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Pas De Deux

All our Love's vicissitudes, Our amorous, glamorous attitudes Two Hearts pounding, the grand resounding With sincerest gratitude In Perfect Passion, ardor action, Paramours enraptured fashion To you devoted, the walls have folded I lose myself in your attraction... Everything I have given you, My Heart, my Soul, my Pas de Deux Together forever, this sweet endeavor, Until at last we say adieu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2014 8:13:00 PM
Wow. Wow. Awesome. You make it sound so easy. ~Teresa
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Date: 3/21/2014 8:37:00 AM
Thanks, hon :)
Date: 3/20/2014 7:44:00 PM
Love the use of French & the internal rhyme - rhyme on Light & love
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Date: 3/21/2014 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, my dear Debbie <3 :)
Date: 3/19/2014 4:13:00 PM
LOVE IT! How romantic :)
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Date: 3/20/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thanks, Bish! ;)
Date: 3/19/2014 2:36:00 PM
Lovely, Chan...see? I agree...it's so sweet when things RHYME! By the way...read your previous poem as well...the one Chris commented on...wanted to sing the words like Freddie Mercury! It was sweet. I tried posting on it earlier...something went wrong. Great poems here. You rocked the show with Drake! Love your accent. :) Sorry my reading was bunk. Got flustered with the time element as sort of rushed it! Oh well...Next time.
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Date: 3/20/2014 9:49:00 AM
Your reading was just fine, Eileen. I loved that you called in and read your beautiful poem. Thanks so much for all the kind words and compliments. You have made my morning that much more wonderful <3
Date: 3/19/2014 12:23:00 PM
Pass the ducks, let's sing this 'un together, forever. Love it.
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Date: 3/19/2014 12:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rick; I do appreciate it :)

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