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The echoes of others

I walk among a ground where life is a trend.

Yet we don’t understand where’s our beginning and our end.

The burden to be like the rest.

We all stand shoulder to shoulder duplicate.

Not proving we are all imperfect.

The pressure to keep up.

But the feeling to be distinct.

I say to myself

“Am I really who I want to be”

“Or am I a carbon copy of other souls”

These patterns are confined in a box.

But do I have a key to unlock?
 
Proving ourselves to be different.

Is this really the craze we mimic?

Or is it an illusion we may just dismiss?

Time will tell it all.

But for now we just follow the ball.

Premium Member work in progress

like and ancient relic from a distant past
the faded carbon copy of who he never was
a meaningless error in the history of humankind
and yet there is hope of finding out truths
about life suffering miracles and mostly himself

Carbon copy of a war

Futzing with an American flag hat
There’s a story
A history 
He doesn’t want to share
Yet he’s proud 
He wipes his chin 
And sighs
His body is hobbled
With years of injuries
And drinking
His wife’s voice is shaky
She’s been taking care of him
And it’s tiresome
It’s constant
Their conversation is minimal
Small talk
Like strangers
Doctors appointments 
Drug stores
It’s a hamster wheel 
In his early days he was a man of steel
Now its just a callous of how he feels
Copy paper of his life was once bare
Now filled with regrets he can’t bare


Premium Member Carbon Copies

What would be left of me, no one will notice
I’m not lamenting, for I take it as a fun
My life’s astray now, floating like a lotus 
Sometimes it buzzes round the flowers in the sun
Along the quiet shady waters goes my shadow
The way meanders up the hill a bit too steep;
Then it descends down to your grassy meadow
Where we picked up forget-me-nots in happy sleep
Oh, what a joy! - you sang that song so sweetly
And I was clapping, trying to sing along 
Boxed down and gone, we never die completely
I'm glad to know we’re finally at home
Its no more than a dream, this whole lifespan
One dream is over, then another comes to play
I am a carbon copy of that man
You used to know, and you’re exactly like my J.

Lousy Hotel Bar

He lived in room 757
just like a haiku
thats what he said to me
just like a haiku
eesh

There’s a reason I avoid this part of town

if not for the psuedo intellectualism that spreads
faster than herpes at a swingers party
then for the cheap drinks for too much money
the door guy that thinks he deserves a tip
keeping out the ‘riffraff’ as they used to say

The Polo shirt with the Raybans over in the corner
makes eyes at the one girl his buddies brought to the bar
if he plays his cards right
he might just have a chance

and why not? 
Did I walk into a bar
or some sort of reality show
where are the cameras and who’s
ing with me?

The carbon copy cut outs of people all staged around the place
talking about haikus
and their twitter account 
and their many followers
not my scene as I head to the door

As a pick up from my coat from the check
the girl tells me to have a good night
I doubt it
no one writes Haiku’s anymore

Premium Member That Leader Board Maigc 9

How to speak and wound deeply,
carbon copy sword and discord; 
Changed the game and did not flee,
I blocked your favorite channel;
Kept it clean no need for debris;
Destruction is your love language,
you taught it to me;
Don’t hate the top of that leader board
for mastering skills so easily.


Coachella DeVil

(To the tune of Cruella De Vil) 

CoachElla De Vil, CoachElla De vil 
She's in sparkly hotpants 
And singing for thrills 
She's so drunk she won't flinch against the chill
CoachElla, CoachElla
She's comes alive when she pops a white pill
Look out for CoachElla De Vil.

At first you think CoachElla's something special
But in a while you see she's just the same
As every other girl, a self-made party animal
Carbon copy, tanned and chasing fame

This starlet wannabe, who hungers for the big screen
She ought to be sat down, offered some reali-tea 
The festival was calm and wholesome till...
CoachElla, CoachElla De Vil.

