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Silent Reaction 2

**Double Lento** ---Pattern--AbAb,CdCd,EfEf,GhGh The next day things had remained Like every other day before. No romance or chemistry had I gained, Seemed our friendship was no more She told me it was because I was different then other men And that she didn't want to be the cause Of me following the "*******" trend She thought that she would corrupt My awkwardly, poetic personality Overtime she feared my anger would erupt Releasing such animalistic insanity Of course I could not believe it As she predicted, I blew up in her face Scared of commitment, this was her gift Immediatly I became full of haste ......Jared Pickett.......:JP}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 11:07:00 AM
Excellent piece Jared, you have such a range in your portfolio and every one a gem>>James
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:58:00 PM
Wow! sure didn't see that coming! So sad that the friendship had to end.
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:03:00 PM
raw, explosive! outstanding! Jared!! jimbo
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