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Premium Member Undone

I was only four, 
when Blackie my dog died. 
My dad ran my best friend over, 
yes it was a horrible accident. 

 
I was only seven, 
when my loving cat died. 
I found her dead from eating a lizard, 
the lizard was coming out of her mouth. 

 
I was in my twenties, 
when I got the call. 
Your dad is dying, 
will I make it in time. 

 
My heart has been broken many times, 
feeling like pieces of glass cutting it apart. 
Each time my heart was undone, 
it could not be made new again. 
 

An undone heart will last forever, 
never to be fixed again. 
Hold your heart in love,  
protect it at all cost.

Never Undone

On this Sunday I serve my Lord

His ways are true

His love is reward

I knew as a boy he saved my soul

gave me life

made me whole


His love is everything

my heart has changed

In him is forgiveness

my future arranged


God's plan was perfect

His Word was sent 

to redeem our souls 

our death to prevent


our way to heaven

is through his Son,

His blood covers all

and

is

N-E-V-E-R  U-N-D-O-N-E.


Written by John Aaron Green 
1-8-12

Undone

Randolph Riggs was a house cleaner
who hungered for Mrs. McGleaner.
He made an advance
and unbelted his pants.
It's been ages since he's seen her.


Premium Member Undone

He's left me. I'm coming undone -
like linen on a spinning wheel
much in need of still being spun.
Half-cloth, I'm feeling unreal.

In need of completion, I'm lost.
He's left me. I'm coming undone.
as if to brusque winds I've been tossed.
i seek a sweet breeze. There are none.

His touch, like the warmth of the sun,
is gone. Only blackness i see.
He's left me. I'm coming undone.
Dark waters are swallowing me.

He gave me no cause for mistrust.
Vibrant was i when we'd begun.
But now I am turning to dust.
He’s left me. I’m coming undone.

Undone By Gps

I stand in a corner
with a flickering soul
reminiscent of a sentinel 
standing apt in a full armor suit,
now rusting at the seams,
Like an abandoned lighthouse
on a deserted isle
with a whirling glowing eye
scouring the choppy water
for the lost souls
amid gathering fog
and a foreboding storm.

No sirens of the sea
have sung in recent times
to lure those lost at sea 
to their rocky coast.

Premium Member A Mile Or Two Undone

she wears the blues
   like well worn shoes                           

   they got her this far


Premium Member come undone

detox, unglue, undo
why stagnate, why cling
ego has caged pristine soul
free it now, for spirit seeks to sing

Premium Member Undone Hidden Flaws

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There once was a garden in Thomaston
But all the hidden flaws show now in sun
     Bombarded by winter cold
     Delicate Easter dress bold
Became frozen, tattered, falling undone

Now that lovely garden in Thomaston
Back in early spring's golden rays of sun
      Rose blooms, tulips open tips
      Flawless are flowers no thrips
Remember Rose Trellis_ love's embrace spun

Premium Member Higher Education Undone

There once was a freshman from Thomaston
In ignorance wanted to have just fun
When facing failing grades
Played even more arcades
His higher education now undone  

Syllables: 7-10 lines 1,2, and 5(10)
5-7 syllables lines 3, 4(6)
Written: July 09, 2015
Inspired by Andrea's contest..
Quote chosen that was written by Mark Twain: "Education is the path from cocky ignorance to miserable uncertainty"..

Undone

I told Cupid to halt his arrow
I wasn’t trying to fall in love;
when I was in sorrow. 
He was so understanding,
He hatched his bow and went about his business
It took me a while to realise I didn’t like colour.
Black was majestic it strengthened my soul.
I met Lyssa the goddess of anger,
Told her she was blocking my view,
I wanted to watch my happiness descend 
And she went AWOL, 
Never had met her match so she wasn’t trying to be burned. 
Moving at my pace, I saw my past.
It flashed by me, I swear it was a whirlwind of emotions.
Seeing my clutches, tears, laughter, anger, sorrow
I knew I was never selfish.
So why didn't I feel a pulse.
Apollo came, with his golden lyre he played the blues.
He said bury yourself in music, bury yourself in writing.
So I did, I soured among the clouds,
I almost touched the stars.
My soul was free, my head was clear.
I was a little more selfish. 
Hecate came, with her aura of calm.
I felt myself crave solitude.
Time to myself, time to cut out the negative.
She said I could, so I did realising I loved it.  
Seeing my life with new eyes,
I also saw a blessing.
With his charisma and his boldness,
I felt my knees go weak,
But I wasn’t trying to fall in love,
Elpis came with his bow of hope, he said you were losing your mate.
No journey can ever be completed alone. 
So I took my journal and gave it to my blessing.
He said he wasn’t a reader but a believer.
my past was a measure of the weak,
Death was a given, life was a mystery
he wasn't trying to unravel it. 
He saw my incompleteness and still adored me. 
I told him I will be coming undone, I was not afraid anymore. 
He took me with open arms and whispered he will never let me go
An applause roared around me but the curtain never closed.
Only roses and glitters buried my feet and body.
Showing me a light I had never seen before. 
I felt blessed, I felt strengthened. 
I knew I was getting there. 

