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Premium Member Dragonfly

DRAGON FLY:

I was sitting in my sunroom 
Glancing at the sky 
When I noticed on my window screen 
There was a big old dragonfly
 
I opened up my window 
So that I could set him free 
But he just stayed there humming 
As if he'd say to me
 
I see you Mr. Human 
You're thoughtful and so kind 
But I think I'll watch the sunset 
That is, of course if you don't mind
 
So I fetched a spoon of water 
And I got a crumb of bread 
And I put it on my window sill 
Before I went to bed 
 
When I woke up in the morning 
The dragonfly was free
And beside the spoon there was a note 
It said, thank you, to me.

May

May
There was a very old woman named May.
In a nursing home she would stay.
Taken from chair to her bed;
Was blind and had to be fed.
No words, just a constant muttering sound.
No family or friends ever came around.
A young nurse, recently hired
Did much more than required.
Nurse Pat talked of her day
In a most jubilant way.
Often combed May’s hair,
And provided fresh sheets.
Shared her chocolates,
And other fine treats. 
Frail May was always left in her room.
It did not matter, others seemed to assume.
One sunny day
The kind nurse found a wheelchair.
She gently lifted May on
And pushed her everywhere.
They ended their trip.
A sunroom seemed fit.
To the nurse’s surprise…
Tears flowed from May’s eyes.
Barbara Campbell

Premium Member Death of Mother Bird

A pretty bird sings sweetly upon a fence outside my window,
     Until a cat comes creeping and pulls a wing down;
Sad little bird lay on the ground within sharp claws, trembling.

Struggling to get free with no real hope of that happening,
     Her feeble attempts no match for a feral cat;
Oh sadness, I know it is natural for that wild green eyed cat.

Finished, the cat moves on- it was not hunger just a game,
     Close by a nest of baby birds is loudly tweeting;
The pretty bird looks up to the blue sky with one last chirp.
____

I am sure she is dead yet I find myself rushing outside to her,
     A basket quickly grabbed, I pick her frail body up;
And bring her inside- I notice that although in shock, NOT DEAD.

And right away I go back outside to find that nest of babies,
     And now they are all quite alive in my sunroom;
Oh, the chirping is loud, deafening, but it brings me happiness.

     What started out a poem of death became a poem of happiness -

____________________________________
May 6, 2016

Poetry/Verse/Death of Mother Bird
Copyright Protected, ID 16-787-108-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Premium Member Quiet Time

My sunroom opens wide in three directions.
I feel as though I am in the midst of nature
in all seasons of the year, but I am enclosed 
safely in my little quiet room.  In the spring 
I can see far to the south and east, many
acres of tulips or daffodils to inspire me.
To the west I see my neighbors fields which 
may be any of varied crops. As the crops grow and
mature, I see the changing of the seasons.
Summer was late in coming this year.

     ----------------------------

	Cheated Summer

Laughing September entering
Dressed in her bright array.
Startled Summer calls on friend Sun
To keep Autumn away.

Summer had waited for slow Spring
To take leisurely leave.
With Fall demanding his full due,
Thieved time she can’t retrieve.

Premium Member From Kitty To Cat

In seven months he’s grown into
a fat and sleek and loving cat.
I’ve kept him from the snow and rain
and predators and woes like that.

A small grey kitty visits him
through sunroom glass door every day.
After she cleans her plate she stays
to bat at him as if to say

I know you have it nice and warm.
Your meal is a meow away.
I’d like to join you but I fear
all human kind, so I’m a stray.

I try my best to coax her in
that she might live in luxury too.
My slightest move sends her away
and there is nothing I can do.

Raccoons and possums come to call.
He watches as they find her dish.
Perhaps he’d like to join them there,
but I’m afraid to grant his wish.

In the big world, danger abounds.
I do my best to meet his needs.
So he can only sit and watch
the little grey cat as she feeds.

By: Joyce 3/17/11



Won a 6th in contest

I Took the Dare and Survived It

Anxiety about what I might think preceded me
As I sat on the stool in the middle of my living room
Ready to think about who knows what,
I relaxed for a moment and then closed my eyes.

