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Rambunctious

Rambunctious Rambunctious rainstorms Laugh – dance with rock and roll sun ~ Promise of rainbows. Sunrise bursting out In bright shafts – hues of orange ~ Bright eyed wake up call. Brilliant yellow rays Run across the morning sky ~ Golden amethyst. Peaceful blue - serene - Sapphire skies deep as oceans ~ Wadding in their depths. Lush fields of green nap Refreshed by rains after noon ~ Emeralds flashing. Sunset fire burning Fiery plumes of red and rose ~ A neon light show. Paper thin moonlight Fragile - delicate embrace ~ Luminescent pearl. Deep purple shadows Softly whisper through midnight ~ Lullaby – Good Night.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/16/2020 10:08:00 PM

From dawn to dusk, your haikus are just alive and lively. The Hills are alive, Sam! Gorgeous! Warm wishes, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2020 6:48:00 PM

so much beautiful imagery shining in this series, Sam! May your muse's pen keep flowing!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/16/2020 6:40:00 AM

A pearl necklace of Haiku: Priceless , dearest, Sam. Blessings!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2020 1:31:00 PM

What a lovely message, Demetrios. Maybe a theme for a new "string" of haiku. Stay well, dear friend. Grace and peace to you.

John Watt

Date: 4/15/2020 4:20:00 PM

I love the phrase "Sapphire skies deep as oceans". I am with Darlene on this one with her trinity of loves. Your panoply of colors and adoration of creation are a splash of joy across the page. Haiku are so perfect for brief thoughts of nature, but I enjoyed how you string them together. A fave for me. Still enjoying that one-character indent! Blessed ~ John

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2020 1:26:00 PM

Hi John, again thank you for your thoughtful rainbow of insights! I do love that line. As I said to Tom haiku is a great teacher of brevity with a punchline! Hope you are well in day 31 of staying at home. I thank God that we are writers with poems to fill our days and wake us up at night!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/15/2020 2:40:00 PM

Hello Sam kauffman, wow! I love, love, love, this poem. I love the rainbows. the colors bright and cheery. I like the way you painted a scene in this poem. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2020 12:55:00 PM

Hello Sam You did a great job on this poem.I am pleased that I encourage you. I love rainbows I will stay underneath it. I wish you the same. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/15/2020 3:40:00 PM

Hi Darlene. I am so happy that you love this poem. Was so fun to create. Saw that someone had done a string of haiku. Wanted to try my hand at it. Thank you! Your message encourages me, dear friend! Stay well and be blessed beneath the rainbow.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/14/2020 5:34:00 PM

A brilliant string of haiku Sam, and I've learnt a new word, rambunctious lol. Hope you're well stay safe. Over Fork Over. Tom

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/16/2020 1:22:00 PM

I thought I remembered your haiku strings. I loved them. Haiku is a great teacher of brevity with a punchline! Hope you are doing well. Over Fork Over.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/15/2020 4:14:00 PM

When I first joined there was a poet called Mick Talbot and he was well into writing haiku, I got the bug, have done a few strings ,African anthology, Rainforest anthology, and Polar anthology. Amazed me how you can say so much in 3 lines.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/15/2020 3:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom! Do I remember that you did a string of haiku? I loved the idea. Rambunctious is such a playful word for me. I am feeling a bit rambunctious after 29+ days of self quarantine at home All is well. Hope the same for you. Over Fork Over!