Critical Slam
When Your tanks on E that's critical.
when you speak blasphemy that's critical.
when you hate on me that's critical.
when you abstain from sex which is chastity that's critical.
From the womb to the tomb without a silver spoon that's critical.
shall i fail shall i succeed misery and greed is all i see in poverty among-st all creeds that's critical.
when you broke as a joke its like being in critical condition in the hospital that's critical.
when sex is on your mind but you cant bump and grind that's critical.
I'm the most critically acclaimed winner far from a sinner that's critical.
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