Best Immediatly Poems


The Box Spring Bed Rumor....

Somewhere in luisianna, On Saterday Nights...
In some Abandoned Mental Hospitial..
Saterday Nights, The doors unlock...
In one of the rooms A box spring Bed appears...

Sleep there, and sometime in the night you shall be awakened..
An old man, In a white Shirt with words upon it...
Don't scream, Or be alarmed, He will ask a question about your life..
Answer correctly and he will give you a photo...

Look at this photo, Study it carefully...
It will show how you'll die
Once you recieve the picture and review it
You must leave immediatly...

It's Quite a wonder But I must warn you..
If the picture is of the man before you, the one who gave you the picture
Running away won't help
Neither wil Screaming...
© Jake Brown  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immediatly, history
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Premium Member Jewish Jesus

Another cabinet of curiosity
What's your super ability
Where endless are the possibilites 
What's your philosophy
when it comes to Deuteronomy
Does it carry into Timothy
Do you judge with intensity
And when it comes to invincibility
are you armed with infallibility
or caressed with creativity
What's your identity
As it concerns this activity
Must it be immediatly 
and in the immediate vicinity 
Can you preform professionally 
with perpetuity somehow with duplexity
Or are we still plagued with jealousy
Are your claims contradictory
And all we see just a mystery
And what do we gleen simply from history
something unearned by His posterity 
something we learned about super ability
Categories: immediatly, allegory, bible, god,
Form: Rhyme

Tough Love

Tough Love

Sometimes with such strict parents, a tendancy to lend;
overlooking boundaries crossed to be your child's best friend.
I love my son with all my heart just as he does his mother.
Tho the path that he was taking; I just could not go further.
Stunned and hurt when I said, "You have to leave my home."
He wasn't his kind loving self; always drunk or stoned.
I held myself together; to his back I closed the door.
Then litteraly went to pieces falling to knee's upon the floor.
I knew he would end up in prison or maybe even dead,
if he could not shake the demons messing with his head.
It took everything inside me to stick to my decision.
I wanted to run after him, again to him be pleasing.
With tear stained face and puffy eyes I prayed with all my might,
" Please Lord spare me the dreaded phone call that comes so late at night."
Only twice I've heard God's voice aloud, not just a sign.
He said as clear as crystal, "Don't worry about him." "He's mine."
Immediatly I ceased to cry, such comfort in those words.
I know God deals with us best when we are at our worst.
Driving late he had a wreck; two poles ran through his truck.
It was him left praying on his knees; survival was not luck.
The poles crisscrossed around his neck tho he was never touched.
Three inch splinters in his hoodie; didn't miss him much.
The road was rocky coming back but thank the Lord he made it.
God's protective hands covered him; so near a death evaded.
My parents too strict then I too laxed; he's balanced tween the two.
A wonderful husband and father; he began his life anew.
The hardest decision I ever made but I thank God above;
my precious son now understands why I chose tough love.
Categories: immediatly, addiction, conflict, faith, god,
Form: Rhyme

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Premium Member There But For the Grace of God

Back when I was a rebellious, care free young lad
there was this regular practice that I had.
I can remember when, every now and again
I would visit my local court house and watch the sentencing.
Defendants were declared convicts officially
and marched off to serve their time at some correctional facility.
Their lives were now forever changed for the worse most likely
and then on one visit it really struck me
that there but for the grace of God goes I
and I've been only lucky so far not screwing up my life,
but all luck does run out eventually,
So Don't Blow It! 
Right now you have this one chance to change immediatly,..
...and so I did and for the better I believe.
Hanging at a court house was great therapy for me apparently.
Categories: immediatly, self, teenage,
Form: Rhyme

A Teacher Called Marty

There once was a teacher called Marty
Who taught each class as if it was a big party.
With a sax he explained he was jazzy
If there was doubt he would get sassy.

His style had students in the palm of his hand
Like a party of people vibing off a rock band.
Oh it didn't stop there
As he explained grammar without care
Students came from far and wide 
They forked out a hefty travel fare
Marty's originality brought them there.

He was warm and compassionate 
It was evidenced in his nature
With gestures somewhat effeminate.
Immediatly they twigged he's special
Unlocking their world understand the ethical.

