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Premium Member WHAT DOES MEDGAR WILEY EVERS MEAN TOO ME

One man destined for greatness
The Struggle
Fight for Civil Rights
Battle with opposition
Realign the divide of Separation
Determination for Freedom
Constitution for all Races
Civil Rights march
Strong Advocate Figure
Dignity Pride
Believing and Understanding
How it relates to CUNY MEDGR EVERS COLLEGE
Opportunity
Education advance
Being given a chance for high learning
Excelling in one’s goals
Theory into concepts
Preparation for success
Medgar Evers College being alum with their story to tell.

Premium Member ONCE UPON A SUMMER NIGHT

Through the darkness 
Wonders through a summer rain
Thunder and Lightning having surge
Bringing the fire to ignite
It became the feeling to write
Compose with contrast
Ideas full of memories
A past life to share
It was no time to just sleep
Nightlight construct
Letter by letter
Alpha sentences made it better
Sentences like tour guides
Look to the left and right in observe
Every word being a place never been
People, Places and Things
Here and there everywhere
Words saying, “This is who we are”
Accelerating like a car
The journey far
Not knowing where, but will get there
Mind in travels
Words sounding like a novel
Making words and sentences shine
Like a rising sunrise as the new day
Accomplished through the night before
Thoughts released
Feeling free
Once again world to see
Heart full of inspiration
Summer heart can bring perspiration
Sometimes excelling education
That summer night turned everything into possible
Hope administered
Conquer of the new day
Happiness and joy can come one’s way.
Form: Rhyme


academic validation

Algebra makes me feel stupid.
Equations and inequalities,
algebra makes me feel stupid.
I could have an A in the grade book, but that doesn't mean that I understand. 
lost in class, barely turned that in on time.
Algebra makes me feel stupid.
So I drift into my own world.
But at least in my world, I'm not alone. 
Algebra makes me feel stupid,
it's not my teacher's fault, but my own.
The problem is, I run on academic validation, more so than food or water,
so I sink.
pretend- and make them think
make them think I know what I am doing,
but I am on the brink.
the brink of failure.
Algebra makes me feel stupid.
once gifted, now barely scraping by.
once impressive
what makes me impressive?
certainly not my ability to solve complex algebraic expressions. 
is it my ability to fake it?
to only raise my hand when I know the answer?
Is it too late?
is it too late to know the answers?
too late to say I don't understand and ask questions?
Algebra makes me feel stupid. 
once excelling in school, now regular.

Premium Member HIKING POET

Mountain climb
Visualize
Look out
Observation
Explore
Word Start
Write down
Continue to Marvel
Perhaps write a Novel
Energizing climb
Full of Inspiration
Idea Thought
Words defining the concept
Determined and Fulfilling
Hiking trail embracing understanding
Hiking, Involvement, Movement and excelling Poet

LOVE EXPRESSED THROUGH WORDS FROM BOTH OLD AND NEW ENGLISH DICTION

Thou hast engaged my hand,
With your fairy’s magic wand,
The ring which you placed on my finger,
Along with which I do all around your house- doth Linger.

Thee fairy more graceful even compared to Venus,
Thou pierced my heart with thy kindness,
I will forever with you be,
As I respect thy love and thee.

Thou hast the eyes of a fish,
Let me express you my life’s wish-
-That I want to live with thou forever,
And then say to separation- Never!

Thou art grace personified,
And thy words are music of love signified,
Thou art the Queen of My Heart,
And excelling love’s every Art.
Form: Rhyme


everyone but me

                      ~top student
             ~excelling
      ~prudent
  ~compelling

whispered those words sweet
my soul adored my heart “gold”
yet in reality no rhythms beat
no love to call my own to hold

it’s  like  my
self-love         is
s    l    o    w    l    y
falling            a p a r t

in my academics I excel
* like * gilded * stars * within * a * hollow * sky *
yet to myself I cannot tell
of love far nigh

Happiness Is A Virtue

Happiness Is a virtue a seed gently sown.
From the swinging, swaying whispers of your inner tone.
Your heart a preacher, a guide through the night.
Excelling as teacher, bringing shadows to light.
As thoughts twist and turn, like dancers in play.
They run and they hide from their dismay.
Inner demons bellow, fears take their stance.
Clashing and battling, disrupting your one and only chance.
But deep in chaos, an uncaring inner child awaits.
Yearning for peace, breaking down gates.
Embrace the unhinged, let the light shine through.
In the struggle for happiness, your spirit renews.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Influence of Ms Daufeldt

