I'M Gonna Need a Transplant

A sip of whisky, a little nipsky- for my liver this is risky! Cirrhosis bound, by ultrasound, but still I feel a little frisky Does it matter, when to Death are shackled, and we join earth's Kings and Queens? Time, the force, we cannot battle- I've seen it in my Dreams!

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/3/2014 9:28:00 PM

Jack's poem that I just Tweeted has added near 20 reads in about 1 min. So here goes. I haven't looked at the numbers here but cross your fingers.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/4/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thanks, Scott. So happy to have you as a partner in this, my friend :)

Chris Boskovski

Date: 2/3/2014 6:54:00 PM

A nicely expressed poem, I love it! Creatively written! :) Great Job! :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/4/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thanks so much, Chris; much appreciated :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/3/2014 4:46:00 PM

Nicely expressed but it has a little saddness to it, enjoyed just the same though. cheri

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/4/2014 9:49:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and for the read and reply, Cherl :)

David Williams

Date: 2/3/2014 4:38:00 PM

a great write, I like it a lot....David

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/4/2014 9:49:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, David; thanks for dropping by :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/2/2014 9:45:00 PM

Drink heaps of water and convince yourself that your flushing your liver just fine, and that'll save you for years. That's what I do anyway, so don't be telling me different! Due to our current arrangement I feel that I should tweet a link to all that you do. A little investigation lately shows that my links are likely to have a measurable effect on the number of reads that the linked poem gets. So what do ya think?

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/3/2014 6:41:00 AM

Feel free to tweet away, my friend! :)

Sophia Valentina

Date: 2/1/2014 2:11:00 PM

Clever. My liver's not too far off as well...why the possessive on Kings and Queens? Soup mail turned on...btw.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/4/2014 9:51:00 AM

I don't know why my brain adds things that aren't needed and contrariwise, forgets to add words. I think the word, but forget to type it!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/1/2014 2:43:00 PM

Has there not been more than one King and Queen is earth's long history?