Marty didn't care what other people thought
So get just taught and taught and taught
Each day the same way "English let's play!"
To have Marty is what the language sought.
Categories: immediatly, education, funny, hero, nonsense,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member A Life Saving Procedure

The food was lodged in her throat, she was begining to turn blue,
but a local hillbilly with his daddy knew exactly what to do.
He lifted her dress and pulled down her drawers,
and proceeded to lick her entire hind quarters.
Shocked, the woman immediatly coughed the food out,
and thanked him for saving her life, reluctantly no doubt.
"Son," daddy said, "I couldn't be proud of you more.
Ya know, I heard about that hind lick procedure,
but never seen no one ever done it before."
Categories: immediatly, recovery from,
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Another Typical Kidster Date

"Buy me some drinks!" she said to me directly.
"After a few belts even you might just look good to me."
So I bought her a drink, then two more, repeatedly
and needless to say yours truly got lucky.
The following morning she kicked me out of her place immediatly
The above is just one more typical date for TheKidster, SillyBilly.
Categories: immediatly, relationship,
Form: Rhyme

The Way of Love

certaintly we don't think of the reprocussions before we fall in love 

hardly ever do we consider that soon we will become a has been

love of a lifetime never does that really last

with two broken hearts we distracts one another into believing we were

through the trials and tribulations  pain and sadness we become immune to the way of love

we overcome many obstacles and triumph over fears 

in that moment our hearts are broken our whole world ends

like a burning to the flesh it scars us in and out

yet through time we pick up the pieces and move on

flipping that switch from lovers to strangers immediatly the romance ends

we go back and forth to causing hurt and tonight someone cry's

remembering the days when love filled the air and completed our whole being

today it's gone and sadness took over leaving us singing that old love song

our eyes remain blind and the truth we hide because in denial is where we feel safe

we all say we give up one time time or another and swear we don't want any other

before we can blink we get hit with the arrow and the circle begins again...
Categories: immediatly, love, sad, love, time,
Form: Free verse

My Birthday Is Here - Please Read Immediatly -

Just to let you know,
A very special day is approaching

IT IS MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!
Taking place on May 24th

The day I was born
And my mother and me adjoined

Cuddled and comforted
In each other's love

Tomorrow is the day
That I turn thirteen

Finally I will have entered,
My teens

From then on it will be consumed
By hormones and PMS and what-not that I will deal with

Somehow I look forward to aging even more
I grow more mature, but also more old

I think I'll be taken
Quite a bit more seriously

Not treated like a child,
How most people think we should be 

So yes it will be my birthday,
In about two hours

I hope I get lots of comments
Wishing me a well one!!!!!
Categories: immediatly, adventure, childhood, daughter, family,
Form: Couplet

Premium Member The Wolf Man - My Rebirth

I don't want to sound as if I'm placing myself up on a pedestal, 
but I happen to possess very great wilderness survival skills. 
Drop me naked in the middle of nowhere and I guarantee 
that yours truly will survive more than likely... 
...and that's how yours truly will most likely die, 
deep in this remote wilderness unseen by human eyes, 
Scavengers will immediatly feed upon my earthly remains
providing them with much needed nutrition high in protien. 
Wilderness wildlife will then come upon my skeleton 
as a welcome and rare much needed source of calcium. 
When my earthly shell reaches the final stage of its decomposition, 
what remains will enrich the soil as fertilization, 
whereupon new life will then grow from this fresh enriched earth. 
This won't be my death. This will be my rebirth.
*
This is an unoficial entry  (or example) for my The Wolf Man contest.
*
Categories: immediatly, fantasy,
Form: Rhyme

The Hole

who the hell let that pimp in?

My boss grabed me, then

Immediatly, I became the next candidate for exploratory surgery;

Sodomized with a paring knife to remove the alleged ******** from my ass;

I immediatly volunteered for pimp removal surgery,

Flooding! On a gurney headed for the emergency room;

As the doctor studied my hemoraging rectum, 
My ******* became blackmail for that pimp;

Not a hole,not an opening,
Just pulsating, hemoraging flesh!

