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Premium Member Haven

Haven 9-18-26
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Haven

The inferno cast by a sinful moon
Rises in the red breath of winter,
In neon flames and flares.
Faceless
 Whimpering
In splinters of bare bone
Howling into grimacing spectrals
Deaf to the labor of compassion
 The agony of maples turning scarlet
  The sound of birthing stars.

In the debris of green apple afternoons
When tongues of flame 
Speak the thesaurus
 Of sanctity
Shards of purple glaciers tremble
Chastised 
 Chastened 
By labors of the amber dawns,
As hallowed sweetness
 Falls upon the thirsting tongue.

Then, in this arbor, beneath amazing wings,
Joy reclaims crystal blooms of grace.

Premium Member Winter Child

fluffy clouds swirl in the cold winter sky
yet there are sweet moments of dazzling blue
but, it is time for winter to say goodbye
as I wish for a delightful spring view
oh, I am a winter child in my soul
loving to walk in the white snow and wind
going for a very long evening stroll
still I am ready to leave it behind
for the bare bone like branches creak and moan
and I imagine them in flowing emerald gowns
as this winter has made me sad and alone . . . 
and the snow has hidden all the tomb stones

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February 11, 2023

Poetry/Rhyme/winter child
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1524-764-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France
Posted to Facebook, 02/13/2023


Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Choice No 1185
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/13/2023

Premium Member To Land a Mockingbird

To land a mockingbird,
sent out an innocent cat;
one that wouldn’t eat a bird
if it was starving.
A mockingbird’s greatest fear,
hatchlings being eaten
by a feline foe.

I had a tabby who never bothered a bird;
he only dined from cans.
One day a mockingbird nest 
fell from a tree,
it’s eggs broken and soaking
into the sun-warmed ground.

Like feline, greased-lightening,
my baby was being dive-bombed 
by mocking birds from both sides;
his tail pecked to the bare bone,
I cleaned and bandaged it.

For weeks I had to carry him to and 
from his box so he could 
answer nature’s call.
A cat with a bandaged butt,
has no pride left.

Yes, if you want to land a mockingbird,
send out an innocent cat;
they’re waiting...


All Around South Had To Hike

All Around South Had To Hike

All around South did have to hike,
And every single bit of it  did like,
To bare bone,
When alone,
Even riding trike when a little tyke.

Jim Horn

Crab with conch and zucchini and okra.
Sound familiar? Some guy said that
grits are not as good as they used to 
be. Probably forgot to put butter on 
them. Remember Gullah culture and
Charleston River Dogs and Savannah
Southerners baseball team.
Have you ever heard of Huck's in
Charleston before?

Premium Member Where You Belong

And now they expect my tears!
And now they want to see me cry!

Now you’re gone, I can see what I wouldn’t dare see
I can be free from your chains and your song
Locked away every night in the dark, I dreamt of now what I see.

I prayed to god that soon you’d be gone.

But to these people we knew and know never would they see - you see to them you could do no wrong!

I hope that in the furnace the flames burn the evil away

When we wed you promised that you’d look after me but all you did was beat me when the last can had gone.

You stole my life and murdered my dreams in front of me and broke me down to bare bone

Now that you’re gone I won’t cry, no tears - but I’ll spit on thee!

And wish you a safe journey to hell where you belong.

The Overwhelming Reassurance of Nothing

The paths and patterns of flowers
are lost beneath the darkness of desperate rocks

By summers security
and winters threat
does the slavery of hands
make its peace

To be eagerly assaulted
by grit and bare bone supported
in famished mouths
the overwhelming reassurance of nothing

And thou hast forsaken creation
for the purchase of a whim
necessities burden
shall forge the steal of the prison you are in

Though nestled internal of every atom
the balance of love
in stillness
awaits
it is but a system of
which no God creates

Lost beneath the darkness of these desperate rocks
a spirits impression to flowers
can not

Yet saves only sorrow for the years
a specter of the soul
to frequent the chains
of your liberation

Exalt upon nothing
all of emotional stanza
‘tis but the bedeviling
of your heart

And the gifted miracle 
the open welcome universal
soft gentle whisper
a longing chanted for a reminder

But turn and make peace with nothing


Puzzles of Leaves

PUZZLES  OF LEAVES
The hillside canopies of seemingly cascading skeleton trees,
bare their boney branches that once clung to myriad puzzles of leaves.
Each shimmering fall leaf
 a vividly colored flame,
now a fallen burnt out brief
spent for its time of fame,
leaving their once possessive bare bone branches
to cold gently falling avalanches.
This hillside of sleeping skeleton trees
 now savoring the solace of His will done,
and humbly bowed down on their bony knees,
await the assured joy of His Spring to come.
                                                                                                                                             Written by
Robert A.Dufresne 11/3/16

Dog-Gone

Straggy sad dog
left all alone,
head on her paws
sleeping on stone.

