Sara Kendrick Poet Limerick

Undone Hidden Flaws

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There once was a garden in Thomaston
But all the hidden flaws show now in sun
     Bombarded by winter cold
     Delicate Easter dress bold
Became frozen, tattered, falling undone

Now that lovely garden in Thomaston
Back in early spring's golden rays of sun
      Rose blooms, tulips open tips
      Flawless are flowers no thrips
Remember Rose Trellis_ love's embrace spun

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 5:20 AM A belated congratulations on your placement Sara, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2011 at 4:05 PM Hello, Sara. Nice to be able to see your poem here on the list, and a big congratulations on your win. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser February 5, 2011 at 4:58 AM Many congratulations Sara on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2011 at 10:34 PM CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) Sara~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.

Joyce Johnson February 4, 2011 at 7:08 PM Well let's hope that by Easter we run into the lovey garden. Congratulations on your win, Sara. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 4:27 PM Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these two limericks. Where is Thomaston?

Carrie Richards February 4, 2011 at 12:22 PM This is a lovely poem of comparisons, Sara! So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle,!! Congratulations! love Carrie !

Kory Calhoun February 4, 2011 at 11:32 AM Hi Sara - Beautifully written. I loved this poem! One of my favorites. I would have placed it FIRST! Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC

Ralph Taylor February 4, 2011 at 11:08 AM Congrats for a well deserved win, Sara. Nice going. xxxRalph

Dr.Ram Mehta February 4, 2011 at 10:07 AM Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Sara

Elaine George February 4, 2011 at 8:28 AM Congrats on your big win, Sara. Lainie

Tahera Mannan February 4, 2011 at 7:04 AM Such lovely images Sara.Many congratulations for this top win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 4, 2011 at 6:45 AM Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv...

Deb Radke February 4, 2011 at 6:39 AM Wow. I love this limerick. Full of hidden meanings, waiting to be drawn out slowly like spring's promise. Well done. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. Most deserved. Love, Deb

Skat A February 4, 2011 at 12:44 AM SARA~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat

Debbie Guzzi February 1, 2011 at 2:11 PM interesting to see the layout used for a serious write. Light & Love

Christine A Kysely January 29, 2011 at 10:13 AM Very Nice...I like the way you laid out your lines!!! Visually appealing as well as enjoyable to read! Christine

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2011 at 9:55 AM This speaks about the returning rewnewing warmth of spring. I await it as always with eagerness. Great message. LUv, Andrea

Charles Melody Lightning Ink January 27, 2011 at 9:16 AM enticing and inspiring art work here. love, lightning ink.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 24, 2011 at 7:40 PM Very interesting and beautiful analogies of life with the garden Sara.. good luck in the contest my friend... thankxx for the blog update also luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 24, 2011 at 3:40 PM Fine rhyming with wonderful images define hidden flaws, Sara

Nathan Hannen January 24, 2011 at 2:33 PM A pleasure to read Sara, Thanks for posting. A beautiful contrasting piece, thanks Nathan