come undone

detox, unglue, undo
why stagnate, why cling
ego has caged pristine soul
free it now, for spirit seeks to sing
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November 7, 2023 at 8:03 AM
I love it, Unseeking Seeker. The ego is the culprit. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Bill
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November 7, 2023 at 9:55 AM
thank you, Bill. ego, once instrumentalised like any limb, is fine, bcoz it helps us navigate earth life but we should know we are not this temporary entity
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