Skin and bare bone,
her life undone,
eyes dimly see,
rain is to come.

Death softly cries
"Oh little one,
come here to me,
I am the sun"

Her tail wags once
her heart's last leap,
This little puppy,
slips into sleep.

Wakes in your arms
holding her dear,
A dream she had,
distant past clear.

She could be yours
She could be mine
One never knows
Until it's time.

Hand That Rocks the Cradle

when darkness falls
shadows serenade
upon moonlit walls
and my eyes close
as i bid farewell to day

sweet dreams
cannot come
when hand from grave
rocks you back
through life's storms

i was bound to the hand
that rocked the cradle
my ship in stormy seas

slapped on the face
yet not by waves
but tasted saltwater
just the same

chilled to bare bone
then swept away
by wind of warmth
apologies?
an aftermath of storms
an unexpected pause
until the next red tide
bore my name

chained fast
to this diligent life
i longed to break free
from this anchor
that weighed me down

i swam against the tide
yet i was rocked
knocked back
through life

though tides have since parted
and seas are more calm
the taste of saltwater
still lingers
its bitterness
in my mouth

my mind
in bondage
cries out in pain
as hand from grave
rocks the cradle again

Premium Member Time Bomb

Twist the truth 
in what I say 
Tick ,tick it is a matter of time 
Hiding the truth 

With each movement tick ,tick 
Getting closer
to the final countdown 
Tick ,tick the pressure
 
It is building 
Getting closer
to the truth tick, tick 
Saved by the bell
 
I did not explode 
Biting my tongue 
words held at bay
You would not like 
what I have to say 

It would strip 
you to the bare bone 
Your ugly lies 
When the ticking stops 
Nasty words,
nasty deeds 
Will have nasty 
consequences 

I hold my tongue 
as its not me 
Your coloured coded lies 
they hurt deep 
Hacking away at my brain 
Your ugly words 
releasing the pressure 
The release of you 

So that I do not explode 
I never dropped 
the bombshell 
You did 
All the time 
I was sitting 
on a time bomb 

I sat and watched you 
Explode into lies 
Only now 
I found the truth

Premium Member My Plea

Oh Lord, please light my way 
And when I get lost guide me 
Help me to be the person 
That you want me to be. 

There are time when I'm feeling lost 
With no place to really call my own 
And everyday doubts and fears 
Poison my mind to my bare bone. 

Oh Lord Jesus hear my plea and mold me 
To your will just like a pliable clay. 
Guide me with your Divine hand 
Show me to get out this sinking sand. 

Oh Lord please enlighten my heart so 
I can't be easily misled by this world 
Oh God, thank you for hearing my plea 
And thank you for setting me free! 





Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2009 

June 16,2009

The Diplomats

With bare, bone-dry bureaucratese,
       can camouflage their intentions;
with official cordialities,
       can disguise their inclinations;

can bury their predilections
       with layers of formalities;
can rein in strongest emotions
       with theatrical flair and finesse.

All these and the ability
       to tell a straight lie sincerely
for national security,
       shrewdly, diplomatically,

are the minimum requirements
       for state envoys and diplomats
of the world's mighty governments
       in global games of dogs and cats!

Forgiveness

Past transgressions are all in bloom,
vast like a weed thick in its gloom.
Grabbing up emotional real estate
engulfing whole city blocks at a time.
Time and again reeling you in like a fish.
Making death in all its glory a single wish,
as a smile attempts to grow and spread.
The past comes up and gobbles it whole.
A mistake is a tattoo embedded in your soul
that tears through the flesh and
entangles the nerves like fine mesh.
when the future is now and the sunshines
your past is there with citation and fines.
Forgiveness is fleeting
a mythical beast,
that will dine so grand liken to a feast.
Engulf your soul to bare bone
and wash you ashore broken and alone.

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