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fluffy clouds swirl in the cold winter sky yet there are sweet moments of dazzling blue but, it is time for winter to say goodbye as I wish for a delightful spring view oh, I am a winter child in my soul loving to walk in the white snow and wind going for a very long evening stroll still I am ready to leave it behind for the bare bone like branches creak and moan and I imagine them in flowing emerald gowns as this winter has made me sad and alone . . . and the snow has hidden all the tomb stones __________________________ February 11, 2023 Poetry/Rhyme/winter child Copyright Protected, ID 02-1524-764-11 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Posted to Facebook, 02/13/2023 Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Choice No 1185 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/13/2023

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Date: 2/12/2023 9:45:00 PM
Though you are a winter child , you await the arrival of spring to see the bare trees once more clad in fresh green dress! Beautifully written, dear Constance !
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Date: 2/13/2023 10:25:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 2/12/2023 7:02:00 PM
And in some parts of the earth are craving for snow; for there’s not enough this winter… Beautiful picture and poem, I enjoyed it. :)
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Date: 2/13/2023 10:26:00 AM
Fin, thank you so much for the comment and compliments, Constance
Date: 2/12/2023 2:45:00 PM
Powerful lines, penned with feeling; well done.
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Date: 2/13/2023 10:26:00 AM
ML, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 2/12/2023 11:21:00 AM
A lovely write/picture. Spring will be here soon. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2023 10:27:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings, Constance

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