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Undone Hidden Flaws

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There once was a garden in Thomaston
But all the hidden flaws show now in sun
     Bombarded by winter cold
     Delicate Easter dress bold
Became frozen, tattered, falling undone

Now that lovely garden in Thomaston
Back in early spring's golden rays of sun
      Rose blooms, tulips open tips
      Flawless are flowers no thrips
Remember Rose Trellis_ love's embrace spun

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 5:20:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your placement Sara, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 4:05:00 PM

Hello, Sara. Nice to be able to see your poem here on the list, and a big congratulations on your win. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 2/5/2011 4:58:00 AM

Many congratulations Sara on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2011 10:34:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) Sara~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/4/2011 7:08:00 PM

Well let's hope that by Easter we run into the lovey garden. Congratulations on your win, Sara. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 4:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these two limericks. Where is Thomaston?

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/4/2011 12:22:00 PM

This is a lovely poem of comparisons, Sara! So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle,!! Congratulations! love Carrie !

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/4/2011 11:32:00 AM

Hi Sara - Beautifully written. I loved this poem! One of my favorites. I would have placed it FIRST! Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/4/2011 11:08:00 AM

Congrats for a well deserved win, Sara. Nice going. xxxRalph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/4/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Sara

Elaine George

Date: 2/4/2011 8:28:00 AM

Congrats on your big win, Sara. Lainie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/4/2011 7:04:00 AM

Such lovely images Sara.Many congratulations for this top win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 6:45:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv...

Deb Radke

Date: 2/4/2011 6:39:00 AM

Wow. I love this limerick. Full of hidden meanings, waiting to be drawn out slowly like spring's promise. Well done. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. Most deserved. Love, Deb

Skat A

Date: 2/4/2011 12:44:00 AM

SARA~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/1/2011 2:11:00 PM

interesting to see the layout used for a serious write. Light & Love

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/29/2011 10:13:00 AM

Very Nice...I like the way you laid out your lines!!! Visually appealing as well as enjoyable to read! Christine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2011 9:55:00 AM

This speaks about the returning rewnewing warmth of spring. I await it as always with eagerness. Great message. LUv, Andrea

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/27/2011 9:16:00 AM

enticing and inspiring art work here. love, lightning ink.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 7:40:00 PM

Very interesting and beautiful analogies of life with the garden Sara.. good luck in the contest my friend... thankxx for the blog update also luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2011 3:40:00 PM

Fine rhyming with wonderful images define hidden flaws, Sara

Nathan Hannen

Date: 1/24/2011 2:33:00 PM

A pleasure to read Sara, Thanks for posting. A beautiful contrasting piece, thanks Nathan