The flys just congragate while the blood coagulates !
Categories: immediatly, abuse, autumn,
Form: Free verse

Street Life

twinkle twinkle little star she had a dream that went too far.all she wanted ws to be loved,all 
she wanted was to be wanted.all she wanted was to be acknowledged.
from a child to a woman overnight express.what harm came her way with a simple hello.at 16 
she lived on skid row,getting introduced to being a street ho.pimps galore,beatings 
somemore,late night running from the cops.from car to car she hops,without a conscience 
she trotts around the corner bend.standing tall one minute the next beat to the ground.
18 she thought she was on top of her game until she met "mr.cocaine in the brain".she tried 
it once and immediatly got hooked sniffing lines while she got booked.mr.cocaine became her 
only friend stuck with till that very end.
21 she thought she was done but had only begun.working all day into the night parting 
straight into the morning.eventually becoming a cocaine feen.sometimes she'd hook up with a 
guy or two,but by doing it for free made her unhappy.
30 she graduated to smoking crack,fighting with her man,ib the hospital with a broken 
back.little girl lost no longer a kid by 31 she was doing a federal bid.from skid row to park row
she only moved downtown,her life seemed over until god came azround.
with little hope and love and blind faith to match,a new and honest life was a dream she 
could catch.
Categories: immediatly, adventurenight, dream, car, dream,
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Premium Member The Shequila Tot Dhyme Rrinking Game

1 Tequila Shot Down
I'm writing my first line.

2 Tequila Shots Down
I'm continuing to rhyme.

3 Tequila Shots Down
I could do this all day.

4 Tequila Shots Down
Um, uh,...What was I gonna say?

5 Tequila Shots Down
I can do this time after time.

6 Tequila Shots Down
My can always rhyme altogether all the time every time I rhyme.

7 Tequila Shots Down
Mall this stuff just I wrote by is far my best.

8 Tequila Shots Down
My have to give probably this arrest.....sorry, I meant a rest not arrest.

9 Tequila Shots Down
Rhyme still rhyming my butt all the over place.

10 Tequila Shots Down
I to have right stop now. I'm feeling really fit shaced.

11 Tequila Shots Down
Aww wwwhat the hheck. Good for,.. one luck,.. and,...
[CLUNK!},...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Apology from the author:
The above titled caption should read
The Tequila Shot Rhyme Drinking Game
NOT
The Shequila Tot Dhyme Rrinking Game
My Apologies,
but in my defense, I did enter the title subject matter immediatly after performing my little 
tequila experiment.
Again, my apologies.
If I've started a new fraternity craze,
Again, my apologies.
Categories: immediatly, time, time,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Did P D Truly Crush Me?

I threw in the towel immediatly with P D
and left P D with the impression That P D CRUSHED me.
P D dosen't like to lose or P D will cry like a Big Chicken Baby!
So I've left P D with the impression that P D CRUSHED me.
It's the least I can do for my little poet destroyer P D.
Categories: immediatly,
Form: Rhyme

Gods Presence

in the quietness of seclution,
i listen to hear your voice,
overloaded with decisions that need to be made, i'de rather hear your choice,
i don't always make the best judgements, and i always wonder what i should do,
i'm thankful that you surround my thoughts, i don't know what i'de do without you,
when i'm angry to the degree of boiling point, and my heart just wants to explode,
i immediatly refocus my attention on you, and you always seem to lighten my 
load,
i feel so safe in your presence, and my fears completely melt away,
the bondage i've felt for years on end then slowly goes astray,
i read the beauty in your words, and they rest within my soul,
you strip all the restlessness away from my heart, and you help to make me 
whole,
your love is always beautiful,
your love is forever giving,
you always give above and beyond, and make my life worth living,
the gifts you give have true meaning, and your truths put my mind at ease,
there's no one else i'de rather love so deep, or have the need to please,
i know i'm way less than perfect, but your love makes me feel pure,
for everything that seems to go wrong in life, you always have the cure,
i understand things won't always go my way, and i'll keep my ears open to your 
instructions,
you always open my mind's eye to new and beautiful things, your always making 
adjustments.
Categories: immediatly, devotion, faith, father, love,
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