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At the Bottom of a Lake

Echoes of Spanish lullabies and magic chants
Resound in the tree tops of my head
That poetry you spoke with your eyes
When healing was miles and miles away

I awoke from a dream swirling on top
Of a lake
There was nothing to do but to drown

Into the fishes of thoughts reminiscent
Of your voice 
The warmth of your skin tone 
Tempting warmth of your mouth 

Kissed with the sunlight I blushed as
I drowned deeper and deeper into
The lakes of my thoughts
Labyrinths undiscovered by the light
Of my Self
Where I buried you dead, where I 
Buried you dead

Your body lied at the bottom of
Waters
The warmth of your eyes was gone
Your yellow skin rotted like life does
When Love leaves it behind.

Premium Member The Cup

They still want us to suffer as if we have left
The residue at the bottom
Maybe doubting we finished that cup yet
The drink wasn’t supposed to taste awesome
They keep treating us rather sternly  
Even though we are still miles apart
Maybe happier than it was meant to be
Taking suffering as the high art
Of those who remember better than us
The garden with apple tree
But living each day as if it were our last
We’ve done all the drinks, haven’t we?

Premium Member When the Bottom Falls Out

A culture is sustained by its traditions
And its quality is known by the fruits
Of those traditions.
We live in a time of change
When tradition is challenged and discarded
Simply for being traditional.
We don’t know what will replace it
We just want “hope and change”
With blind faith it’ll be better.
But that’s not the way civilizations are built
That is how they are destroyed.
When the bottom falls out
Morals are abandoned
Values are reversed
The baby is thrown out
And the old dirty bathwater consumed
As if nectar.
Then drunk on delusion
The revelers cry
When in the morning
The large, shiny Trojan Horse is empty
And it’s clear their life will never be the same.

(8/30/26)


I BELIEVE

I just wanna fly away
From the places 
Things and people 
That breaks me
Slow me down 
Or give me a setback.

I believe one day
I'll get out of the dark 
Back on my feet 
Picking myself 
From the bottom 
Straight to the top.

I believe I'll get there 
Where I want to be
If I keep moving towards 
My direction relentlessly
With a solid mindset
Steadily focusing on my goals.

Premium Member The Gastly Gum on the Bottom of My Shoes

The ghastly gum 
on the bottom 
of my size nine shoes
Was put there by you~
A spit of spite;
A malicious verse,
A romantic curse~
Your love is slightly underwhelming 
Like a supernova imploding!

Beware 
The dogs of war,
I swore ~
Dreaded double-bubble 
is my sword,
I will stick you to the freeway fast-lane
(You rundown Gandy Dancer),
And like Marvelous Medusa, 
Turn you into languid stone 
for eternity…
Or for ten enchanting days,
Whichever comes first!

THE BOTTOM LINE OF LIFE

Some penalty comes with calamity 
Making you panic 
Nemesis comes like crisis 
Making you uncomfortable 
You can't run from it 
Because it's like shadow
That follows you everywhere. 

It's like a fever, it makes you shiver 
Making you want to run away 
But you can never escape reality 
The only antidote or antibiotics 
Is facing it until you eliminate it
So you can regain your sanity and serenity.

All games have their rules and guidance 
When you break those rules 
You gonna face the penalty 
Every act or action has a  repercussion
You gonna face the nemesis when it's time 
Be careful of the choices you make
Because you can't make them twice.


When the Bottom Drops

It’s when out the bottom drops
that life falters, halts and stops.
All before is now lesser,
dreams slip into the never.

Bottom of the Ninth

It’s opening day (that’s for baseball);
The season’s officially here,
With fans set to flock to the ball fields
To watch, buying hot dogs and beer.

If life were compared to a ball game,
Each inning a decade or so,
We’d root for our home team, while knowing
The game’s sometimes boring and slow.

Yet other times, there is excitement
And we take the lead in the score,
Without any way of predicting
What action is waiting in store.

There’s a break in the 7th for stretching,
When the game’s cut as if by a knife,
Which is like when it’s time to retire
And confront what is left of your life.

Then the players get back in position,
The outcome still up in the air,
But there isn’t much time to the finish
And perhaps not much power to spare.

