Come Out, Come Out- Wherever You Are

With Peace of Mind just in my grasp, I fall from Cliffs of Catastrophe Before I wake, subconscious lapse- Snapping me back to "Reality" From which I run, I flee- evade, I must escape at any cost! To elude the Pain and Problems made Which wear me thin and leave me lost...

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/27/2014 5:28:00 PM

This is an epic poem. Glad I stumbled upon this one, trying to find my sister's poem called Come Out (a collab me and my sis wrote). This one's fantastic. Love these two first lines: With Peace of Mind just in my grasp, I fall from Cliffs of Catastrophe. Awesome from beginning to end!

Robin Davis

Date: 12/20/2013 6:24:00 PM

Chan Chan I will catch you when you fall and make sure your reality doesn't wear you thin or break you. And if I can't we can share a rubber room together LOL Thanks for the amazing comment on my Protected Heart poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/21/2013 7:57:00 AM

Thanks, Sweet Pea <3

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/26/2013 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for the fave, Chan! Added you also! Now this poem! Brother! Your last line...WOWSER! Your writes accomplish what real poetry does for me....lets my mind wander endlessly....imagining scenarios within! TO MINE FAVES! Am on my way to end of the year open-air market with Ma (she's 84, like to get her outside) for Thai-Pepper bushes the farmers pull @at frost and sell for $1.00! Will stop back tonite! Best.....jimbo

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 9:38:00 AM

I am humbled that you added me as a fave, also; warms this cold little black heart of mine lol. Look forward to your reviews. Thanks for the compliments, and hope you have heaps of fun today :)

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/1/2013 10:46:00 AM

Your mastery with words has been noted. You marshal words with adeptness that leaves nothing to be desired. What a poem...JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/1/2013 11:03:00 AM

You both humble me and make me smile with your words, Joseph; I appreciate them more than you can know :)