearby with machtes at their
Smoko's and that lurid sky.'
Categories: immediatly, appreciation, education,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberJewish Jesus

Another cabinet of curiosity
What's your super ability
Where endless are the possibilites 
What's your philosophy
when it comes to Deuteronomy
Does it carry into Timothy
Do you judge with intensity
And when it comes to invincibility
are you armed with infallibility
or caressed with creativity
What's your identity
As it concerns this activity
Must it be immediatly 
and in the immediate vicinity 
Can you preform professionally 
with perpetuity somehow with duplexity
Or are we still plagued with jealousy
Are your claims contradictory
And all we see just a mystery
And what do we gleen simply from history
something unearned by His posterity 
something we learned about super ability
Categories: immediatly, allegory, bible, god,
Form: Rhyme


A Teacher Called Marty

There once was a teacher called Marty
Who taught each class as if it was a big party.
With a sax he explained he was jazzy
If there was doubt he would get sassy.

His style had students in the palm of his hand
Like a party of people vibing off a rock band.
Oh it didn't stop there
As he explained grammar without care
Students came from far and wide 
They forked out a hefty travel fare
Marty's originality brought them there.

He was warm and compassionate 
It was evidenced in his nature
With gestures somewhat effeminate.
Immediatly they twigged he's special
Unlocking their world understand the ethical.

Marty didn't care what other people thought
So get just taught and taught and taught
Each day the same way "English let's play!"
To have Marty is what the language sought.
Categories: immediatly, education, funny, hero, nonsense,
Form: Rhyme

The Hole

who the hell let that pimp in?

My boss grabed me, then

Immediatly, I became the next candidate for exploratory surgery;

Sodomized with a paring knife to remove the alleged ******** from my ass;

I immediatly volunteered for pimp removal surgery,

Flooding! On a gurney headed for the emergency room;

As the doctor studied my hemoraging rectum, 
My ******* became blackmail for that pimp;

Not a hole,not an opening,
Just pulsating, hemoraging flesh!

The flys just congragate while the blood coagulates !
Categories: immediatly, abuse, autumn,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberA Life Saving Procedure

The food was lodged in her throat, she was begining to turn blue,
but a local hillbilly with his daddy knew exactly what to do.
He lifted her dress and pulled down her drawers,
and proceeded to lick her entire hind quarters.
Shocked, the woman immediatly coughed the food out,
and thanked him for saving her life, reluctantly no doubt.
"Son," daddy said, "I couldn't be proud of you more.
Ya know, I heard about that hind lick procedure,
but never seen no one ever done it before."
Categories: immediatly, recovery from,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberAnother Typical Kidster Date

"Buy me some drinks!" she said to me directly.
"After a few belts even you might just look good to me."
So I bought her a drink, then two more, repeatedly
and needless to say yours truly got lucky.
The following morning she kicked me out of her place immediatly
The above is just one more typical date for TheKidster, SillyBilly.
Categories: immediatly, relationship,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberThere But For the Grace of God

Back when I was a rebellious, care free young lad
there was this regular practice that I had.
I can remember when, every now and again
I would visit my local court house and watch the sentencing.
Defendants were declared convicts officially
and marched off to serve their time at some correctional facility.
Their lives were now forever changed for the worse most likely
and then on one visit it really struck me
that there but for the grace of God goes I
and I've been only lucky so far not screwing up my life,
but all luck does run out eventually,
So Don't Blow It! 
Right now you have this one chance to change immediatly,..
...and so I did and for the better I believe.
Hanging at a court house was great therapy for me apparently.
Categories: immediatly, self, teenage,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberThe Wolf Man - My Rebirth

I don't want to sound as if I'm placing myself up on a pedestal, 
but I happen to possess very great wilderness survival skills. 
Drop me naked in the middle of nowhere and I guarantee 
that yours truly will survive more than likely... 
...and that's how yours truly will most likely die, 
deep in this remote wilderness unseen by human eyes, 
Scavengers will immediatly feed upon my earthly remains
providing them with much needed nutrition high in protien. 
Wilderness wildlife will then come upon my skeleton 
as a welcome and rare much needed source of calcium. 
When my earthly shell reaches the final stage of its decomposition, 
what remains will enrich the soil as fertilization, 
whereupon new life will then grow from this fresh enriched earth. 
This won't be my death. This will be my rebirth.
*
This is an unoficial entry  (or example) for my The Wolf Man contest.
*
Categories: immediatly, fantasy,
Form: Rhyme

