Lazy Afternoon

Dozing on a cream-colored comforter I care not for a cacophony of color cloistered near my ear but vague vestiges of vanilla whispers melting in an ivory bowl 1st Place Mid Summer Standard Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 7/19/17
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Smith Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Tasty, congratulations Dale, well done...
Johnson Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Congrats on your top placement. Great one.
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July 21, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Thanks, Curtis.
Wood Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Wow Dale! Somehow I missed this one. This is a clinic. So much to learn from this beautiful piece. A well deserved win and a FAV. - Dean
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Thanks very much, Dean!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Such beautiful images, Dale! Saving as fave! Congrats!
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Special thanks, Kim!!
Reyes Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Congrats on first place. :) what a playful write, very enjoyable.
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Thanks, Bianca.
Barden Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 4:57 PM
Wonderful alliteration, Dale, and a beautiful write - congrats on FIRST!
Cozart Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Thank, Greg!
Makama Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 8:58 AM
So great and excellent. Three words underrating this magnificient piece which has dragged my mind in the viscose silk of awe to really lack what to say. A definite 7 friend.
Cozart Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thank you very much, sir!
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Mmmm can I get on the sofa with you and share that bowl of ice cream!! A delightful poem Dale:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Thanks, Jan. And yes you may!
Wanter Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Very pretty reading!!
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June 13, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Sun.
Turner Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 5:21 PM
Nice alliteration, Dale:)
Cozart Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Thanks, Daniel.
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