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Rhyme Master

Rhyme Master Should I hearken or heed From bondage I’ll be freed For, Beat, Rhyme and Song To Angels they belong! **Dedicated to Just That Archaic Poet for his unending pursuit of Rhythm! 11th Oct’ 2013

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/19/2013 5:10:00 PM

Must go and visit the poetry of Just That Archaic Poet! Thanks for sharing! Very well penned, Joseph! Have a nice week-end Blessings, Hanitra

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/21/2013 5:24:00 AM

Archaic is one hell of a great poet. You'll enjoy him! Friend, JM

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/15/2013 10:01:00 AM

What an amazing poem....I do like rhythm and beat. You have captured this well...Thanks for your recent visits to my work. You have left such encouraging posts. I wanted to make sure to come and thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/15/2013 10:30:00 AM

YOU'RE SUCH AN AMAZING POET. YOU REALLY WRITE FROM YOUR HEART. WHY ARE YOU NOT A MUSICIAN? (JOKE!). YOU'RE SO CAPTIVATING. THANKS. JM

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/14/2013 12:36:00 AM

Hi Joseph, A nice write penned with honor...thanks for visiting my humble verse... Ken

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/14/2013 12:43:00 AM

Hie Ken, I appreciate your comment. Thanks a lot Buddy! JM

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/13/2013 5:27:00 PM

Archaic certainly is a master of rhyme and should be acknowledged as such. Awesome poem and rhyme here :)

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/14/2013 12:52:00 AM

Thanks for having and sharing my point of view. It's blatantly true! I promise to visit your work without fail, Karen. Friend JM

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2013 8:31:00 AM

- A lovely tribute to a friend !!! - Have a nice autumn Sunday, Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/14/2013 12:50:00 AM

Anne!!! Great comment. I appreciate your regular visit to my poems. Have a nice day. Friend JM.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/13/2013 2:38:00 AM

Nearer to Beat, Rhyme and Song we come More like Angels in heavens we become! Brilliant couplet: An angel's voice!

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/13/2013 7:40:00 AM

I also love the beat in your short and compact poems. I've since learned a lot by reading your work. Keep it up. I admire your maturity in poetry. Friend JM

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 10/11/2013 2:06:00 PM

Joseph, I am humbled to my core. This poem is beyond beautiful and touching. The thoughtfulness warms my heart immeasurably. I cannot thank you enough for this tribute; means more to me than I can express with mere words. I feel so incredibly and indescribably blessed to have met so many astonishingly supportive and wonderful people here. "Thank you" is not adequate enough to describe my gratefulness. You are one hell of a guy, and my appreciation for you runs deeper than you can know, my friend

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/11/2013 2:09:00 PM

Archaic deserves praise for his well thought out work. I know the pangs of writing rhyme. You turn, twist & stretch your thinking capacity in order to create perfect that stirs souls. Other forms of poetry reflect the same strenuous effort which I shall not denigrate. Thanks and Good Night Rose! JM