© Herzel Poshiwa

Sometimes Life Leaves Things Left Undone

Sometimes life leaves things left undone

Written By Dean Masciarelli

Friday, July 23, 2010


Sometimes life leaves things left undone
and relationships suddenly come to an end

And it can literally be very confusing at times

Yet all the answers lie 
deep within our minds

And those answers will be revealed 
to us in there proper place and time

But we have to understand that there is a 
purpose and a meaning 
behind everything that has ever happened

That we may not be able to comprehend

But there are always lessons to be learned
from every situation that we have ever been in

Because life has always been one big classroom

"digital Flag Coming Undone"

You stand waiting everyday for new incoming, you see the technology  standing your life
like a god, waiting for you to betray and your done, every man holds a passion for new
devices and new weapons, for then they cry jail for whom they killed, we all know this is
wrong, yet we love to see our hands full of misery and pain, breathing a life into
machines ain't funny, but every time mom, dad, granny, brother or sister are about to
leave to heaven or hell, oh you grab their soul by signing papers and putting their faded
and wrecked life into a machine, breath in and out they still gonna die, why is it so bad
to leave them rest forever in grave  than putting them inside a room alone in a disordered
depression for they to keep on dying slower and slower, now you love technology right?
Then why when the soldiers went to war they died in dozens like pigs because of our enemy
have enough technology to kill them all, i saw in my country every time a soldier died
their family went crying and desperate screaming "Why?" Why you think they died? Because
god let a big missile fall on him or them? Selfish indeed...

We are letting it get to our head, we are making valuable starts go to waste, in this days
people do not go home very happy if they don't get what they want, i know how a man fights
for freedom and is not this way, the flag is striking us with it same ambition of fatal
destruction, i wish we can all go home one way  or the other, alive! But the streets are
recklessly running in circles on same hell, same vision, is not like before that death was
the last chance, now no one is afraid of dying, that's why people are killing them self's
and killing others, we need fear to coats us again? Or accept our system has blind us to
for money? We been sold for priceless try outs...

I just wish the end comes better than i see it coming.

I Am Undone

She breathes heavily
The sand bag
rocks
tilts
it stops
she chokes
gasping
engulfing wisps of air
Sweat running down her body
She screams
love me he says
Smiling
She laughs
She looks down 
To the her torn and bloodied knuckles
A ring that was required upon her hand
The diamond smeared with scarlet blood
Tears stream down her face
She eyes the gym
It's Empty 
her mouth begins to move
She mumbles
Why !
why!
Why did I agree?...!!!
She walks away from the sand bag
She enters the gyms bathroom
her minds contemplation
beyond the control of containment
shouting ...
screaming...
What is it...!!!
uggghhh 
im to afraid to convey even share
its this 
its that
its this secret
 What im doing it is wrong…
her body trembles 
I don’t love him…!!!
Remember 
Remember
The money ….
Im, just doing it for the money….!!!
Father said ...
Father said....
The consumption of her guilt 
Its Reigns it embeds
 through out her heart 
Throughout her mind
I told father ....??!!!
I had been undone
I have been undone
I am undone
The angel he had dissented 
the demon he  emerged
she looks at herself in the mirror 
her blues eyes filled of water
she bends down 
she covers her face
with her hands
she screams
I am undone

The Road Not Undone

The road you started, you left not undone
You have risen with the morning sun
We give thanks to you Lord for taking away the sin
For all the glory, we know you have won
The road you started, you left not undone
You rose wth the new morning sun
We give thanks to you Lord for all you have done
The wine and the bread to remind us
We drank in one accord 
The road you started, you left not undone
You have broken the bonds 
And have lifted us taking us home
Upon the road you left undone

When Some Things Are Left Undone

When some things 
are left undone

Written By Dean Masciarelli

August 4, 2010 (2:37pm)


When some things 
are left undone

Between you 
and a loved one

And you know that 
everything 
will be coming to an end

Between you and them

It is far better to 
explain things
to the other person

If you have 
any 
respect for them

Because after
you are gone

At least they would have 
a better understanding
why everything went wrong

And it will make it much
easier for them to move on

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