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Pulling the Trigger

The firing pin is in position, 
Primed awaiting the decision to fire, 
The target has been acquired.
I require more information, 
The operation is under observation.
I'm stationed safely in my heart, 
Starting to pick apart the details.
Tailing the target so I don't forget,  
It's all in my mind, 
I designed how this goes.
Hiding in the shadows, 
So no one knows I know,
Cloaked by a coat of intuition, 
I fit in tight spaces.
Embracing the darkness,
Facing my own mess, 
I press forward to the goal.
My soul flows with confidence, 
Growing my experience.
The clearance has been given, 
I'm aiming with precision,
The mission in  critical condition. 
I listen to the breeze, 
Before I squeeze the trigger, 
Aligned with the bigger picture.
I fire with pure intention, 
Unloading my weapon of perception, 
Healing a collection of souls, 
Looking for their part in the whole.

Premium Member God Night

A brightly feathered crooner
daffodils along a hidden creek.
The bombs mimicking raindrops, cracking the halo of good dreams.

Assassins are ever commonplace. 
The human race is in constant critical condition.
Following faint scents of rosaries misplaced. 
God never seemed so far-far-far away.

The freshest plague is long since dead.
Something is still raging in their heads.
Funhouse faces of the modern man.
Stroking of the flesh-his only task.

The four horsemen are encroaching fast.
Upon the blistered sundials of wayward lambs.
Futile to hoard or take cover from the blast.
Our manna, God knows where our souls are at.

Premium Member Police And An Amazing Pet Rescue



               Police and an Amazing Pet Rescue



    Indiana Police received an Emergency Call, 
    Of animal abandondonment in a terribly hot car.
    This is a great reminder for caring, pet owners all!
    To not leave pets inside cars, that are hot as bubbling-tar. 

     Inside, the keys, still were in the red,hot ignition.
     Found inside~ a deceased pet bull, found dead!
     And a fluffy cat, near death in very critical condition
     So pet owners, in summer, please you your head!

     There was also a German Shepherd in that ‘car- toaster.’
     He survived best, not wanting to die, to be flat as a coaster!




                                   8/3/2024


Premium Member Mosquito Massacre - Shocking Report

  Well, fellow stinging malarial insects
  They really chloroformed us this time
  You got the latest stats, Buzzer?

  Check, Bleeder: Read 'em and weep
  3,400,000 dead; 1 wounded

  Just a minute, there, Buzzer. One wounded?
  That's right, Bleeder. Critical condition too

  What's this weirdo's diagnosis, if I may ask?
  Check, Bleeder. Doc says he was OTAA on-arrival

  And just what is OTAA?
  Over-the-anthill-anyway, sir.

  Check, Buzzer... He gone!

Late Majid Satti

Majid Satti was shot dead by unidentified assailants on Tuesday. According to the report, the incident occurred on Sixth Road in Rawalpindi when armed men gunned down Majid Satti. He was admitted to a hospital in critical condition where he succumbed to his wounds.
Note.Gunfire injection notorious group triple 3.

Vaccation

Vacation undoubtedly a celebration
Vacation a beautiful human creation 
Vacation.
Various kinds of people ultimate destination vacation
Students have so much of affection for the vacation
Vacation really a celebration 
Professionals plan their vacation..
 to share thier love and affection with their family section.
Stress relieving injection
Vacation.
So many love this creation 
Vacation
Many countries primary source of income destination 
Vacation
What so ever age you might be in
Vacation is always a celebration 
I have seen very few say objection
To their vacation
Vacation undoubtedly a wonderful human creation
Celebration ...vacation
Everyone on planet earth likes to go for vacation for the celbration
Vacation happiness destination
Smiles multiplication
Relaxation to the perfection
Vacation
Undoubtedly a wonderful human creation celebration vacation...
Imagine human situation without vacation,our human life would be in a critical condition without vacation
Thank God for this wonderful human creation, vacation
Undoubtedly a beautiful creation ..
Vacation.


Nuts In 2021 and 22

It’s hard pin down when precisely
the world went insane.
It all began with a manufactured virus,
that obvious fact was hotly denied by many,
however the unscrupulous
quickly used the viral outbreak
to tyrannize the people.

