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Never Undone

On this Sunday I serve my Lord His ways are true His love is reward I knew as a boy he saved my soul gave me life made me whole His love is everything my heart has changed In him is forgiveness my future arranged God's plan was perfect His Word was sent to redeem our souls our death to prevent our way to heaven is through his Son, His blood covers all and is N-E-V-E-R U-N-D-O-N-E. Written by John Aaron Green 1-8-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/26/2013 12:39:00 PM
Ahmen... Beautiful.
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Date: 4/22/2012 4:59:00 AM
Just back to read again; you manage to give a great message in your poetry. Hope the sun shines on you today John! :)
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Date: 3/31/2012 8:14:00 AM
Amen, He is everything, light and love. Hope your doing great. Saw your comment on one of my pieces and remembered the good ole days of Lulu.
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:42:00 PM
HI John, you are on my mind; miss you heere and pray you are all right. Remember, behind every cloud is a silver lining eventurally. Lizzie
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:58:00 AM
very awesome write like the build up to the ending
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Date: 2/23/2012 10:16:00 AM
Just need to keep in touch and read your words John, sure miss you and hope things are ok with you.
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Date: 2/16/2012 2:46:00 PM
Where are you John? Your words are missed by many...We need more inspiring words like these here..X-celent write my friend!
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Date: 1/18/2012 7:50:00 AM
As usual John you send a positve message we all can relate to. well done. Anne
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:30:00 AM
One of my favorite poets. Beautifully written!
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:13:00 AM
Certainly need to read again; this has so much in it to think about and the truth of it rings loud and clear. Hope you are having a nice weekend John. :)
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:50:00 PM
amen
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Date: 1/13/2012 7:31:00 AM
Mr. Green...you could just quit your day job so you can write more poetry.....
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Date: 1/10/2012 7:45:00 AM
Unique description - I like how you portrayed this - an especially powerful image at the end :)
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:54:00 PM
Wow..John, a mighty strong poem of knowing and feeling devotion always... Your poem is very excellent... even though we are not walking in the best of life... We know our hearts... And how humble we.fall to the truth never undone... Perfect... God bless...pd
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Date: 1/9/2012 1:52:00 PM
God bless You. soupmail.
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:37:00 PM
This reads almost like a modern day Psalm. Very well written and descriptive. Kudos to you John.
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Date: 1/8/2012 5:37:00 PM
Hi John, such a lovely verse that honors your commitment to the faith that sustains you. You always have an amazing way of giving the reader an insight into your soul. I feel I know you through your words and it is such a nice way to find a person.
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Date: 1/8/2012 4:34:00 PM
A true testimony to your faith, John..well written and says it all...."The Word was made man...." Thanks for sharing this with us. Annalise
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Date: 1/8/2012 4:33:00 PM
Food for the soul...your poetry. Filled with the Love of God and a wonderful witness. Good to see you here also...and no I'm no longer on the other site. I just didn't go back when lulu shut down. I tried a couple other sites but have found the Soup is a great fit. I do post on a few facebook poet pages also. Nice to see you still writing !! Take care and God Bless !!
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Date: 1/8/2012 1:26:00 PM
Your writing speaks volumes of your faith John and I could not agree with you more on this one. Hope your Sunday is a blessed one :) tc Wilma
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Date: 1/8/2012 12:32:00 PM
Thank you John for reeding my poem....and yes I am a teacher and a nurs.--------------- I like "Never Undone" touching John. oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/8/2012 12:06:00 PM
Well written! And very true!
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:24:00 AM
this is very nice and you make me feel a bit guilty to be missing ;part of church today. I stayed home with hubbie to try to catch up on my comments but will leave the house in half an hour for church library duty. Thanks so much for your sweet comments the past few days. when I am back on my own computer again, I can see your poems more quickly GREAT idea for your poem. andrea
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:53:00 AM
Oooo la la! This flows from the heart like a succulent honey! God is honored and lifted thru this beautiful poem. What a wonderful way to honor Him on the Sabbath!!! Oh, and by the way, your couplets on here are excellent too...don't switch your brand of coffee if you wrote this during breakfast! You are on a roll! ha ha. Like the caps on the end too! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:40:00 AM
PRECIOUS WORDS OF HIS GLORYHY JOHN..THANKXX FOR SPREADING THE WORD ON PS.. WE ARE THE VESSELS.. LUV.. APPRECIATE WARM WORDS OF COMFORT AND JOY TODAY.. AM TRYING TO GET BACK ON TRACK..FAMILY A BIG ASSET NOW.. KEEP ME IN PRAYER AS I DO U MY FRIEND.. AND AS WE SHARE WORDS OF POETRY AND LUV.. IN CHRIST..WHO IS LOVE...
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