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Blog Posted:10/25/2013 9:11:00 AM
I really didn't expect anyone to read my last blog post and was shocked to see  how many people responded. I wasn't intentionally trying to be offensive or put  anyone's work down; I suppose I was just venting my frustration. I've noticed  that my sparse free-verse poems generally have more views than any of my rhyming pieces. I just feel like rhyme is so under-appreciated in these modern times and is a dying art form. On  other poetry sites, I was repeatedly slammed and ridiculed for rhyming, which is  why I chose "JustThatArchaicPoet" as my nom de plume when I joined the Soup. I  had no idea what to expect when I joined, so I created that moniker to beat any  detractors to the punch. I was going to poke fun at myself before anyone else  could. I was perpetually told I was "too archaic; too old-fashioned; outdated,  etc." and that I was bringing nothing new to the poetic table/arena, which  deeply wounded me. Maybe I have "Post Traumatic Poetic Distress Disorder"  lol.

Sometimes I feel like I am not taken seriously as a poet or writer  because rhyme is my forte, and even though I believe I do it well, I still feel  like a poetic pariah. It makes me second-guess myself. Some days I am confident  in my craft, considering I have been honing and perfecting my style for 24  years; yet other days, and most recently, my confidence vacillates. And perhaps  it's my own fault. I write what's in my Soul and try to stay true to my  aesthetic, but my work does not have a universal appeal. Sometimes I feel like  it's just too esoteric to be easily or readily understood by the average reader.  Perhaps my poetry is too melancholy, moody, gloomy or complex; too mired in  metaphor and/or symbolism. Maybe I have a habit of writing in the approach  of a "read between the lines" type of expression. Possibly it's that I am  too indirect; too vague.

I read in a comment that a poet felt like  rhyming sometimes feels "forced" and I have rarely ever felt this way when  writing, and that may be because rhyme comes naturally to me, like it's innate  and native to my Soul. I've never felt any restraint from rhyme, really. I have  chosen to write in free-verse and narrative styles because I felt like what I  wanted to express would best fit in those forms, but only on the rarest of  occasions. I don't find rhyme to be forced, restrictive or constrictive. I enjoy  putting my words into rhythm.

In summary, I just want to be taken  seriously as a poet and artist, and feel as though I would need to resort to  abandoning/sacrificing my style and aesthetic to accomplish this wish. I feel so  low on the totem pole due to the fact that I shy away from non-rhyme  formats which seem to be what's "hot"; what everyone is in to and  producing. I just cannot feign reverence for any style but rhyme, and perhaps  that makes me a narrow-minded person for having such a strong bias and  preference. I don't want to be perceived as a villain; I just want to be  accepted for my work, and by and large, I have found that here on The Soup, but  I still feel like the proverbial black sheep. Perhaps my mental illnesses cloud  my perceptions. I know; I know: I'm playing the mentally ill card, but the truth  is, they do affect my judgment, and I'll be the first to admit my thinking is  sometimes askew and I only see things in "black and white".

It was never my intent to offend anyone with my first blog post, and I sincerely apologize if I did so. I have a tendency to put the old foot in my mouth in addition to being impulsive and not thinking before I speak or type. I just want to make friends and be taken seriously as a poet, for the first time in my life. Thank you for reading (if you indeed made it this far lol). I appreciate all the feedback and comments. God bless! :)
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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:14:00 PM
    I want to thank everyone for their thoughtful feedback. I'm like you, Andrea: sometimes I labor over a poem for hours and sometimes days. I started a poem the other night (my "Knock, Knock" piece) and only 3 lines came to me so I stopped; I knew if I tried to finish it, it would be forced. So, the next morning I looked at it with fresh eyes and the rest of it came to me effortlessly. I agree with everything you said, and I mostly agree with what everyone else has said as well. Again, thank you all for taking time to read and respond; it means a great deal to me and I sincerely appreciate it :)

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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:22:00 AM
    Hi, I'm glad you are getting feedback on your blogs. I think I was one who said rhyme can feel forced. I am always trying to make sure my rhymed sonnets do not sound forced. I spend literally hours on them sometimes to make sure they do not sound that way, but I see some writers who just put in any word to complete a rhyme, and I think those poets are doing a disservice to the craft. PUtting us rhymers in a bad light. LIke you, I am better at rhyme than at free verse. but I feel your pain because in this modern world, we rhymers can never "measure up" so I know exactly what you are saying!! People here are mostly respectful of each other. These discussions are common!! I love your work!

