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Although I like all the season's. I really don't think there is a season that beats the summer when it comes to fun.

Through the Sunroom Shades 1

As the sunray's beam ~ through my sunroom's shades 
And the warmth of summer ~ slowly fades 
My old heart soothes ~ when flowers bloom 
Fireworks boom ~  in night parades
 
Songbirds singing ~ in backyard baths 
Children playing ~ out bursting laughs  
Ocean's beaches ~ morning boat rides 
Swimming, fishing ~ floating rafts
 
Four or "Fore" ~ an eighteen hole 
The groundhog's call ~ bless his soul 
His tale a myth ~ his truth be told
His course, of course ~ a summer's stroll
 
Priceless moments ~ in summer's sun 
Love it, enjoy it ~ so much fun 
Summer season ~ I do adore 
My favorite season ~ there be it none 


The Dog Days Endure Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden
9/5/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/8/2018 9:14:00 AM
Special moments that kindle the imagination and stir the heart are what make summer memorable and you capture that feeling well. Emile.
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Date: 9/6/2018 7:26:00 AM
yes, i like all the seasons too - very much enjoyed this, full of joie de vivre
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Jack. Glad you enjoyed this and I appreciate your visit.
Date: 9/6/2018 7:18:00 AM
More or less the same poem in Rubaiyat form? Just as splendid, and a fave again Charlie....Maria hugs
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:26:00 AM
Yes, I wrote the first one first and entered it into the contest. Someone informed me that it wasn't in Rubaiyat so I had to take it out and edit it. But I personally like my original one a little more. Thank you so much, Maria hugs Charlie
Date: 9/6/2018 7:10:00 AM
I can see you enjoying the summer time...Nice write...All the best Charles
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:28:00 AM
I am, but the heat has been a bit too much this year. Thank you Arturo...All the best
Date: 9/5/2018 10:50:00 PM
Lovely verse Charlie, it is indeed the best feel good season. Good luck. Tom
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/6/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I do enjoy my summer activities. But this year has been brutal as for the heat and humidity. Charlie
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