My Birthday Is Here - Please Read Immediatly -

Just to let you know,
A very special day is approaching

IT IS MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!
Taking place on May 24th

The day I was born
And my mother and me adjoined

Cuddled and comforted
In each other's love

Tomorrow is the day
That I turn thirteen

Finally I will have entered,
My teens

From then on it will be consumed
By hormones and PMS and what-not that I will deal with

Somehow I look forward to aging even more
I grow more mature, but also more old

I think I'll be taken
Quite a bit more seriously

Not treated like a child,
How most people think we should be 

So yes it will be my birthday,
In about two hours

I hope I get lots of comments
Wishing me a well one!!!!!
Categories: immediatly, adventure, childhood, daughter, family,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberDid P D Truly Crush Me?

I threw in the towel immediatly with P D
and left P D with the impression That P D CRUSHED me.
P D dosen't like to lose or P D will cry like a Big Chicken Baby!
So I've left P D with the impression that P D CRUSHED me.
It's the least I can do for my little poet destroyer P D.
Categories: immediatly,
Form: Rhyme

The Way of Love

certaintly we don't think of the reprocussions before we fall in love 

hardly ever do we consider that soon we will become a has been

love of a lifetime never does that really last

with two broken hearts we distracts one another into believing we were

through the trials and tribulations  pain and sadness we become immune to the way of love

we overcome many obstacles and triumph over fears 

in that moment our hearts are broken our whole world ends

like a burning to the flesh it scars us in and out

yet through time we pick up the pieces and move on

flipping that switch from lovers to strangers immediatly the romance ends

we go back and forth to causing hurt and tonight someone cry's

remembering the days when love filled the air and completed our whole being

today it's gone and sadness took over leaving us singing that old love song

our eyes remain blind and the truth we hide because in denial is where we feel safe

we all say we give up one time time or another and swear we don't want any other

before we can blink we get hit with the arrow and the circle begins again...
Categories: immediatly, love, sad, love, time,
Form: Free verse

Silent Reaction 2

**Double Lento**
---Pattern--AbAb,CdCd,EfEf,GhGh


The next day things had remained
Like every other day before.
No romance or chemistry had I gained,
Seemed our friendship was no more

She told me it was because
I was different then other men
And that she didn't want to be the cause
Of me following the "*******" trend

She thought that she would corrupt
My awkwardly, poetic personality
Overtime she feared my anger would erupt
Releasing such animalistic insanity

Of course I could not believe it
As she predicted, I blew up in her face
Scared of commitment, this was her gift
Immediatly I became full of haste


......Jared Pickett.......:JP}
Categories: immediatly, lifeday, me,
Form: Free verse

A Couple Hours of My Night

in the dark i can be mself,in the dark all my fantasies come true the ones i'm scared to share.
in the dark i'm alone and not afraid of people starring,in the dark it is quiet yet i know i'm still 
alive.
some fear being alone but the echo of my heartbeat surrounds my room,nothing in that 
moment makes me scared.
when i'm around a crowd of people in the light of day,i tense up immediatly and know not 
what to say.
in the dark i'm beautiful and free,no matter what they say.
in the dark my world is pretty and i'm not judged for being gay.
in the dark i run circles around you despite the games you play.
in the dark im a genius who achieves all her dreams.
in the dark i'm a star way up in the sky.
in the dark you never hurt me and destroyed my sanity.
in the dark my mind goes free which allows me to analize me!
Categories: immediatly, timeme, people, dark, dark,
Form: I do not know?

The Box Spring Bed Rumor....

Somewhere in luisianna, On Saterday Nights...
In some Abandoned Mental Hospitial..
Saterday Nights, The doors unlock...
In one of the rooms A box spring Bed appears...

Sleep there, and sometime in the night you shall be awakened..
An old man, In a white Shirt with words upon it...
Don't scream, Or be alarmed, He will ask a question about your life..
Answer correctly and he will give you a photo...

Look at this photo, Study it carefully...
It will show how you'll die
Once you recieve the picture and review it
You must leave immediatly...

It's Quite a wonder But I must warn you..
If the picture is of the man before you, the one who gave you the picture
Running away won't help
Neither wil Screaming...
Categories: immediatly, history
Form: I do not know?
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