Through the Sunroom Shades 1

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Although I like all the season's. I really don't think there is a season that beats the summer when it comes to fun.

As the sunray's beam ~ through my sunroom's shades And the warmth of summer ~ slowly fades My old heart soothes ~ when flowers bloom Fireworks boom ~ in night parades Songbirds singing ~ in backyard baths Children playing ~ out bursting laughs Ocean's beaches ~ morning boat rides Swimming, fishing ~ floating rafts Four or "Fore" ~ an eighteen hole The groundhog's call ~ bless his soul His tale a myth ~ his truth be told His course, of course ~ a summer's stroll Priceless moments ~ in summer's sun Love it, enjoy it ~ so much fun Summer season ~ I do adore My favorite season ~ there be it none The Dog Days Endure Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory Barden 9/5/2018

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Emile Pinet

Date: 9/8/2018 9:14:00 AM

Special moments that kindle the imagination and stir the heart are what make summer memorable and you capture that feeling well. Emile.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/6/2018 7:26:00 AM

yes, i like all the seasons too - very much enjoyed this, full of joie de vivre

Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:53:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. Glad you enjoyed this and I appreciate your visit.

Maria Williams

Date: 9/6/2018 7:18:00 AM

More or less the same poem in Rubaiyat form? Just as splendid, and a fave again Charlie....Maria hugs

Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:26:00 AM

Yes, I wrote the first one first and entered it into the contest. Someone informed me that it wasn't in Rubaiyat so I had to take it out and edit it. But I personally like my original one a little more. Thank you so much, Maria hugs Charlie

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/6/2018 7:10:00 AM

I can see you enjoying the summer time...Nice write...All the best Charles

Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:28:00 AM

I am, but the heat has been a bit too much this year. Thank you Arturo...All the best

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/5/2018 10:50:00 PM

Lovely verse Charlie, it is indeed the best feel good season. Good luck. Tom

Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. I do enjoy my summer activities. But this year has been brutal as for the heat and humidity. Charlie