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Spring Thaw

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                                            sun melts ice, water

                                      stream rushes toward river...

                                           calms in warm ocean


                                                     

                                                   Written 3/2/2022

                       Contest: H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry
                                     Sponsor: Constance  LaFrance
                                                     ~~ 2nd~~

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/26/2022 2:54:00 PM

Congrats on the high finish. This is a poem that exemplifies the circle of life through nature. Have a joyful day, my friend. Bill

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/27/2022 7:55:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words, and encouragement, Bill, Blessings ~ Debra

Ann Foster

Date: 3/17/2022 2:32:00 PM

What a lovely journey. Well written. Ann

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/18/2022 6:10:00 PM

Thank you, Ann, for your kind words and stopping by to comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2022 4:34:00 PM

Back with my congrats to you , Debra.

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/12/2022 2:34:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea you are so sweet, to comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo

Date: 3/10/2022 2:19:00 AM

Love how we move from ice to Oceans. Shalom shalom in Jesus

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/10/2022 4:42:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words, and encouragement, Anil. Blessings ~ Debra

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2022 8:31:00 AM

Debra, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/8/2022 5:35:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. I'm honored and humbled that you chose my poem. I'm still new to poetry, as I have not used a lot of forms. Your acknowledgement gave me encouragement. Many thanks and Blessings ~ Debra

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/6/2022 11:13:00 PM

A clever well created and crafted Haiku dear Debra. Very vivid scenes. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/8/2022 5:37:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer. For your kind words, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/5/2022 1:33:00 PM

Oooh, I love this :) We have no ice to melt where I live, but I so remember from where we use to live, after a cold snowy long winter, the joy of when the snow and ice melted. What a wonderful Haiku! <3 Hope your day is sunny, beautiful and blessed Debra <3 ~BJ

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/5/2022 4:18:00 PM

Hi! BJ, I enjoyed your comment. It was a warm and sunny day outside today. We were out cleaning up the yard from the last ice storm, which broke a lot of limbs off of the trees. I can't wait until spring. The daffodils are peeking up through the mulch, so it won't be much longer. Have a good evening. Blessings ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2022 2:46:00 PM

I like this one. I can't imagine how people survive the snow and ice for the long winter, but people do. We just have to try to survive the summers here in the south. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Debra L Brown
Date: 3/5/2022 4:24:00 PM

Hi Sara, Thanks for your comment. I enjoy reading your poems. You are lucky to live where there is no snow. It was a beautiful day today in the high 60's. It won't be much longer until spring. Enjoy the rest of your weekend. Blessings ~ Debra