The Thaw

The bright sun shines
  on the lawn, newly thawed.
By this beautiful day
  I am humbled and awed.

Spring is still several
  weeks from today.
The bite in the air says
 Winter's not gone away.

Birds are flittering
  through trees of green
and if this is Winter
  it's the loveliest I've seen.

The cold and I 
  do not get along
but I can forgive it
  when I hear the bird's song.

A beautiful day
  all shiny and new
on grass newly thawed,
now covered with dew.



19/01/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/30/2013 10:08:00 AM
A lovely poem Francine, bring the sun into your heart. - Have a great new day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2013 2:28:00 PM
Francine a delightful write. Light and it flowed very well. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/28/2013 8:30:00 AM
lovely visuals grace these lines Francine .. superbly emoted to enjoy .. thankxx for my big win in your contest ..it surely uplifted my spirit .. thankxx for prayers and concern during my health crisis .. on slow mend now but grateful to be alive to read your words my friend ..luv
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:02:00 PM
Enjoy the warm weather whenever you can up there in British Columbia. The state of Washington just south of you is just as cold as your province.
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Date: 1/24/2013 10:38:00 AM
Ahh!!Enjoyed reading your creative verse..It is warmer and sunny here today but windy and still cold to me..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2013 1:45:00 PM
Hi Francine, love your positive attitude in this beautiful poem. Nature can affect us in many ways, there is no doubt. Well written and very uplifting, a joy to read! Hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 1/22/2013 5:55:00 AM
Where do you live... I want to move there! Temp today, 8 degrees F... brrrrr! Spring can't come soon enough! Hugs, Jack
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Date: 1/21/2013 3:18:00 PM
Hey Francine..winter does give us an excuse to rest & with all the bugs going around it's a good idea to stay IN. Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:37:00 PM
Enchanting write! :) So glad that I got to meet you thanks to my silly little couplet! :) Thanks for your encouraging words. This poem is so lovely...each season has its beauty! Hugs!
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:07:00 PM
francine tell me where you are again? Is spring truly only several weeks away for you? I think for us, it's at least two more whole months. I really enjoyed this one!
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Date: 1/20/2013 1:19:00 PM
Can especially relate to verse four. Sound like you wrote it for us old people.
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Date: 1/20/2013 7:26:00 AM
Francine a very nice picture painted here although we are under lots of snow....David
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