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Would you like some malaise on that sandwich?


 

Hello again nagging dissatisfaction diminish me again corrupt everything with your whispers of truth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/15/2021 6:44:00 PM
A fine sharp write. That final line is a zinger. I am going to meander through your impressive portfolio. Best wishes, Brian
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Anais vionet
Date: 6/16/2021 7:58:00 AM
Oh, meander! =]
Date: 1/9/2021 8:48:00 AM
I know this sentiment well.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/10/2021 11:41:00 AM
Indeed. I already have one in mind. Point two fingers like a gun, then shake wrapping the bottom two fingers in the other person's two fingers. Shhhhh.
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Anais vionet
Date: 1/10/2021 4:35:00 AM
We can form a club - and have a secret handshake!! *excited*