Justice over Morality

I know I wished him dead 
But to hope for justice is not a crime 

And for you to bank on my morality 
to tell you right from wrong, 
Is like betting your life against the odds
When you have none 

And everyone heard you crying at prom; 
What a pity party 
And I’m not sorry you feel sorry 
cause the prom dress doesn’t fall far from the tree
You killed them all with evil glares
And dumped their bodies at the quarry 
And I’m not sorry you’re not sorry 
For you to bank on my morality  
Tells me even your narcissisms getting sloppy
And you betting things you don’t have 
Tells me you’re a carbon copy 
The prom dress doesn’t fall far from the tree  

And I remember all the things I said I hope happens to him
You should know by now 
I choose justice over morality every time 
Just because you feel sorry doesn’t mean I do
Wanting to see fear in his eyes 
is called justice, not a crime

Sweep

Hello and handshakes,
now old hat,
that brief hello,
wiggling through teeth.....

a stiff aura
still making breakfast,
news blabbing
from the old TV,

touching is only
on a big screen,
a carbon copy
of middle aged parents,

tequila on Friday
the bright spot,
like sunshine
on a 
wrinkled countenance,

gazing right through each other,
the big mirror,
a comfort zone,
waiting
for one or the other
to push out
first.

Life Force Dark

below    
     time entwines
as the scenario wind blow to
   carbon copy history pages

a place where 
          a choking mist  
        clouds the rays
                  and
the future holds onto the present

the mirror reflects fantasies dreams
but the      
       mirror brakes 
shattering    
       pieces  

the pieces drop like rain
stabbing life force  
  
            pain

rolling thunder breaks the silence
as whirlwinds swirls    
out of the dark past scars peer
 white  shadowed by the grey

 the abyss stares back
a blank stare
                          of emptiness

 reality tear drops falls
falling
                 falling
                                     falling
to a place where 
ghosts of the past haunt the future
dancing on dreams
             twisting
 into  
a screaming nightmare

but behind the tortured screams
you can
hear the laughter
as the jokers plays his hand

complete now
                   his devilish
                          plan

Who Am I

I am an individual;
separate from any other living thing—
no strings, no leash.
Don’t try to make me just like you!

I am unique!  Myself!
Incapable of being another—
no carbon copy; no need to hover.
Don’t try to make me just like you!

I am a complete person with
emotions, needs and desires—
only I can put out the fires.
Don’t try to make me just like you!

I am a single article full
of my own experiences—
past as well as the present.
Don’t try to make me just like you!

I am a spirit free to think and do 
as I please—

 I am ME!

Premium Member Yes, I Would Like a Little Cheese With My Whine

Yes, I Would Like A Little Cheese
with My Whine
Miracle Man
5/8/2023

Long before dawns arrival I’m up and ready,
but due to recent neck surgery I’m on a walker.
Myelopathy has made my movement unsteady, 
so while my wife shops, I’m becoming a Gawker.

Every day is a carbon copy of the day before,
no longer on fine cuisine do I aspire to dine.
Even enjoyable things are becoming a chore,
just give me some cheese to go with my whine.

The past few years I’ve eaten what life has served, 
and this tough old bird has managed to survive.
But probably all was better than what I deserved,
God’s hand upon me is all that’s kept me alive.

My Momma

My Momma
-,••,•••-,•  •• ••, ••, ••-
Shii Ma, shii carbon copy, shii xerox copy
Shii spoon, choii bii style Niiguna Begay It's for me to know and for you to find out....
Momma , LAAAAAA YOU LOTS
NO MATTER HOW CUCKO WE ARE , I CAME FROM CUCKO PUSS....LOL, laaaaa you Mommmma

Mirrors Are Painful

Oh what a tragedy, what an utter disgrace
It was never my intention to recreate,
A near perfect carbon copy of the bad mad old me
I fought so hard to avoid this so how can this possibly be?!

The past and present have come to collide
The same old bull arguement but I'm on the other side
Your hostile eyes scream at the grown ups treating you so unfairly
My terrified sleepless one cry back I'm trying to keep you safe, JUST LISTEN TO ME 

But I know I'm on the losing side 
Coz 20 years ago I was you
Facing off against your nan
Who lost this same old battle too

Just know when you need me you know where I am
Coz ill never turn you away my son Coz I will always be your mam

11 Xi 11

Today some orphans get soppy
And shed a tear on a poppy
Though they never met
Their dad was a vet
And there was no carbon copy

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