Gratitude and peacefulness were my first feelings.
I smiled inside thinking about how literal Ingrid had taken me.
He remembered that I intended to write at 3:00 a.m.
As the clock ticked, Ingrid kept time for me…

Fear crossed my mind next, afraid of my own thoughts,
What they might be.  Nightmares.  Horrors. 
Repressed experiences dreaded.
But thankfully, the ringing in my head saved me.
At least for that moment…

A few things slipped in.  The Jeffery McDonald murders
That took place when I was stationed at Ft. Bragg, N.C.
The horror had anguished me on an off over the years.
Then, I heard the crickets again.  Thankfully.

Next, a hit and run accident that was reported in the news years ago
Flashed through my mind…anxiety from Army days.
It had happened on a road we sometimes traveled.
Fear, reality check, and cricket sounds followed.

Yes, it is that cricket sound that I enjoy so much.
It took me to the natural world in all its beauty.
Little seeds germinating in my sunroom...  
Crickets outside making their noise; I smiled again.

And the crickets in my head chirped.
I was thinking that this isn’t so bad after all.
I have learned to find happiness inside myself
Then, Ingrid said, “Time’s up.”

I felt relieved.

© March 1, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

My DARE: Dane, you picked Dare* I dare you to sit in the middle of your living room... 
(on a chair if you have toooo!) Close your eyes, and feel for 5 minutes... (you will need a 
stop watch that alert you when the 5 minutes are up. During them 5 minutes, you have 
to feel everything, allow your strong emotions to feel. Even if you have little one's are 
running or your cat is purring at your feet. Don't allow it to bother you. You have to 
concentrate and find that one spot in the back of your mind. The part that digs real 
deep into every feeling we forget is there. After the 5 minutes are up... Sit in the spot 
where you write, and write for 10 minutes, Write about every thought that passed 
through your mind in a poetic way, sad~happy~ mad, crazy.. and so on... Take us deep 
into your mind... Thank you..pd

Confession…I wrote more than 10 minutes…time slipped up on me.


Premium Member Spring Love

My cat loves the spring
She listens to the birdies sing

From the sunroom she watches out
to all the changes coming about

But now she sees another cat
and she paws the window acknowledging that

Though she's an indoor cat to his outdoors
could true love ever be in store

I now feed them both, Stella and Midnight
And to watch them display their affection is quite a sight

Monday, April 25, 2022

Premium Member My Sun Room

I've never known a fixed address.  I love the home we've made for three years in our rental house so I'm sad that it's now up for sale.  Last night, I sat in the sunroom thinking of how much I'll miss the joy I feel while in that room.

two walls are all window, one an eastern exposure
the other walls, floor and ceiling are old red, knotty wood
the brick fireplace has a beautifully carved, simple mantel
approximately twenty houseplants on antique stools thrive
on the floor among the plants is a life-sized, carved, wooden swan
many mobiles of either angels or hearts hang from the ceiling
on the mantel sits my collection of antique weather vanes
there are five, mismatched chairs in a semicircle
two spindle leg tables sit among the five chairs
on one table is an imitation antique radio tuned to light rock
in a corner, on a stand we built, is an electric keyboard
on one wall in a case we built, there is a dartboard
and everywhere in the room are memories of good, fulfilling times spent




... CayCay
August 6, 2019

Premium Member An Angel In the Sky

Yesterday afternoon I heard the very sad news of the passing of a dear friend of mine. After hearing of this I went into my sunroom and just sat there starring into the sky thinking about him and all the great and memorable times that we had shared together. I really don't know if this was my mind playing tricks on me or god himself showing me that my friend was on his way to heaven. As I was looking teary-eyed and dumbfoundedly into the clear blue sky. I noticed a small white cloud all by itself with no other clouds insight. I watched it as it slowly dissipated and vanished. I recall saying to myself "wow, it's like life, it can come and go just like that, one minute it's here and the next minute it's not." In my entire life I have never seen what I have saw a few seconds later. What I saw was that little white cloud forming again out of nowhere. As I was watching it, the cloud transformed into an almost perfect shaped heart. Then within a few seconds, this was amazing, it transformed again into an angel. A few seconds after, it transformed again into what appeared to look like an angel that was carrying a person behind itself as the person was lying on a bed with his hands folded on his waist and looking peaceful. Believe me not, you really had to see what I saw to believe this beautiful moment I witnessed. It had to be the lord sending me this message and letting me know that he was in good hands and on his way to heaven.  An unbelievable experience or my mind just adrift, either way he is on his way.

