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The incendiary wick of a lemon afternoon flickers in the lime lagoon as sunset breathes fire, tangerine scorching lilting melon waters until incandescence drowns in dusk's indigo and coconut hills rise to cerulean shadows, when night whispers in plantain lanterns swaying in the slender trees.

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Date: 7/28/2018 1:11:00 AM
If possible, please send me a map to this beautifully enchanted place as born of a wonderful imagination connected to a gifted pen. A joy I'd like to recall in dreams - oh, to only have a memory. A Wow gem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/28/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thanks very much, CayCay!
Date: 7/23/2018 1:10:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Congrats on your win
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/23/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph.
Date: 7/18/2018 9:08:00 AM
Congrats Dale-- and I really liked how you transformed 'fruit' into poetry!!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/18/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, LJ!
Date: 7/16/2018 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Enjoyed this color and flowing poem. Well done!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/17/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 7/16/2018 5:36:00 PM
gorgeous as ever. Brevity in multi colors!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/16/2018 5:48:00 PM
Thanks very much, Andrea.
Date: 7/16/2018 5:20:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Dale - blessings and keep up the good work, my friend! (Hey - I'm going to start limiting the amount of italicized poems that I post so perhaps you'll read them again, haha! Not all, but some!). :-)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/16/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Greg.
Date: 7/15/2018 4:54:00 PM
another colour feast - so good for soul health - love always
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/15/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thanks, Virginia!
Date: 7/15/2018 3:27:00 PM
Dale, I’m held spellbound by the enchantment of your stunning poetry.. simply luscious! Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved win.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/15/2018 3:58:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Date: 7/15/2018 1:51:00 PM
Very descriptive and well written. congrats!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/15/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Casarah.
Date: 7/15/2018 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful and smooth to read Dale.! Congratulations for your win :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/15/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 7/14/2018 10:56:00 AM
Wonderful scene Dale, well done...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/14/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, sir!
Date: 7/13/2018 4:19:00 PM
Dale, I like your Lemon Affernoon!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/13/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lyric Man!
Date: 7/13/2018 3:24:00 PM
You really do take one there, Dale..love this. Harry
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Date: 7/13/2018 8:06:00 AM
- Really beautifully described, Dale :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/13/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, AL!
Date: 7/13/2018 4:53:00 AM
This poem left me breathless Dale! Your imagery is a feast for the eyes, painted with your palette of divine colors. I love this beauty. I must Fave it as well. : )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/13/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Connie.
Date: 7/13/2018 3:02:00 AM
Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous Dale, your use of colour and imagery is divine:-) into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/13/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks very much, Jan!
Date: 7/12/2018 8:57:00 PM
Great imagery, Dale, and the photo is exquisite ...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/13/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 7/12/2018 8:25:00 PM
hello Dale Gregory Cozart, I enjoyed the picture you showed with your poem.it is a beautiful scene. I closed y eyes for a second just to picture this scene. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/12/2018 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene.

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