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For the Power In The Tongue Poetry Contest of Karen Jones

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The Influence of Ms Daufeldt

I always will remember when I was young
and wanting to be special in some nice way.
One person used the power in their tongue.
The dark clouds parted, and I felt a ray
of sunny joy come beaming down on me.
The person was my teacher of sixth grade.
She saw in me what others did not see.
My feeling not so adequate would fade.
I had not known that I was capable
of not just learning, but excelling too.
My confidence grew more unshakable.
By junior high, I had a brand new view.
If in my talents I would but believe,
great things with effort I could then achieve.
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Shines Avatar
December 19, 2024 at 11:32 PM
Congratulations!beautiful tribute to your teacher and thank you for sharing .keep smiling ,have a great day!
Mukherjee  Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 6:27 AM
A nicely penned Sonnet to pay tribute to your teacher. Well deserved. Congratulations on your win Andrea!!
Proxenos Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Strange how teachers from our younger years seem to come to our aid and help us grow or succeed. A lovely write, Hugs and blessings Jennifer. I also wrote about my teacher in SO's contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Maverick Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Heartfelt thanks to Mrs Daufelt, who helped You fill in all those blanks.' And you Andrea You are top of my class today.' But then I am Biased as we know." Specially if you are talented!
Alex Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 6:33 PM
Grand work as usual. Congratulations!
Jones Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 6:09 PM
Andrea your touching tribute was a pleasure to read! I especially loved how you brought Ms Daufeldt to life with your word choices. She surely was a special teacher and we are blessed you were so inspired you wrote of her and shared! Thank you for entering my contest and congratulations on your placement!
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:10 PM
Thanks. I am honored to be on the list
Hind Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 1:10 PM
Yes! Love the tone of this - :)
Read Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Ms Daufeldt taught you well Andrea, good luck in the contest. xx
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 3:20 AM
So nice sonnet!
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 3:07 AM
Ah i just posted for this too, yours is profound and how well written is your sonnet. Its nice when a teacher or someone sees something in us that others cant see. I dont have such memories of teachers. But i do have and remember lil things , that really had an impact on my life and my vision in life. Pleasure reading this powerful poem. Best wishes! Sending you light again
Tor Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 9:07 PM
Andrea this was so special to read. I can remember the teachers that were special in my life and I can remember one teacher that should have never been a teacher. Thank God there were more great teachers than bad. Hugs...
Buhagiar Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 12:26 PM
I'll always admire the ease with which you write your poems. This is a brilliant sonnet. A pleasure to read. Hugs,
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 3:42 PM
thanks, Victor. After using this form for 25 years now, it's a pretty easy one for me to use.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 12:23 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. I think we all have that one teacher that was extra special. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 3:42 PM
Yes, I hope everyone gets to have that. I had two that way, Daufeldts and my creative writing teacher.
Bauer Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 11:40 AM
A wonderful tribute, Andrea! I hope you got to tell her how much she meant to you. Everyone should be so lucky to have a teacher like that…
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 3:41 PM
If she is even alive, I imagine she would be at least 100 by now! No, I think I never said anything to her. When young, I think we don't think to do those things, and I believe I came to understand what she did for me after I was out of her class.
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