Best Afternoon Poems


Premium Member Watercolor Afternoon

The rain set me adrift inside a dream
My mind was on a painting miles upstream
An unforgotten "en plein" I once viewed
A light pastoral springtime interlude

Two horses, one snow white, one shiny black
Two barefoot boys in blue jeans ride bareback
Through pasture weeds bloomed orange almost red
White fluffy mountains loomed as thunderheads

A lightning bolt sends thunder through gray skies
The vivid colors blend in teary eyes
One brother's love becomes a blurry stain
Through windows streaked with rivulets of rain

From inside looking out my hourglass
I watched as nature painted winter's grass
Entranced from listening to her rhythmic rune
One April watercolor afternoon
 


     by Daniel turner

Premium Member Lemon Afternoon

The incendiary wick
of a lemon afternoon
flickers in the lime lagoon
as sunset breathes fire,
tangerine scorching
lilting melon waters
until incandescence
drowns in dusk's indigo 
and coconut hills rise
to cerulean shadows,
when night whispers 
in plantain lanterns
swaying in the slender trees.

Premium Member - Haiku X 223 - Afternoon Sky -


                                         magnificent sky
                                      captivated by beauty -
                                         as cherry blossoms









07.07.2022
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Copyright © All Rights Reserved

The Sky in July Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

Poem of the Day : 08.07.2022

4th place in the contest


One Lazy Afternoon

It was one lazy afternoon
 
laying in the hammock
 
under the azure sky
 
sheltered from the blistering sun
 
by the canopy of the old oak tree
 
chru   chru   chru
 
 warbles from the Bluebird
 
can be heard
 
as she calls for her mate

Closing my eyes 

I soar, I soar so high

  above the tallest branch

floating free

gliding in the wind

travelling towards the perfumed breezes of pansy fields

 watching their velveteen petals sway

 like her hips when she dances in the stream

   watching their alluring moves

  attracting the pollinator

 with seducing aromas

 Almost tasting the sweetened nectar 

 soft and smooth like her honeycombed hair

 pleasing like her sun-kissed skin

 which keeps taunting my dreams

 with ephimeral wishes

 of untamed adventures

 with her.

Premium Member Black Afternoon

her sunlight shaded with clouds 
burning love shuttered in pain. 
rainfalls pour down on her feet 
black widow spits in demon's face. 

broken mirror hangs in the wall
she sees face dirty and old.
pulling down tears one by one
rinse the wound caused by his hands.

she caves underground to feel the darkness
composed herself while brokenhearted.
wait for the morning to witness the sunlight
free her mind to feel the long lost love.

fiercefully, she ran through the door 
no regrets, left her home alone. 
blue and purple paintings on skin 
have gone when she dance in the rain.

Premium Member Lazy Afternoon

Dozing
on a cream-colored comforter
I care not
for a cacophony
of color
cloistered
near my ear
but vague vestiges
of vanilla whispers
melting
in an ivory bowl


1st Place
Mid Summer Standard Contest
Sponsor:  Brian Strand
7/19/17


Premium Member Rainy Afternoon






            Rain sneaking softly
            First soft winds then a cold chill
            Clouds cry lovely tears 



                 March 5, 2020
                 2pm PST




                 Tradiitional Haiku
                 5, 7, 5

Premium Member A Warm Kentucky Afternoon

Here in warm sunshine I sit,
near by a beautiful lake.
Many birds in the tree like to flit.
Long lush branches the breeze likes to shake.
Pretty birds all around call twit-twit -
Sweetness of which I partake!

Spotting some boats off a way
dotting the lake, happily
I have put down my pen as a jay
swoops on by. That is when I first see
shadows creeping have dimmed my noon day.
Sunlight, as always, must flee.


Written July 1, 2015 for the Quatret Poetry Contest of Isaiah Zerbst

Afternoon Afterthought

Upon the roof, outside the walls,

                              now tapping soft its whispered calls,

                                              aftertaste of pain,

                                             this afternoon rain,

                                  like a  fading afterthought, falls.

Afternoon Delight

My path’s uninterrupted as I float near the ground
Passing through the colors of rainbows that surround

My song is softly playing in the breeze of the wind
I encircle a fountain and turn back again

Drifting effortlessly through the wild
Dragonflies meet me with grace and style

Drinking in the most beautiful of scenes
Shining glory in shades of blue and green

My vision’s filled with spirit, there is no strife
I travel magically with the speed of life

Wheat fields like the ocean they wave
I flash a smile and continue on my way

Hovering and bathing in the essence of delight
I am a Hummingbird on my afternoon flight





Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend






*Inspired by Christie Moses Fabulous Fantasy contest!

Premium Member Snow White

Snow White took an unladylike bite
of a big red apple polished bright
	she snoozed quite a while
	he kissed her with guile
and they shared an afternoon delight

Premium Member Late Afternoon

late afternoon
reading white ink blotches
in the sky



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on July 3, 2022 for contest THE SKY IN JULY sponsored by ANDREA DIETRICH  -  RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on September 28, 2018

Premium Member Rambunctious

Rambunctious 

Rambunctious rainstorms
Laugh – dance with rock and roll sun ~
 Promise of rainbows.

Sunrise bursting out
In bright shafts – hues of orange ~
 Bright eyed wake up call.

Brilliant yellow rays
Run across the morning sky ~
 Golden amethyst.

Peaceful blue - serene -
Sapphire skies deep as oceans ~
 Wadding in their depths.

Lush fields of green nap
Refreshed by rains after noon ~
 Emeralds flashing.

Sunset fire burning
Fiery plumes of red and rose ~
 A neon light show.

Paper thin moonlight
Fragile - delicate embrace ~
 Luminescent pearl.

Deep purple shadows
Softly whisper through midnight ~
 Lullaby – Good Night.

Premium Member Lost In the Afternoon

The blaze is on the blooms, the windows are glazed,
Red berries are ripening, in the new sunshine phase,
Emerald is on the wood, but vivid day is lost in light,
Lazy clouds float on the blue, amid heaven's delight.

The golden glare is everywhere, this early afternoon,
The day is in a heatwave, a sparkle is on the lagoon.
Bright magenta's on the bush, butterflies are flitting,
Evening whispers softly, but as yet, no one's listening.

Premium Member Love In the Afternoon

All is quiet
The room is still
I hear this tapping on my window sill
I look out and there you are
My dashing knight
On your white horse

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