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Watercolor Afternoon

The rain set me adrift inside a dream My mind was on a painting miles upstream An unforgotten "en plein" I once viewed A light pastoral springtime interlude Two horses, one snow white, one shiny black Two barefoot boys in blue jeans ride bareback Through pasture weeds bloomed orange almost red White fluffy mountains loomed as thunderheads A lightning bolt sends thunder through gray skies The vivid colors blend in teary eyes One brother's love becomes a blurry stain Through windows streaked with rivulets of rain From inside looking out my hourglass I watched as nature painted winter's grass Entranced from listening to her rhythmic rune One April watercolor afternoon by Daniel turner

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Date: 10/3/2023 7:48:00 AM
This is filled with vivid images. Your third verse is touching Daniel. I can relate dear one. Alice
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:07:00 PM
This is is really a beautiful poem, Daniel: So full of mood and imagery. Counting it as one of my favorites. <~> SuZ
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/28/2023 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Suz. High praise, I'm honored. Have a sunny FL kinda weekend:)
Date: 5/9/2021 4:58:00 AM
Yes! This is quite lovely, Daniel!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 5/9/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, James. Nothing thrills me more than for someone to read an older poem of mine and leave a comment. Have a wonderful weekend. (what's left anyway:)
Date: 6/12/2018 12:39:00 PM
The title sets the tone---the poem is the melody enriched. Rhapsodic, harmonic! ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:25:00 AM
I really love this Daniel, the rhythm , the rhyme, the unforgettable lines, have all come together so beautifully. You make it seem so effortless. I struggle with this form. Think I'll leave it to the experts like you Daniel. Excellent and a fave for me....Maria hugs
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Date: 5/14/2018 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Maria but I am no expert. I only learned it myself, a year ago. I am still learning. I do appreciate your kindness and I always love looking at your photo:)
Date: 5/11/2018 12:59:00 PM
To say you are popular would be the understatement of the century... beautifully expressed dear Man! Cheers, Limerick Jack!
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Date: 5/10/2018 3:21:00 PM
This is very vivid and I like the line, I watched as nature painted winter's grass. Love the watercolor afternoon. Well done and interesting DT :)
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Date: 5/10/2018 1:15:00 PM
Hello Daniel. Well who could argue with this. No one. The imagery and moment in time as marvelous and so poetic and I very much enjoyed how you ended the entry with the title. Well done
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Date: 5/8/2018 10:55:00 AM
I really like the picture you painted. It has good flow and rhythm. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara
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Date: 5/8/2018 4:51:00 AM
Oh the rhythm of you words are outstanding, would make an amazing song..love this, Daniel.
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:30:00 PM
You should paint this beautiful poem
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Date: 5/7/2018 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and beautifully written. I love art. I also employ art techniques in many of my nature narratives. Many thanks for stopping by and best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Date: 5/7/2018 2:58:00 PM
I just love how you painted these watercolor memories with such sublime poetic imagery, Daniel! I really enjoyed this, thanks! :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:25:00 AM
Love the freshness in this piece and enjoyed the rhythm. Beautifully penned. :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 4:26:00 AM
Hello Danny, Beautiful and wondrously written. The imagery you used in portraying this theme is brilliantly woven throughout each of the verses here in all four stanzas. A true pleasure to read and enjoy!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/6/2018 8:29:00 PM
I like how the first line set the scene for this beautiful poem Daniel...Great imagery...
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Date: 5/6/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thoughts you reflect express my desire To write poems that will grow higher, While I wait, Does motivate; All of my poems in me that transpire.
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Date: 5/6/2018 5:59:00 PM
oops. I should have called you Danny boy!
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Date: 5/6/2018 5:58:00 PM
oh my goodness. One of your best sonnets ever, Daniel. Glad I saw your comment at someone's poem and decided to stop in and see what you had done recently. this is a fave.
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Date: 5/6/2018 5:35:00 PM
You paint a lovely canvass with your words Daniel. One that I aspire to own one day. Thanks for the poem
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Date: 5/6/2018 2:07:00 PM
This is so beautiful!!!
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Date: 4/26/2018 6:03:00 PM
Your title pulled me in to an enchanting piece Daniel. Each stanza added another shade to your beautifully painted picture :)
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Date: 4/21/2018 6:39:00 PM
You always bring scenes of nature to life with great skill Daniel.
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Date: 4/21/2018 4:57:00 PM
This is beautiful, Daniel. your poems have a special atmosphere and flow that I admire.
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Date: 4/20/2018 8:56:00 PM
Sad beautiful write... rhythm and rhyme perfect. Touched my heart. Been missing you.
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