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I feel quiet; most serene- the rage that swells in me subsides... Limpid dreams and silent streams (Eden scenes and sleepy tides) Tranquil themes, untroubled times- patient, placid, peaceful Minds. Unruffled rest, sedated crest; Reconciled determined Rhymes fill my brain with calming cleanse; focused thoughts through laser lens. Cool, collected directed pens- From the Heart my poems stem.

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/18/2018 11:59:00 AM

This is a perfectly peaceful piece of art!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/24/2014 11:55:00 AM

This is one good poem. Thanks for sharing Many blessings... Lucilla

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/25/2014 3:08:00 PM

Thank you, Lucilla :)

Teresa Godwin

Date: 3/20/2014 8:09:00 PM

A coool silvery sip of water. Ahh just lovely! I liiike this. ~Teresa

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/21/2014 8:39:00 AM

What a lovely description, Teresa. You just have me the biggest smile :D

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/19/2014 8:46:00 PM

Is the title longer than the poem? Both however are excellent, which adds up to a great read. Nice flow, and pleasing to read of the big calm. Well done. Oh my peeing collection have been up for a while, so patiently awaiting your thoughts (plug, plug). Cheers my good man.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/20/2014 9:45:00 AM

Sorry, Scott; forgot all about it. I will have a look as soon as I get back from my dr.'s appt. and thanks so much my friend :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/19/2014 1:48:00 PM

I got so much out of this verse. It's really heartwarming. I also love the line, "focused thoughts through laser lens." Man, did this verse just flow... and I loved it! Better shut up no before I write a novel! Always, Laura

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/20/2014 9:46:00 AM

No, no, Laura! Please do write a novel lol. Your comments have made my morning and I appreciate it sooo much. Thank you, my sweet friend <3

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/19/2014 1:46:00 PM

"Reconciled determined Rhymes" and "Cool, collected directed pens-".... I understand these lines so well now that I have had the privilege of getting to know you on the site. For sure your poetry comes straight from your hear t and that is evident in all of your work, whether it be blogs, art or your poetry verses. I think you bring out another excellent point--and that is the emphasis on peace.. the solace one can receive from not just writing... but writing from the heart... --

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/20/2014 9:47:00 AM

Your kind compliments have warmed my heart sincerely, Laura. A million thanks <3 :)

Rick Richardson

Date: 3/19/2014 1:37:00 PM

Freddy would be quite pleased with this rhapsody. Filled my brain with pastel rhymes. Enjoyed!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/20/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thanks, Rick :)