Now my husband’s a bit of a joker;
This baseball/life theme’s his, not mine,
Yet when he said we’re in the 9th inning*,
I knew I would pilfer that line.

*The title is what he actually said about 
where we’re at, which cracked me up…

Beneath The Bottom Line

He
Who has
Feasted on
Free-flowing life 
Knows no jealousy,
Unladen by guilt that
His intent is less than pure,
For his winnings are sufficient.
He has forged a life without questions,
Without a decade's hesitation
To consider whether his own
Paradise might justify
What he won't leave behind
When he is not spared
From the demise
His toiling
Will have
Earned.

A Crowded Glass Bottom


a crowded glass bottom
sobbed empty on a vine
flowered look is stopping
pain's time for telling time
Lambrusco's weight mopping

a crowded glass bottom
circles make more circles
another one tastes you 
metaphor lies shingled
its pass with my sinew

a crowded glass bottom
part they, my countenance
ruby shadow filling
falling through the chalice
it spills like heart would freak

a crowded glass bottom
when empty your bouquet 
the dehydrating drink 
in my dripping grape play,
the pressure of seeing

Premium Member Race to the bottom

It’s a crooked slope 
that leads to hell 
and I’m riding it 
Stance Goofy

Those Regulars
that believe they aren’t, 
are way out in front 
tripping over themselves 
polishing and buffering the way 

So I must be putting 
the right foot forward 

Besides, I also carry a mascot 
and fail safe 
It’s a goldfish in a bag 
who never moves his left fin

He’s showing more zip
in his tail of recent 
since I started feeding him
those highly energised 
copper and black batteries 

He won’t be going down 
anytime soon 
except maybe with 
lead poisoning 

I prefer lithium myself 
it’s much lighter 
and makes my collapse 
easier to stomach 

*               *              *

life wearing braces 
whilst holding a bag of fish 
be happy with me 

By
David Kavanagh

Rock Bottom Awaits

As people 
buy willingly
into
new ‘comforts’

The few
and empowered
will dish out
the crumbs

A new wizard
lies hidden
his curtain
a hard drive

Entrapped
in their keyboards
young minds
unbecome

The facts
merely factoids
of digital
suasion

In fated
consensus
their Google search
lies

While deep in
their consciousness
a legacy’s
waiting

A meltdown
away
when the internet
— dies

(Villanova Student Chat: February, 2026)

Gone To Pot

When at the bottom of the garden
pottering in the potting shed
plying those in need of weeding or reseeding
then putting all the plants to bed
she spotted and picked up a flower pot
which seemed to say 'Forget-me-not'
but as it looked somewhat more forlorn
she promptly unearthed filled and began
to sprinkle a little H2O here and there
with her trusty old watering can
altho' some clearly may have been seen to droop
and a few of the flora nearly fade away
it did the trick and in the nick of time
she brought them back and bravely saved the day

Bottom of the Ocean

Can I reach the bottom of the ocean?
Do I try and dive,
Or is it too deep? 
Will fear rise me back to the surface?
Do I plunge back to the unknown,
Listening to the waves above me,
Seeing the stars shimmer beneath.
Where is the bottom of the ocean?
Can I reach it? Do I dare to try?
Do I cry for help through the storm?
Do I call a friend amidst the chaos?
Where is the bottom of my ocean?
Once I find it, I will let you know…

The Bottom Line

Will you please be so kind as to explain why,
gentlemen of your ilk or, much as you,
on first meeting, soon after greeting,
or within a conversation or two,
to those like me, or such as I,
feel the need, to bring up to speed,
and are compelled to dwell on and extol,
their personal proclivities, propensities,
predilections, predispositions,
inclinations and tendencies?
Come what may, we are who we are, it is what it is,
whereby, we have no say and, by all means,
it's preordained, hereditary, chance or happenstance,
and, as does diarrhoea, runs in the genes.
For, as to the preferences of others,
I must admit, be aware, I don't care one little bit,
and for their penchants, not a lot, in fact, nary a single jot,
altho', I wish they wouldn't swish, as they look silly doing it.
But, in the end, they may tend to extend,
or rise to the occasion,
and participate in the bringing of
brotherly love to those of their persuasion.

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