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Love In the Afternoon

All is quiet The room is still I hear this tapping on my window sill I look out and there you are My dashing knight On your white horse

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James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2009 2:55:00 AM

Lovely romantic afternoon, nice write Sara>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 7/17/2009 11:50:00 PM

A fairy tale flavour Sara.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/17/2009 8:32:00 PM

Kind of a fairy tale atmosphere to this one. I liked it! Peace and blessings Matthew Anish

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 7/17/2009 7:32:00 PM

Thank-you Sara, for the sunshine of your kind thoughts, keeps we butterflies aflutter :) poet butterfly

Sandra Hudson

Date: 7/17/2009 6:04:00 PM

In my neighborhood it would be the town drunk on Mrs, Fosters mule. No prize there. Where did you say you lived? ....:))-AA just kidding

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 7/17/2009 4:49:00 PM

Was listening to Enya's "Caribbean Blue" when I read this, what a perfect combination!!! I could see the light in your eyes, as you peered out your window! Beautiful write :) poet butterfly