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Shocks of Electrifying Emotion

There is a magnetic field That is keeping my love sealed A force so strong it is intense Just like and electric fence That shocks me each time we touch But I just can't get enough Of this static overflow I am just about to blow And release a shock so large The amount of my discharge Will send waves of love right through The core, soul and heart of you You will know my love is real With the heat your body feels The tazeing I will supply Is coming out of my eyes Beams of romance I will shoot At you looking very cute All this energy is warm Like and electrical storm Flashing bolts of big bright light Making a romantic night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/25/2013 5:58:00 AM
You go girl. You are all charged up like the every ready bunny. I can feel the tingle from here.
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Date: 11/22/2013 6:35:00 AM
I absolutely felt the electricity in this piece; I felt it as I read it and totally loved it. This is going into my "faves" for sure, Sweet Pea! I think this is one of the best things you've written <3
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Date: 11/15/2013 6:31:00 PM
This poem is very creative and unique, Robin! Love can definitely feel electrifying at times! I really like this poem, your descriptions are great here. Really good work!...Thank you very much for the wonderful comments on my poem! :)
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