Notes About The Poem

Would you like some malaise on that sandwich?


 

Whispers

Hello again
nagging dissatisfaction
diminish me again
corrupt everything
with your whispers of truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Sambourne Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 6:44 PM
A fine sharp write. That final line is a zinger. I am going to meander through your impressive portfolio. Best wishes, Brian
Vionet Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Oh, meander! =]
Levasseur Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 8:48 AM
I know this sentiment well.
Levasseur Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Indeed. I already have one in mind. Point two fingers like a gun, then shake wrapping the bottom two fingers in the other person's two fingers. Shhhhh.
Vionet Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 4:35 AM
We can form a club - and have a secret handshake!! *excited*
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