Love In the Afternoon

All is quiet
The room is still
I hear this tapping on my window sill
I look out and there you are
My dashing knight
On your white horse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 2:55 AM
Lovely romantic afternoon, nice write Sara>>James
Strand Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 11:50 PM
A fairy tale flavour Sara.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Anish Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 8:32 PM
Kind of a fairy tale atmosphere to this one. I liked it! Peace and blessings Matthew Anish
Mcmullin Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 7:32 PM
Thank-you Sara, for the sunshine of your kind thoughts, keeps we butterflies aflutter :) poet butterfly
Hudson Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 6:04 PM
In my neighborhood it would be the town drunk on Mrs, Fosters mule. No prize there. Where did you say you lived? ....:))-AA just kidding
Mcmullin Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 4:49 PM
Was listening to Enya's "Caribbean Blue" when I read this, what a perfect combination!!! I could see the light in your eyes, as you peered out your window! Beautiful write :) poet butterfly
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