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One Lazy Afternoon

It was one lazy afternoon laying in the hammock under the azure sky sheltered from the blistering sun by the canopy of the old oak tree chru chru chru warbles from the Bluebird can be heard as she calls for her mate Closing my eyes I soar, I soar so high above the tallest branch floating free gliding in the wind travelling towards the perfumed breezes of pansy fields watching their velveteen petals sway like her hips when she dances in the stream watching their alluring moves attracting the pollinator with seducing aromas Almost tasting the sweetened nectar soft and smooth like her honeycombed hair pleasing like her sun-kissed skin which keeps taunting my dreams with ephimeral wishes of untamed adventures with her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/20/2015 2:51:00 PM
This is sooooo lovely and romantic. I loved it!#7
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Date: 1/19/2015 10:02:00 AM
sensual in its tone, lovely in its poetic rendition, cupid... thanks for your feedback!.. huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:08:00 AM
Amazing imagery! She sounds lovely.
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Date: 1/12/2015 6:18:00 PM
very sexy nature poem!! I can't tell the honey bee from the honey girl! Sweet!!
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Date: 1/12/2015 11:29:00 AM
Hummm...Your lazy afternoon was not lazy after all Cupid.You are always busy with your arrows.Fine...Love>>>rajat
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Date: 1/12/2015 7:26:00 AM
Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2015 7:06:00 PM
So nice to enjoy your verse this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:57:00 PM
A tantalizing piece of writing, Cupids Arrow. I was there floating with you as you watched the takings place around and below you. Very much enjoyed Oh! I tried to comment on your comments to my poem, but somehow I wasn't able to. Still trying to find my way around here. This is what I tried to write back to you . . . "Thank you Cupids Arrow for being here and for liking my poem."
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:46:00 PM
Oh....WOW! That's some write, Cupid. Untamed adventures....quite a sensual write here. It is very lovely...
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:34:00 PM
Lovely poem! I enjoyed the descriptive imagery very much! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful Cupid...I could feel my heart rate slow as I read this...you pulled me in :)
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:29:00 PM
Very nice cupid, And a happy new year to you, enjoyed this one. Best Wishes Kevin
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