Daver Austin Poet Tanka

Spring Thaw

SPRING THAW

what a sorry sight
the poor drowned grass muddied o’er
dirty snow with tracks
but the skies are thankful for
a chance to the earth restore

and the animals
seem to walk with quicker step
breathing earth’s freshness
are aware but not pensive
accepting nature’s goodness

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Joe Maverick March 13, 2014 at 6:14 PM Thats it Daver accepting things, working with through or because of situations..' and retaining the clarity of mind to change course when needed

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2014 at 9:44 PM but at least it means that horrid winter is leaving us. Nice one for the month of march, Daver.