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Silent Reaction 2

**Double Lento**
---Pattern--AbAb,CdCd,EfEf,GhGh


The next day things had remained
Like every other day before.
No romance or chemistry had I gained,
Seemed our friendship was no more

She told me it was because
I was different then other men
And that she didn't want to be the cause
Of me following the "*******" trend

She thought that she would corrupt
My awkwardly, poetic personality
Overtime she feared my anger would erupt
Releasing such animalistic insanity

Of course I could not believe it
As she predicted, I blew up in her face
Scared of commitment, this was her gift
Immediatly I became full of haste


......Jared Pickett.......:JP}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 11:07:00 AM
Excellent piece Jared, you have such a range in your portfolio and every one a gem>>James
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:58:00 PM
Wow! sure didn't see that coming! So sad that the friendship had to end.
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:03:00 PM
raw, explosive! outstanding! Jared!! jimbo
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