Dissatisfaction Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Busy Minds Crave More

Simple silent peace
Is no longer good enough 
Busy minds crave more

(8/19/26)

Premium Member Dissatisfaction exposed

What 

Was the seeker before

That identity arose..? 

The story is that the seeker 

Is a spontaneous arising 

Which points to a 

Dissatisfaction with 

Separation. ??

where in the World

Where in the world does satisfaction dwell?
Tempt a poor with money once.
He will let out such a wail
Dissatisfied faces gather in a bunch.

I witnessed those drowned in greed
Ones I believed were a symbol of sanctity.
Though terrified to question their creed
Yet I know without desires exist no entity.

I stumbled one day in a forest
When looked up, displayed a competition.
Trees shot toward the sun, leaving behind the rest
They stifle, subjugate and obstruct without hesitation.

Rivers yet are quite manipulating
They carve a compelling story
Once acknowledged as calmed, now invading
Eroded, shoveled and marked its territory.


Premium Member 'Twas pt 4

Then what to his wand'ring blund'ring eye should appear
A comely young lass willing to spread dread and fear
Even much better's she married much older
"All the better to see you my Dear and be bolder.
I delight in the fright and things will be dandy.
If it will be spread by some winsome eye candy."

All the while this Grinch swallows and wallows in pardon
While he plays DJ where the roses were gardened
You can hear 'midst the din, hue and cry in the land 
But this is the guy who now picks the bands
That will be centering all our attention 
There will be no mention of any dissension
Because Sinterclause cows the Press and the Right
"Merry Xmas to all", unless we say, "Good night!"

A Slave to Paradise

Becoming a slave to my own paradise,
Becoming clingy to my own disregarded appetites,
Becoming a prisoner of my own created prison,
Becoming lonesome in my own crowd.

Recognising something lethal,
Pouring out something eternal,
Bearing some dirt of civilisation,
Tearing apart the burden of my own existence.

I've created my own traps,
Living forever in my own satire.
No appeal on the docket today;
I crave the unseens.

When the sins are unseen,
What verdicts can there be?
When the prisoner is the judge,
Is he called a metaphor of his own book?

So I've hold my head up high—
Hiding hatred that burns inside.
Perhaps this is not the last;
Perhaps this is an endless circle.

Premium Member Separation, dissatisfaction, and suffering

Separation, dissatisfaction, and suffering..

The separate-you belief 

Is synonymous with 

Dissatisfaction and suffering.. 

And with beliefs 

Of separate future lives..


Premium Member Dissatisfaction

Dissatisfaction

IZZ

The Mother-Trucker

UV

Invent:

SHUN!

-Gray Squirrel

10-29-2024

Premium Member Dissatisfaction

Have you ever up and just leave
After looking at the dull menu?

Neverending Judgement

It’s an issue when I say something, 
but also when I don’t. 
There’s a problem with when I eat, 
but also when I don’t.  
Someone always has something to say, 
or looks to throw. 
No-one looks at what they do, 
just at what everyone else does.

Premium Member Some Secrets In the Dell

The voice of the flowers flowed along the greenery in the dell.
One who heard their whispers was a pixie named young Nell.
She understood their excitement, but the words she could not tell.
For some secrets are best kept away from the fey, even in the dell.

Premium Member Lynx and Mad Grost Are Dissatisfied

The leopard, jaguar, puma and lion had their own queen.
Lynx wanted one too; one with shine, sparkle and sheen.
The granter of queens told him he could have one in frost.
He gave him an ice queen. Her name was Mad Grost.

But she is cold and mean, lynx argued to the granter of wishes.
She is what she is, she will come around slowly like the fishes.
Lynx was unhappy as was Mad Grost, who did not like Lynx.
She said to the granter, why don’t you turn that little cur into a spinx?

Pointless

Doesn't like my cooking or my conversating 
Dislikes my company, my look, my smell
So devastating 
My opinion is rejected, my heart is neglected
My hurt is of no consequence 
I don't rate, just feel your hate
My needs have no significance 
Everybody else takes priority 
Random strangers have superiority 
I'm so f#@$*%g mad it simply makes me sad
Don't want to feel me, hear me or be touched
My deepest longings must be crushed
I can't help but wonder WHY?
Why am I here? What do you want?
Blind obedience!?
I feel like your punching bag
Constantly ignoring red flags
Squash my discontent to make you happy. 
But I fail
It's never enough 
Can't help but feel like I am pointless

Premium Member Whispers

Hello again
nagging dissatisfaction
diminish me again
corrupt everything
with your whispers of truth.

Premium Member What Dissatisfaction Means For Me

When I am dissatisfied with someone or something
I look within and know I am really dissatisfied with me.
I need a new hobby, a new friend, a new job, a new something
So I begin to go to work

One day when I was dissatisfied I thought “What about poetry?”
I had written a poem six or seven years before.
One poem. Not two, just one.
I have no idea why I stopped there.

So I found a poetry site and I began to write poems.
Now when I look back at those first “poems” I laugh.
They were not poems at all, but really short stories.
The commenters were generous and kind to me though.

Now I have over seven thousand poems, and I love writing poetry.
All because I was dissatisfied on a Thursday during parent-teacher conference
When I had nothing to do for eight hours, because….
No one wants to see the counselor. No one.

Premium Member Hello Dear Hello Back Dear

Hello, Dear, I trust the garbage in the road was picked up on Friday.
To add insult to the sweetness,
“I think it amusing there is a no dumping sign” across from where they have dumped.
Yes, I too think it bitterly amusing, since this pile from hell is about 
Six feet from my driveway, which is so lovely when guests come.
This sweet letter was from the mayor’s assistant.
Because out of desperation, I wrote to him last Wednesday.
I wrote an equally nice letter back.
Hello back, Dear.
Not only was nothing picked up on Friday,
More was added to the pile on Friday.
I came around the corner to discover six tires,
A couch, and a burned out car that were not there on Thursday.
I plan to call the news station today,
For it is apparent even the mayor’s office
Can get nothing done.
Have a nice day yourself!
Love and all that stuff.

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