Undone By Gps

I stand in a corner
with a flickering soul
reminiscent of a sentinel 
standing apt in a full armor suit,
now rusting at the seams,
Like an abandoned lighthouse
on a deserted isle
with a whirling glowing eye
scouring the choppy water
for the lost souls
amid gathering fog
and a foreboding storm.

No sirens of the sea
have sung in recent times
to lure those lost at sea 
to their rocky coast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kiser Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 4:33 PM
That was excellent! I fav'd it.
Roper Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Abdul, thank you for entering the contest, congratulations on your win! :) ~*
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 11:17 PM
Your entry, if for the contest, is so unusual and very impressive Abdul! Bravo! : )
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