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Higher Education Undone

There once was a freshman from Thomaston
In ignorance wanted to have just fun
When facing failing grades
Played even more arcades
His higher education now undone  

Syllables: 7-10 lines 1,2, and 5(10)
5-7 syllables lines 3, 4(6)
Written: July 09, 2015
Inspired by Andrea's contest..
Quote chosen that was written by Mark Twain: "Education is the path from cocky ignorance to miserable uncertainty"..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:10 AM
Wonderful work Sara! Congrats on ur superb win!
Merryman Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Sara, I am sorry I said that wrong. It was the meter that was off. Not the syllable count!
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:29 PM
several people liked that quote of Twain's and you did a lovely job of demonstrating its lesson! I think limericks sound better when they have consistency in the lines' number of syllables. Just my opinion! Anyway, I was very pleased to see your poem and now to know you are its author. Congrats for your win.
A  Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your awesome win... LOVE SKAT
Wigley Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Congratulations, Sara, reminds me of a perilous misspent youth. Viv x
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Horsman Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 3:34 PM
This is so good Sara, good luck in the contest..
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Very clever Sara - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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