I always will remember when I was young
and wanting to be special in some nice way.
One person used the power in their tongue.
The dark clouds parted, and I felt a ray
of sunny joy come beaming down on me.
The person was my teacher of sixth grade.
She saw in me what others did not see.
My feeling not so adequate would fade.
I had not known that I was capable
of not just learning, but excelling too.
My confidence grew more unshakable.
By junior high, I had a brand new view.
If in my talents I would but believe,
great things with effort I could then achieve.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Refining Consciousness

     Non- living world to hold hidden consciousness.
    Under some favourable circumstances 
     asd suitable environ, life originated from non- living sources.
     Started journey 
     through unicellular to multi -cellular organism
     accommodating plant kingdom
       and entering into animal world.
    
       Process of evolution went on billions of years
       very slowly  and still going on under gradual refinement.
      Realisation sprouting from intangible intuition 
       twined with cognitive impulsion
       igniting dormant consciousness.

      Conflagrating confluence of confusion 
       leading to path of enlightenment 
       breaking contour of ignorance 
        converging to consciousness.

      Consciousness is capability of analytic judgement 
      overpowering 'selfishness, greed, malice
     Strong sense of right and wrong,
     confidence to count on justice.
    supporting sanity and humanity.

          Continuous evolution of consciousness running 
            excelling and refining to reach summit,
            merging to supreme power.

Tip Toeing

Tip Toeing 

I'm  taking steps 
But quietly 
I look to the left and to the right of me 
And guess what I saw 
I'm going excelling very far 
Driven without a car
GPS takes you every which way 
I got to tip toe but by faith 
Quietly listening to God 
For confirmation 
To be great 
And do according to his will 
I am tip toeing into a big deal

Quietly seek 
Wait for God to speak 
Cease without knowing 
Keep on tip toeing

You got to tread light 
It's like training  wheels 
On a bike 
At first, you learn 
How to trust 
Your instinct 
Is that enough?
Or do you let go of your fears 
Dry away those tears 
Put a plan together 
Tip toe through any weather 
Every thing doesn't have to be seen 
That's how you live out your dream 
In life you grow 
Somethings you have to let go 
When you walk into a room
It gets light 
The tunnel at the end is bright 

Quietly seek 
Wait for God to speak 
Cease without knowing 
Keep on tip toeing

Listen 
Pay attention 
Listen 
Pay attention 

Quietly seek 
Wait for God to speak 
Cease without knowing 
Keep on tip toeing

(Repeat until chorus fades )
Written by : Concetta Hardnett 
08/26/2023

Premium Member A Perfect Storm

Perfect rhyme scheme soothes my ear, 
Its rhythmic sequence subtly sways, 
Lyrical images appear, 
Excelling in iambic pace. 

A perfect poem in and about -
Feather’s glory but above all -
It turns my senses inside out 
Suffonsifies my seeking soul. 

So where do I derive it from?
From the inside of outer form - 
a Perfect Storm! 

April 5,  2023
Form: Rhyme

The Poodle

The Poodle is known for its smarts
For excelling at music and arts
But an owner was telling
Me after the smelling
They also blow nuclear farts
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Clerihew Gray

Engish poet Thomas Gray
with fine words had his way
Excelling at odes & elegy
sadly a lauratehip could not be ..
Form: Clerihew

Top and Bottom

Top
               Uppermost, Chief
   Ascending, Excelling, Surpassing 
Summit, Apogee, Pinnacle, Culmination
           Falling, Declining, Lying
                   Low, Under
                      Bottom
Form: Diamante

Premium Member John Hamilton

John is a Christian man, a philosopher, and a poet that 
offers his talents, beliefs, and insights to all 
honestly, openly, and with a compassionate, understanding heart,
never preaching, and yet, sure of his convictions. 

His quote, "Sunsets are biased, because, they are naturally one-sided," 
allows us a glimpse of his good-natured hyperbole and dry humor.
More than a talented poet, John is to music what white 
is to snow, the two are virtually inseparable.
Lyrical poems are his favorite mode of expression and
that allows him to combine his two loves, excelling at both.
Over the years, I've gotten to know John through his pen, but we
never met, till one day he dropped by, and I got to shake his hand.


(Acrostic)


01/09/2021


Capture the Essence Poetry Contest
N/A Judged 2/20/2021

NA Poem From a February 2021 Judged Contest - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Form: Acrostic

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