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    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/26/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful feedback and compliment, Andrea :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Chan....write what you want, my man! Scneikies! There are so many forms of poetry here....drop'im! Will check yours out now! And I always leave a note when I stop by! Soupers know that about me! Jimbo

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:53:00 PM
    Hello there Chan and welcome to the soup...I too prefer rhyme and when I write that is what feels natural to me.Yet not allpoets feel the same and that is awesome! Because it would be so boring if everyone wrote the same way...I enjoy the variety.There are so many wonderful talents here on the soup...that's why I love it...

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 11:06:00 AM
    Cont...........And please do not think that rhymed poetry is outdated........I think it will remain classic, and everlasting..... Looking back at famous poets who wrote pieces that have survived the centuries as proof, that good poetry lives on and on... I am sorry that you ever felt 'archaic' on your old site by other poets. Here on the Soup you will find open minds, open hearts, poets of many talents.....we all have our preferences, styles, and personalities......but good poetry stands alone, no matter what form it takes. Thanks for sharing.

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    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 10/26/2013 10:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : D!
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/26/2013 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Too too too tooo : )
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/25/2013 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I too too agree with Carrie :)
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 10/25/2013 2:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I too agree with Carrie : )
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Hi "Just"...Please don't think any of us are offended.We often have such discussions like this, with various opinions, and it is nice to share our different points of view. It doesn't mean anyone is upset. We share poetry, and it is a wonderful thing, that we don't all write (or think) alike. That is what keeps life interesting! :) When I speak of preferring free verse, over rhyme..I am only speaking as the writer (me) it comes more naturally. But I do love a wonderfully crafted rhyme poem..admire the skill it takes to do it well. Same with a free verse poem. Either can make me feel emotion and take me to that amazing "place" if done well. I do find free verse, more "me" however :)

