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Lemon Afternoon

The incendiary wick
of a lemon afternoon
flickers in the lime lagoon
as sunset breathes fire,
tangerine scorching
lilting melon waters
until incandescence
drowns in dusk's indigo 
and coconut hills rise
to cerulean shadows,
when night whispers 
in plantain lanterns
swaying in the slender trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Godwin Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 1:11 AM
If possible, please send me a map to this beautifully enchanted place as born of a wonderful imagination connected to a gifted pen. A joy I'd like to recall in dreams - oh, to only have a memory. A Wow gem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Thanks very much, CayCay!
May Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Beautifully penned, Congrats on your win
Cozart Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thanks, Joseph.
Carber Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Congrats Dale-- and I really liked how you transformed 'fruit' into poetry!!!
Cozart Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Thanks, LJ!
Gentry Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Enjoyed this color and flowing poem. Well done!
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:36 PM
gorgeous as ever. Brevity in multi colors!
Cozart Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Thanks very much, Andrea.
Barden Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:20 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Dale - blessings and keep up the good work, my friend! (Hey - I'm going to start limiting the amount of italicized poems that I post so perhaps you'll read them again, haha! Not all, but some!). :-)
Cozart Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Thanks so much, Greg.
Waters Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:54 PM
another colour feast - so good for soul health - love always
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Thanks, Virginia!
Ashley Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Dale, I’m held spellbound by the enchantment of your stunning poetry.. simply luscious! Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved win.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Nance Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Very descriptive and well written. congrats!
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Thank you, Casarah.
Sands Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Beautiful and smooth to read Dale.! Congratulations for your win :)
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Heidi.
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Wonderful scene Dale, well done...
Cozart Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Thank you, sir!
Man Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Dale, I like your Lemon Affernoon!
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Thanks so much, Lyric Man!
Horsman Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 3:24 PM
You really do take one there, Dale..love this. Harry
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:06 AM
- Really beautifully described, Dale :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, AL!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 4:53 AM
This poem left me breathless Dale! Your imagery is a feast for the eyes, painted with your palette of divine colors. I love this beauty. I must Fave it as well. : )
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Thanks so much, Connie.
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 3:02 AM
Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous Dale, your use of colour and imagery is divine:-) into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Thanks very much, Jan!
Roper Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Great imagery, Dale, and the photo is exquisite ...
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Thank you, Eve.
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July 12, 2018 at 8:25 PM
hello Dale Gregory Cozart, I enjoyed the picture you showed with your poem.it is a beautiful scene. I closed y eyes for a second just to picture this scene. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Cozart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Thank you, Darlene.
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