Water Brothers

"Brightly, brightly, and with Beauty", quoted Mr. Valentine. In fullness Grok; to cherish, flock- this Ghost of Yours and Mine. I've decided to discorporate at this friendly hour. Water Brothers, don't hesitate- I am yours to devour! *Homage to "Stranger in a Strange Land". If you've never read the book, this poem will be quite difficult to understand, I'm afraid.

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 3/12/2014 7:51:00 PM

Fantastic work here Archaic. I never read the book but I love the feelings felt when I perused this one. It will be added to my favorites from you. Keep smiling my friend until next time we meet again. But for now I'm off again. Keep well okay : ) Adieu

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/13/2014 11:49:00 AM

Great to see you, friend Mustapha! You have been sorely missed; thanks for dropping in on me. I always appreciate when you stop by and thank you for the warm compliments :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 1/23/2014 10:41:00 PM

Great poem Chan, and I definitely Grok, having read this Heinlein years ago. This is poetry of a high order.

Mark Peterson
Date: 1/24/2014 9:51:00 AM

Yes, you increased my appetite.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 1/24/2014 7:52:00 AM

I'm glad "cannibalism" can be considered "high order" lol. Most people will not grok that that's what the poem is essentially about, in the Martian custom, of course. Thanks for the review, Mark :)