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My Past Blog Posts

 
What's So Phunny?
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So Mad I Can't See Straight!!!!! : Seeing Stars
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Date Posted: 2/17/2014 4:22:00 PM
New/Old Collage Art Piece :)
Date Posted: 2/12/2014 12:39:00 AM
More Pentagram/Optical Art
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Date Posted: 2/3/2014 12:30:00 PM
Bionic Betty: Another True Tale from the Mental Ward!
Date Posted: 1/28/2014 10:13:00 PM
Memoir: Crashing "Women's Studies"; Feminists, BEWARE! lol
Date Posted: 1/25/2014 1:42:00 PM
My Pentagram Art; let me know what you think! :) ~Chan
Date Posted: 1/16/2014 6:08:00 AM
THE KING AND MASTER OF POETRY!!!!! KNEEL!
Date Posted: 1/7/2014 12:20:00 PM
Click for a Surprise...!?
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Do We, As Artists, Have The Right to Change Our Work?
Date Posted: 12/23/2013 11:12:00 AM
Coming Clean
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Paper-Cup Porsche: Memoir from the Mental Ward
Date Posted: 12/3/2013 8:38:00 AM
Collage Art: Warning, May Be Offensive!
Date Posted: 12/1/2013 5:13:00 AM
More Visual Poetry: Collage Art
Date Posted: 11/25/2013 7:48:00 AM
IT'S A TRAP!!!!!
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UP IN SMOKE! VISUAL POETRY! IN YOUR FACE, BISHES!
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My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
8/9/2014 Grey Area Rhymedark,truth,world,
8/9/2014 The Plot Thickens Rhymegod,judgement,life,truth,
8/9/2014 Glossophobic Light Poetryfear,world,
8/9/2014 Only God Knows and Time Will Tell Rhymechange,god,time,
4/3/2014 Anti-Psychotic Rhymepain,
3/22/2014 Science Friction Rhymespace,stars,
3/21/2014 An Exercise in Versatility Versepoetry,self,
3/19/2014 Pas de Deux Rhymelove,
3/18/2014 Do Not Read and Operate Heavy Machinery or Equipment Rhymedream,heart,poems,
3/6/2014 Inder the Unfluence Coupletdrink,humor,wine,
2/20/2014 Psychomanteum Rhymeheart,spiritual,
2/19/2014 Rosetta I do not know?confusion,nonsense,
2/19/2014 What's Weighing Heavy on My Heart Rhymelost love,
2/17/2014 She Sold Her Soul in a Bathroom Mirror Rhymeevil,satire,woman,
2/12/2014 The Last Son Rhymeart,truth,winter,
2/11/2014 What Gets On My Nerves Narrativeanger,angst,how i feel,
2/10/2014 Surgical Blue Free versehealth,me,satire,
2/8/2014 Restless Natives Sonnetboat,journey,ocean,
2/7/2014 Casting Couch Sonnetart,god,life,
2/5/2014 Hemlock Valentine Rhymedeath,fire,grave,heart,lo
2/4/2014 Veracious Vainglorious Vivacious Vixen: Very Virtuous, Very Vicious Rhymebeauty,woman,
2/1/2014 I'm Gonna Need a Transplant Rhymeabuse,addiction,drink,
1/31/2014 Assault and Pepper Rhymehow i feel,
1/28/2014 Bionic Betty: Another True Tale from the Mental Ward Narrativecrazy,woman,
1/26/2014 Nothing's New Rhymefun,morning,poems,sun,wom
1/25/2014 Memoir: Crashing Women's Studies- Feminists, BEWARE lol Narrativeart,funny,poetry,social,w
1/25/2014 Social Climber Rhymedeath,father,heaven,money
1/24/2014 Rubicons and Oubliettes Rhymeemotions,feelings,
1/23/2014 Water Brothers Rhymebeauty,brother,death,wate
1/7/2014 Poking the Beast Rhymeanger,fire,violence,
1/6/2014 Humble Pie, Anyone Prosehow i feel,introspection,
1/1/2014 Room Service Lyriclust,romance,sexy,
12/31/2013 One-Trick-Pony Rhyme 
12/18/2013 The Fool Rhymebaby,fun,horse,humorous,m
12/18/2013 Coming Clean Narrativeanger,conflict,introspect
12/17/2013 Perfectly Terrible Rhymeanger,beautiful,conflict,
12/3/2013 Paper-Cup Porsche: True Tale from the Mental Ward Narrativeblack african american,cr
12/3/2013 Gardens Grey Rhymebeauty,celebrity,characte
12/2/2013 Darth Exactitude Rhymecharacter,fantasy,star,wa
12/1/2013 All We Have is Hope Free versecancer,conflict,hope,how
11/28/2013 Absinthe Makes the Heart Grow Fonder Light Poetryheart,how i feel,lonely,l
11/28/2013 Twice the Christ Rhymechristian,death,god,humor
11/21/2013 I Think of You More Than You Think I Do Light Poetryheart,husband,i love you,
11/20/2013 Love is a Lie Rhymegod,heart,love,love hurts
11/11/2013 Have My Cake and Eat It, Too Rhymecrazy,future,self,vanity,
11/6/2013 Damage Control: An Apology Poem Rhymeheart,poets,sorry,
11/5/2013 From Great Pain Comes Great Inspiration Narrativeanger,bereavement,best fr
11/5/2013 Tug of War Rhymecrazy,pain,sorrow,war,
11/5/2013 Believe It or Not Rhymeanger,angst,god,lonely,lo
11/5/2013 As God As My Witness Rhymeconfusion,dream,joy,life,
11/4/2013 The Throne of Bone and Stone Rhymedream,sad,sin,sleep,world
11/3/2013 A Rational Explanation Rhymedeath,feelings,life,war,w
11/1/2013 Horrorscope Rhymechange,self,space,stars,
10/30/2013 Call Me Monday When I've Made My Millions Rhymedeath,heart,kiss,lost lov
10/29/2013 An Ounce of Pretention Rhymefuture,heart,
10/29/2013 Burning Man Rhymefire,grief,journey,sad,tr
10/28/2013 I'll Have Another, and Keep'em Comin' Rhymeangst,drink,heart,poets,s
10/28/2013 Glad-He-Ate-Her Rhymeanger,violence,war,
10/27/2013 Lazy Man Rhymelove,self,
10/27/2013 Escape Artist Rhymeheart,hope,lost love,poet
10/27/2013 Blackout Rhymedeath,faith,life,sorrow,w
10/26/2013 Around in Circles Rhymesleep,truth,
10/26/2013 A Journey Through Eternity Rhymeanger,future,happiness,ho
10/23/2013 Exercising My Demons Rhymeevil,heaven,religion,
10/23/2013 Knock, Knock Rhymecrazy,heart,self,song,sor
10/17/2013 Damn You, Eve Rhymedance,heaven,innocence,lo
10/17/2013 Romance the Chance Rhymebeauty,dance,hate,journey
10/17/2013 The One Least Likely Rhymeemotions,sorrow,
10/17/2013 Try as They Might Rhymeart,people,poems,poetry,p
10/15/2013 In the Meantime Rhymepain,
10/14/2013 It's Hard to be a Rhymer in a Free-Verse World Rhymeart,poetry,
10/14/2013 A God Among Men Rhymebody,heart,men,sky,
10/12/2013 You Love Me More Than You Love Yourself Light Poetrychildren,grave,love,my ch
10/12/2013 Spreading the Seed Rhymedesire,fun,lust,sexy,
10/12/2013 Burying the Hatchet Rhymegrief,pain,time,today,
10/11/2013 What Would You Take Contest Entry Narrativefriend,husband,lost,music
10/11/2013 Run for Your Lives--Them's Fightin' Words Rhymeconflict,fear,friend,pain
10/11/2013 I'll Drink to That Rhymeaddiction,drink,marriage,
10/10/2013 Angel in Your Eyes Contest Entry Rhymeangel,
10/10/2013 Why Can't I Be Young, Rich and Thin Narrativeart,beauty,desire,imagina
10/8/2013 Take Two and Call Me in the Morning Rhymeangst,sick,
10/7/2013 Twenty-Below Zero Rhymetime,trust,
10/5/2013 You and I and I and You Free verseanger,beautiful,corruptio
10/4/2013 Leave a Message After the Beep Free verseabsence,dark,death,drink,
10/3/2013 Delusions of Grandeur- Bon Voyage Rhymejourney,stars,time,world,
10/3/2013 The Verdict Is In Rhymeevil,time,violence,
10/3/2013 Alone with My Thoughts Rhymecolor,death,pain,truth,
10/2/2013 PHARM Fresh Rhymeaddiction,love,
9/29/2013 A Happy Ending Rhymehappiness,life,love,pain,
9/29/2013 No Assembly Required Light Poetrydeath,flying,travel,
9/29/2013 Come Out, Come Out- Wherever You Are Rhymelost,pain,peace,sleep,
9/26/2013 Playing with Fire Rhymeanger,fire,heart,violence
9/26/2013 Strange Bathfellows Rhymebooks,humorous,insect,
9/25/2013 I'll Gladly Pay You Tuesday Light Poetryfood,money,
9/25/2013 Meet Me Halfway Rhymelost love,violence,
9/25/2013 Thank You Lord, Amen Rhymeevil,god,sick,sorrow,time
9/25/2013 To Make Matters Worse Rhymedeath,dream,friend,love,s
9/24/2013 The Truth Isn't Always Kind Rhymelife,truth,
9/24/2013 Hammer to a Concrete Heart Rhymefear,heart,writing,
9/23/2013 Life is Sweet in Honey-Hives Rhymeflower,life,sweet,