Premium Member The Birds

The lake was beautiful and calm as you see yourself in it.
The surroundings were made of tall autumn grass. 
Leaf's are shedding off aspen trees with cattails near 
the mouth of a lazy river. 
The setting sun brought out the beauty of autumn's color.
Using my cheap fishing pole, I cast out my bait into the lake.

As I watched my line slowly drift to the pristine lake.
A sparrow then flew into my line and tangled itself in it.
Without hesitation, I reeled in my line with the sparrow on it.
Gently I held the bird in my hand and untangled it from my line.
Amazingly, the sparrow remained calm as I untangled it.
It sat in my hand for a moment, and I cast it into the air, and it took flight.

There have been many more rescues of birds in my care.
One was a blackbird that flew into our sunroom.
It was hot in there, and the bird was in distress. 
Its mouth was open and breathing hard.
I lifted up my finger to it, and incredibly it jumped on it.
I whisked it outside, and it remained on my finger 
until it closed its mouth and flew away.

Another rescue was with a green Hummingbird.
It flew into my screen door, and it was stuck.
Calmly, I slowly wrapped my hands around 
it as not to hurt its wings.
It remained calm in my hands, and I tossed it into the air
and it flew away.

Life, given a chance to live, will flourish before your eyes.

Premium Member The Art of Gardening

  
"Attitude, love, and delight can color a garden as surely as flowers."

                                                      Quote - by Constance

When the birds sing and flowers bloom,
the air tells me that it is spring;
sun washing away winter gloom,
and a hued garden sun will bring.

Memories of mom's garden cling,
I promise flowers for her tomb;
from her I know each garden thing,
when the birds sing and flowers bloom.

Seeds begin in a glass sunroom,
soon, the leaves are doing a fling;
the sunroom is now a greenroom,
the air tells me that it is spring.

Bright flowers bring bees that may sting,
and button roses for a groom;
and I love each sweet butter's wing,
sun washing away winter gloom.

I love each hummer's feather plume,
each day my garden worshiping;
I love the scents and sweet perfume,
and a hued garden sun will bring.

Oh, see vines like green blooming string,
be humble and never assume;
the blooms are always queen and king,
till autumn winds and rain consume;
when the birds sing.

____________________
March 14, 2023

Poetry/Rondeau Redouble/The Art Of Gardening
Copyright Protected, ID  03-1531-548-14
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France 

Written for the  Standard contest, Double The Fun
sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 04/06/2023

Third Place

Premium Member Freeloader

Cardinal peeking
Red flashes in my sunroom
Seeks window feeder

          Empty feeding box
          Attractive indolent bird
          Pecks at my window

                    Angrily flitting
                    Eyes industrious robin
                    Pulling at a worm


April 28, 2021

Premium Member Sawing Logs

The sunroom in the afternoon
I’m on the couch; Missy, the floor.
We both are right competitive
when working on the loudest snore.
Poor Frances has her headphones on;
it’s that or likely lose her mind.
Or so she says, but when I woke,
I heard her sawing logs in kind.
© Jeff Kyser  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member I Buried a Bluejay Today

I buried a bluejay today.
He flew with grace into a window pane.
From my sunroom I watched and heard the Kaplunk.

I buried a bluejay today.
I watched him take his last breaths.
Broken neck aside the rose bush.

I buried a bluejay today.
Along with some vegetables so he could decay.
And blanketed gently with some fresh soil.

I buried a bluejay today.
If I could have saved his life, it would have been my pleasure.
But God works in mysterious ways.

I buried a bluejay today.

Premium Member Through the Sunroom Shades 1

As the sunray's beam ~ through my sunroom's shades 
And the warmth of summer ~ slowly fades 
My old heart soothes ~ when flowers bloom 
Fireworks boom ~  in night parades
 
Songbirds singing ~ in backyard baths 
Children playing ~ out bursting laughs  
Ocean's beaches ~ morning boat rides 
Swimming, fishing ~ floating rafts
 
Four or "Fore" ~ an eighteen hole 
The groundhog's call ~ bless his soul 
His tale a myth ~ his truth be told
His course, of course ~ a summer's stroll
 
Priceless moments ~ in summer's sun 
Love it, enjoy it ~ so much fun 
Summer season ~ I do adore 
My favorite season ~ there be it none 


The Dog Days Endure Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden
9/5/2018

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