Best Thaw Poems


Premium Member Scene of Crystal

Permafrost upon the boughs,
in a glistening diamond wood;
where the water meets the Terra,
thin sheets in semi-melt
perform a slow ballet.

Premium Member Thaw the Wintry Snow

Winter has cast its strangling hold inside and outside.
The joys I have known are gone.
Cold winds blow bleak and harsh.
The flowers in my garden have wilted and withered.
All things sweet have passed and flown away.
Flakes of snow, layer on layer, lie piled within,
And harden as rocks with worms of fear inching their way,
To eat away all the delicate buds of hope.

Spring, Oh! Spring grace me with your regal smile,
Brightening my sky with constellations of stars.
Crash down the walls that segregate, leaving me a fugitive,
And pour love's balm into my bruised soul.
Possess me as an unseen benevolent spirit,
Thawing the frozen interiors with your warm sunshine!

Premium Member Spring Thaw

spring thaw
the ice breaks-
into song


Thaw At Crowsnest Pass

THAW     AT    CROWSNEST     PASS  

Huge mountains massed and  cliffs  sheer.  It’s  March
And endless  blue  sky  cold is held back by the Chinook arch,
Snowy prairies rolling into their  thousand-mile realm  -  
The landscape  is gigantic, majestic, orchestrated to overwhelm.

But I stand and watch the lake-ice thaw,
Surprised by the tiny delicate music  -
Descant  ice -  jingling,  jangling,  tinkling
In delicate accompaniment  to the giant symphony.                                       
Ice chunks tangled in slow waves with the wind
Tiny  tintinnabulation before total ablation.
There is silence  and  harmony  around the sound,
The small melody of the ice breaking  into spring’s  chorus.




Note:   Crowsnest Pass is the southernmost way through the Rocky Mountains in Canada

Premium Member Deliquescence: To Thaw a Frozen Heart

Detached from reality
He gazes haughtily
From the cold aloofness
Of his desolate pinnacle...
Far below
Dressed in vivid green and mauve
She patiently waits
Yearning to catch his wandering eye.

His face is stone cold, snow white
And yet he seems to notice me
A fledgling meadow
Needing sustenance to survive...
May passion's fire grow to melt his heart
So I, too, may thrive
And add a touch of colour
To his world of black and white.

----------------------------------------------------       
Co-written by Paul Callus & Carolyn Devonshire

Premium Member Deliquescence: To Thaw a Frozen Heart

Detached from reality
He gazes haughtily
From the cold aloofness
Of his desolate pinnacle...
Far below
Dressed in vivid green and mauve
She patiently waits
Yearning to catch his wandering eye.

His face is stone cold, snow white
And yet he seems to notice me
A fledgling meadow
Needing sustenance to survive...
May passion's fire grow to melt his heart
So I, too, may thrive
And add a touch of colour
To his world of black and white.

----------------------------------------------------       
Co-written by Paul Callus & Carolyn Devonshire 

© March 2017


Premium Member January Thaw

JANUARY THAW

the freeze is over
gods given up hot cocoa
all nature’s things weep

the freeze has ended
sun struck branches are dripping
nut hunt thaw is on

the freeze has ended
temperature 33
icicles crying

the freeze has ended
and foolish thoughts turn to spring
winter gods chuckle

Premium Member The Thaw

The bright sun shines
  on the lawn, newly thawed.
By this beautiful day
  I am humbled and awed.

Spring is still several
  weeks from today.
The bite in the air says
 Winter's not gone away.

Birds are flittering
  through trees of green
and if this is Winter
  it's the loveliest I've seen.

The cold and I 
  do not get along
but I can forgive it
  when I hear the bird's song.

A beautiful day
  all shiny and new
on grass newly thawed,
now covered with dew.



19/01/2013

The Thaw

tiny drops of water cut through
 folds of refuse
 laying dormant in the 
crest of spring 
where fissures of melting ice
retreat.

I lay sprawled against the top sheet 
Eyes fixed on the tempered glass 
before me 
drawing circles with the 
heat from my breath.

The yellow light, daunting, 
and new, creeps slowly 
aware of the struggle ahead
 
Winter's refuse marks its ground
at times, forcing the sun back
tucked high in grey skies.

The yellow light  rebounds 
stronger this time
awaiting winter's demise.

Spring Thaw

Drip...Drip...Drip

Slowly---Too Slowly

The melt begins

hour by hour...day by day

warmth knocking to come in

peeling off the ice...piece by piece

thawing...layer by layer

exposing a fertile ground

starting fresh...starting anew

planting the seeds

nurturing it with love

growing stronger and stronger

fresh spring feelings blossoming in full bloom 

creating a brand new world
© Tim Smith  Create an image from this poem.

Ducks Long For Spring Thaw

skaters slide on ice

white mountains rise behind lake...

ducks long for spring thaw



Entry for Michael Falotico's "An Haiku from Your Window" contest
by Diane Locksley

Premium Member Spring Thaw

SPRING THAW

what a sorry sight
the poor drowned grass muddied o’er
dirty snow with tracks
but the skies are thankful for
a chance to the earth restore

and the animals
seem to walk with quicker step
breathing earth’s freshness
are aware but not pensive
accepting nature’s goodness

Premium Member Spring Thaw

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                                            sun melts ice, water

                                      stream rushes toward river...

                                           calms in warm ocean


                                                     

                                                   Written 3/2/2022

                       Contest: H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry
                                     Sponsor: Constance  LaFrance
                                                     ~~ 2nd~~

Thaw

Sometimes I slip 
slip to that world of numb smiles,
flavourless fruit,
damp emotion--
words so watered with the heart's blood
they weigh like anchors down my chest.

The food suddenly tasteless,
colour lacks its lustre,
and a frost 
crystalizes along my veins 
to the centre of my eyes.

Then the thaw is so quiet and subtle
like innocent children 
sneaking from their bed,
until I feel in my fingertips
a tingling energy 
I want to unleash.

Premium Member The Spring Thaw

As frozen winter marshes start to thaw
with sunlight shining on the gentle hills,
the fingertips of springtime softly draw
on cattails growing midst the warming thrills.
When dewdrops form on buds by nature’s law,
the melting hearts start yearning to fulfill,
and nature’s rousing cycle starts anew;
to frigid winter days I bid adieu.


February 19, 2021

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