Ducks Long For Spring Thaw

skaters slide on ice

white mountains rise behind lake...

ducks long for spring thaw



Entry for Michael Falotico's "An Haiku from Your Window" contest
by Diane Locksley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rutherford Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 5:10 PM
Very well done Diane . Haiku poems are so much fun to do , a lot said in so few words. Anne
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February 21, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Brilliant piece of imagery. You have painted a beautiful landscape on the canvas by your striking words. The last line 'ducks long for spring thaw' reveals a lot of longings and expectations for spring to come soon. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your superb contest entry. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Diane Locksley
Mehta Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Nice scene you have painted with equally good images, Diane
Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 12:31 PM
A very descriptive haiku. I think Mike will like this one.
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