Cupids Arrow Poet Free verse

One Lazy Afternoon

It was one lazy afternoon
 
laying in the hammock
 
under the azure sky
 
sheltered from the blistering sun
 
by the canopy of the old oak tree
 
chru   chru   chru
 
 warbles from the Bluebird
 
can be heard
 
as she calls for her mate

Closing my eyes 

I soar, I soar so high

  above the tallest branch

floating free

gliding in the wind

travelling towards the perfumed breezes of pansy fields

 watching their velveteen petals sway

 like her hips when she dances in the stream

   watching their alluring moves

  attracting the pollinator

 with seducing aromas

 Almost tasting the sweetened nectar 

 soft and smooth like her honeycombed hair

 pleasing like her sun-kissed skin

 which keeps taunting my dreams

 with ephimeral wishes

 of untamed adventures

 with her.

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Connie Marcum Wong January 20, 2015 at 2:51 PM This is sooooo lovely and romantic. I loved it!#7

Nette Onclaud January 19, 2015 at 10:02 AM sensual in its tone, lovely in its poetic rendition, cupid... thanks for your feedback!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux January 17, 2015 at 9:08 AM Amazing imagery! She sounds lovely.

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2015 at 6:18 PM very sexy nature poem!! I can't tell the honey bee from the honey girl! Sweet!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 12, 2015 at 11:29 AM Hummm...Your lazy afternoon was not lazy after all Cupid.You are always busy with your arrows.Fine...Love>>>rajat

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2015 at 7:26 AM Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2015 at 7:06 PM So nice to enjoy your verse this evening. Light & Love

Patrick Cooper January 11, 2015 at 5:57 PM A tantalizing piece of writing, Cupids Arrow. I was there floating with you as you watched the takings place around and below you. Very much enjoyed Oh! I tried to comment on your comments to my poem, but somehow I wasn't able to. Still trying to find my way around here. This is what I tried to write back to you . . . "Thank you Cupids Arrow for being here and for liking my poem."

Eileen Manassian January 11, 2015 at 5:46 PM Oh....WOW! That's some write, Cupid. Untamed adventures....quite a sensual write here. It is very lovely...

Laura Leiser January 11, 2015 at 5:34 PM Lovely poem! I enjoyed the descriptive imagery very much! Thanks for sharing!

David Mohn January 11, 2015 at 4:43 PM Beautiful Cupid...I could feel my heart rate slow as I read this...you pulled me in :)

Kevin Leake January 11, 2015 at 4:29 PM Very nice cupid, And a happy new year to you, enjoyed this one. Best Wishes Kevin