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Thaw At Crowsnest Pass

THAW AT CROWSNEST PASS Huge mountains massed and cliffs sheer. It’s March And endless blue sky cold is held back by the Chinook arch, Snowy prairies rolling into their thousand-mile realm - The landscape is gigantic, majestic, orchestrated to overwhelm. But I stand and watch the lake-ice thaw, Surprised by the tiny delicate music - Descant ice - jingling, jangling, tinkling In delicate accompaniment to the giant symphony. Ice chunks tangled in slow waves with the wind Tiny tintinnabulation before total ablation. There is silence and harmony around the sound, The small melody of the ice breaking into spring’s chorus. Note: Crowsnest Pass is the southernmost way through the Rocky Mountains in Canada

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Date: 5/11/2011 1:18:00 PM
You have taken me there.....as if I am sailing over the Rockies, to the sound of a classical symphony,....I can almost feel the chill of the snow covered peaks! Lovely poem, Syd!
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:58:00 PM
Very nicely done, Sydney. Great descriptive words. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/2/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations Syd on your win in Jimmy's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:04:00 PM
wow Syd I could hear it! Gotta love that word "tintinnabulation" and your melodic use of alliteration with it! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/1/2011 4:23:00 PM
Ohhhhh, onomatopoeia! As a reader, I am hearing the orchestra of breaking ice as it thaws! Horray for this awesome spring piece. A favorite! I am sending it to my art/music professor who will adore this write the same! High five, Sydney! Gwendolen
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Date: 11/9/2010 11:50:00 AM
How beautiful! You make it sound magical.
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Date: 11/9/2010 10:50:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work.... sounds cold
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