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come undone

detox, unglue, undo why stagnate, why cling ego has caged pristine soul free it now, for spirit seeks to sing

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Date: 11/7/2023 8:03:00 AM
I love it, Unseeking Seeker. The ego is the culprit. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Bill
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Date: 11/7/2023 9:55:00 AM
thank you, Bill. ego, once instrumentalised like any limb, is fine, bcoz it helps us navigate earth life but we should know we are not this temporary entity
Date: 11/7/2023 3:47:00 AM
Once again beautiful! The idea of all is fine beneath the burdens
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Date: 11/7/2023 9:52:00 AM
row, row, row the boat, gently down the stream ….

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