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Lazy Afternoon

Dozing on a cream-colored comforter I care not for a cacophony of color cloistered near my ear but vague vestiges of vanilla whispers melting in an ivory bowl 1st Place Mid Summer Standard Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 7/19/17

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Date: 7/21/2017 8:28:00 PM
Tasty, congratulations Dale, well done...
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Date: 7/21/2017 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your top placement. Great one.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/21/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thanks, Curtis.
Date: 7/21/2017 8:05:00 AM
Wow Dale! Somehow I missed this one. This is a clinic. So much to learn from this beautiful piece. A well deserved win and a FAV. - Dean
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/21/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thanks very much, Dean!
Date: 7/21/2017 7:21:00 AM
Such beautiful images, Dale! Saving as fave! Congrats!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/21/2017 7:40:00 AM
Special thanks, Kim!!
Date: 7/20/2017 11:42:00 PM
Congrats on first place. :) what a playful write, very enjoyable.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/21/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thanks, Bianca.
Date: 7/20/2017 4:57:00 PM
Wonderful alliteration, Dale, and a beautiful write - congrats on FIRST!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/20/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thank, Greg!
Date: 6/17/2017 8:58:00 AM
So great and excellent. Three words underrating this magnificient piece which has dragged my mind in the viscose silk of awe to really lack what to say. A definite 7 friend.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/17/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, sir!
Date: 6/14/2017 11:10:00 AM
Mmmm can I get on the sofa with you and share that bowl of ice cream!! A delightful poem Dale:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/14/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. And yes you may!
Date: 6/13/2017 6:57:00 PM
Very pretty reading!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/13/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sun.
Date: 6/13/2017 5:21:00 PM
Nice alliteration, Dale:)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/13/2017 6:31:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel.

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