Whispers

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Anais Vionet.

Would you like some malaise on that sandwich?

Hello again nagging dissatisfaction diminish me again corrupt everything with your whispers of truth.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/15/2021 6:44:00 PM

A fine sharp write. That final line is a zinger. I am going to meander through your impressive portfolio. Best wishes, Brian

Anais Vionet
Date: 6/16/2021 7:58:00 AM

Oh, meander! =]

Rob Levasseur

Date: 1/9/2021 8:48:00 AM

I know this sentiment well.

Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/10/2021 11:41:00 AM

Indeed. I already have one in mind. Point two fingers like a gun, then shake wrapping the bottom two fingers in the other person's two fingers. Shhhhh.

Anais Vionet
Date: 1/10/2021 4:35:00 AM

We can form a club - and have a secret handshake!! *excited*