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Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
The King of Sanctimonious Rhymehumorous,metaphor,
A Beautiful Love Free verselove,relationship,
Death Will Not Come For Me Rhymedeath,evil,life,magic,
Leonardo DiCaprio Rhymecelebrity,film,for him,ho
ALCOHOL Free verseaddiction,
Chaff vs Wheat - Relief Rhymeangst,goodbye,lost love,r
Fate's Occasion Iambic Pentameterbeautiful,beauty,emotions
Heaven For A Poet Rhymedream,fantasy,heaven,insp
Nevermore Rhymehorror,poetry,tribute,wri
The Dead Of Winter Quatraindark,death,lonely,winter,
Oh Love, Fair Love Rhymeloss,lost love,lovelife,l
William part 2 Balladeblack african american,gr
Bending Backward Ballad 
Popcorn Music Rhyme 
Rhyme Master Couplet 
The Horde's Prayer Verseangel,
Come Sit by My Side Tail-rhymefor her,marriage,moving o
Dreaming Couplethumor,humorous,poets,
Shocks Of Electrifying Emotion Rhymelove,romantic,
A Dedication To The Man Rhymededication,friendship,
SWITCH magazine Free versededication,hope,life,love
The Other Side Rhymeabsence,allegory,analogy,
DUFFY DEAN Rhymecat,
In Search Free versebeautiful,bible,god,
Pirates Cove Rhymefunny,humorous,poetry,sea

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