Fear was used to control and force compliance,
this led to a wide-spread paranoia,
sadly many folks died, but something else went wrong,
the survivors caught a critical condition,
many succumbed to an insanity,
even the politicians and the medical 'experts'
went mad.
There was a lurch into a mass psychosis.

Those that tried to reason with the crazy ones
were attacked, banned, cancelled, or shouted down.
Nothing made sense anymore,
and now as a new year arrives
we are all a little shaky, a little unglued,
but we follow the rules
hoping the planet
will recover in some cosmic asylum
one day.

My Good God, Death Is Not a Crime

I realized; I was looking at the photo for one more time
Smiling bride and groom with such a promising chime!
Such pretty faces, so lovely, so warm and friendly
Holding hands, bonded minds in wedlock, loyally.
A smile so familiar and sincere, like a morning coffee blend 
A newlywed couple asking wishes and good vibes to send.

I remembered, I heard the news of a dying relative of mine,
The old story of a soul, crossing all ties with a nearly flat line. 
He got into a coma, and I heard he is in critical condition
So vast a world, yet I thought about this utter suffocation!
I confessed; I did not have a word with him for quite a long time!
May God ease all pain, please, my good God, death is not a crime!

Critical Slam

When Your tanks on E that's critical.
when you speak blasphemy that's critical.
when you hate on me that's critical.
when you abstain from sex which is chastity that's critical.
From the womb to the tomb without a silver spoon that's critical.
shall i fail shall i succeed misery and greed is all i see in poverty among-st all creeds that's critical.
when you broke as a joke its like being in critical condition in the hospital that's critical.
when sex is on your mind but you cant bump and grind that's critical.
I'm the most critically acclaimed winner far from a sinner that's critical.

Premium Member Save For Future

Pity we still do not realize 
Acids badly hurt the soils
And increasing carbon oxide
Only precipitates the spoils

With increasing factories and automobiles
Chocking the air with harmful gases
Living is becoming more and more fragile
As Mother Earth cries and moans its etches

It's time to stop this attempt at matricide
And fight against all pollution
To reduce the cruel emission size
And save the planet for future generation

Better we walk where we can for short distance
And for our plants we turn to compost
For greenhouse gases must not worsen
Renewable energy should not be lost

We must prevent the  warming  of the ocean
And set up structures to avoid pollution
To recycle we must go for waste collection
Before the world plunges in critical condition

We must cease plunders of all sorts
And halt environmental insanity
Before living aids become exhaust
So we can cherish them for eternity

The tribulations of nature is very high
Because of our actions and inactions
Why should our children suffer and die
Why we should not prevent destruction

Mom Needs Our Prayers

My mom is in the hospital and she's very ill.
I hope that God steps in and helps her to heal.
She's in critical condition, one of her legs had to be amputated.
The doctors and nurses have given up hope and I'm devastated.
When she opens her eyes, she doesn't even recognize me.
She and I are very close and if she dies, it will drive me to my knees.
She has a blood clot in one of her lungs and she has a lot of infection.
If a lot of people pray for her, the good Lord might give her protection.
She's in so much pain that it causes her to squirm in her bed.
When my phone rings, it scares me because it might be somebody calling to inform me that she's dead.
If she dies, it will be extremely hard for me and my relatives to cope.
But she's not dead yet so that means there may be hope.
Mom is a great person and if she dies, it will truly be unfair.
It will mean a lot to me and my relatives if she receives your prayers.

(Dedicated to Agnes Johnson, my mom.)

Let's Pray For Earl King

Earl King had a heart attack and needs our prayers.
He's a good man and needs to know that people care.
At the moment he's in critical condition.
Let's pray that he'll soon be in remission.
He's given his friends and family quite a fright.
Let's pray that Earl will be all right.

Justin

Why Justin dear?
You were out on the road,
The car was coming so fast,
it was dark,
they didnt see you. 
You steped out to cross the road.
They hit you dear and kept going 
Your in critical condition, Justin, in the hospital waiting for brain surgury.
We all love you, dear.
Your in our prays.
I love you, Justin and i hope you get better.
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this is for my friend Justin. he was walking on the road last night and was hit by a van 
coming 75 miles per hour. He is in the hospital now waiting for surgury. Please even though 
you dont know him. Pray for him to get better. His Family and freinds would greatly like it

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