Hand That Rocks the Cradle

when darkness falls
shadows serenade
upon moonlit walls
and my eyes close
as i bid farewell to day

sweet dreams
cannot come
when hand from grave
rocks you back
through life's storms

i was bound to the hand
that rocked the cradle
my ship in stormy seas

slapped on the face
yet not by waves
but tasted saltwater
just the same

chilled to bare bone
then swept away
by wind of warmth
apologies?
an aftermath of storms
an unexpected pause
until the next red tide
bore my name

chained fast
to this diligent life
i longed to break free
from this anchor
that weighed me down

i swam against the tide
yet i was rocked
knocked back
through life

though tides have since parted
and seas are more calm
the taste of saltwater
still lingers
its bitterness
in my mouth

my mind
in bondage
cries out in pain
as hand from grave
rocks the cradle again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/19/2019 8:44:00 PM
God give you peace... beyond measure, and wings of solid gold to reach stars no others could dare touch. A lovely write my friend, emotion and imagery sadly... perfect... to clear, and too close... Hugs. Ann
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2019 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem!
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 12/19/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much...i often wonder how they decide what poem of a poets to feature on the home page... hugs
Date: 12/19/2019 12:22:00 PM
Wow, that was dark and powerful. Such a deeply felt piece of writing my sweet friend. Those angry seas have a way of lingering in our minds, even when the waves are calm. Really nicely done. I need to venture back into your past poems a bit more I think.
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 12/19/2019 8:03:00 PM
i wrote some powerful pieces back then too...i have a few softer toned ones but we all know my muse loves emotions and sorrow... thank you Chris :) hugs
Date: 12/19/2019 6:10:00 AM
Beautiful piece of poetry! Great work Sandra!!
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 12/19/2019 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Krish :) hugs
Date: 9/13/2019 2:39:00 PM
This is incredible writing and though I know what you are 'chained' to, I also know it could fit almost anyone as we are all falsely chained to something(s) that grab us when young. The emotions are so poetically honed that I felt pleading voice each line, almost desperately. I know each time we write, we gain some therapy, but some themes take a long, long time and lots of poetry therapy, huh? Love, CayCay
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 9/13/2019 6:57:00 PM
i think this was around the turning point when i started writing them out....i have anorexic type poems and all...most my pain has been written out and buried yet my muse still likes to draw on emotions...sometimes i swear they are not my own because i don't feel sad when i write yet will write a very lonely sad piece if that makes any sense ? hugs
Date: 11/7/2013 8:53:00 PM
I enjoy the smooth flow of words that gently describe such depth. I felt chilled visualizing hand from grave...wonderful description.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/26/2013 9:56:00 PM
Sandra This is a chilling and gripping write about life and trying to stay afloat. We all try not to get weighed down by what ilife brings, but sometimes it's just too much. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Soldier win. I appreciate it very much
Login to Reply
Date: 10/21/2013 6:26:00 PM
this is really atmospheric, deep and intense...you have a really unique writing style...I enjoyed this one a lot
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2013 10:09:00 AM
thank you Charlotte :) hugs
Date: 10/17/2013 11:32:00 AM
To bring such verses from troubled waters takes real talent. You seem to be able to identify and meet life's challenges. Great work..... as usual..... Jake
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2013 10:09:00 AM
thank you so much Jake :)
Date: 10/14/2013 10:29:00 AM
Such chilling & ominous emotions! Damn. This had my eyes gripped!
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/14/2013 11:43:00 AM
thank you Drake, coming from an awesome poet such as you made me smile....hugs :)
Date: 10/14/2013 8:23:00 AM
wow Sandra this is one powerful write so expressive and and well written a journey through life on troubled seas love, love it Shadow x smile
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/14/2013 9:50:00 AM
thank you so much Shadow...i hope your monday is wonderful :)
Date: 10/13/2013 7:26:00 PM
Hi Sandra, A most poignant write from you..Thanks for your visit to my verse.. Ken
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/14/2013 9:49:00 AM
thank you so much Ken :) have a good monday!
Date: 10/13/2013 4:20:00 PM
I am absolutely spellbound by this work of art. I read through it several times trying to decide which lines would be favorites. I had to choose all of them. :) Into my faves :)
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/13/2013 4:44:00 PM
thank you Karen...hope you have a great sunday, always great to see you :) hugs
Date: 10/13/2013 9:34:00 AM
-Sandra, this is really a deep and very well written poem ...... it describes to me the strength and fear - Have a nice autumn Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/13/2013 9:41:00 AM
thank you so much my friend....hope you enjoy your sunday as well :) hugs
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter