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I am a character In search of my author Walking great distances in a circle Wishing for a plot Wanting a destination Perhaps a soliloquy Please fill my lips with your words If you wish I will play the fool You be my King I am yours to rule For too long I have been without a script From a confused heart my thoughts have dripped Within your story I wish to be gripped The Author of me From whom I have roamed Through your scriptures I will comb Till I learn the lines that lead me home As I study please capture my mind Till within my spirit we are intertwined Light from light no longer blind You are the beginning and completion of me Apart from you I cease to be Thankyou, Thankyou for helping me see The part of Your story written for me

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Huberta Van Akkeren

Date: 3/4/2014 6:54:00 PM

The is awesome...i love verse that has layers of meaning...very well written, i love the humility of the last line. Cheers Huberta

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2014 7:02:00 PM

Thanks for your kind visit and thoughtful comment.

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 2/10/2014 9:40:00 AM

Surprised to see me, old friend? Well, wonderfully enough, I understood this poem quite well and marveled at your creativity and the crafty way you wrote this. It's really quite stunning, and you know if this is coming from me about a free-verse, that's saying a lot lol. I loved the message and sentiments expressed. Never, EVER thought I would "fave" a "free-verser", but this is exceptional and exquisite. Loved it, Richard :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/10/2014 10:05:00 AM

Cool, I'm happy to hear that, because you have made my day on more than one occasion with your praise and reviews of my work. Glad I could reciprocate :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2014 9:55:00 AM

You just made my day Chan!

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 2/9/2014 9:43:00 AM

absolutley awesome poem Richard, well put, I love the way you did this, seeking the author. Great work.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2014 6:43:00 AM

Good morning Gwen, thanks for taking time to comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2014 9:02:00 PM

wow, Richard, what an amazing poem this is. Monterey sees it as spiritual and it is obviously about God, but the romantic in me is seeing it as a love poem !! a fave!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2014 12:15:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I hadn't thought of it that way but in looking at it I can see your perspective. Thanks for faving my poem.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/6/2014 8:31:00 AM

Love it! Faith is a constant journey, always something ahead to lead us deeper.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2014 10:23:00 AM

So true.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/6/2014 6:37:00 AM

This is very beautiful..The author of your life bless us by giving us you as a character so wonderful to read and acknowledge.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2014 10:24:00 AM

Awes what a sweet thing to say. I think he was at his best when he made you.

Sarai Virden

Date: 2/6/2014 4:16:00 AM

A heartfelt cry of faith my friend. Simply beautiful!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2014 7:17:00 AM

Wow, that sounds uncomfortable. It is good you have a way to distract yourself. I hope you have a quick recovery.

Sarai Virden
Date: 2/6/2014 6:01:00 AM

Oregon, I had neck surgery Last week and now this angelic halo keeps me awake. So I stroll the night in the sleeping halls of Poetry Soup. Just simply love soaking in all the talent and heart the Soupers have. Hope you are well dear one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2014 5:27:00 AM

You are up early, where are you from? Thanks for the early morning visit.

Jerry Bolton

Date: 2/5/2014 4:19:00 PM

Ahhh . . . Our poems coincide pretty much today. I hear you reaching out for help. I did that for years, trying to come to terms with it all. I wish you luck in your endeavor, and I have a feeling you will come out the winner.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2014 5:35:00 PM

I've been fortunate to have already come to terms with God many years ago. I am however still a work in progress, I never know what new lines he has ready for me to learn.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/5/2014 10:22:00 AM

Richard....on the verge of tears....God bless...Can't say more....A favorite

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2014 10:26:00 AM

I am thankful God is such a good planner.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/5/2014 10:35:00 AM

"For I know the plans I have for you,"says the Lord. "Plans to prosper and not to harm you. Plans to give you hope and a future." One of God's greatest promises recorded in the book of Jeremiah.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2014 10:29:00 AM

Thanks Eileen, that means a lot to me.